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Reviews for What You Deserve

By : flippykitten
  • From Dreamfool on September 28, 2007
    An interesting oneshot. It's also a good filler scene.
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  • From ANON - Miracle on December 02, 2006
    Damn...
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  • From ANON - Ta Boo on December 02, 2006
    Beautiful story. Not many writers can get into Sephiroth's mind, but you did it perfectly. You wrote him so in-character. Good job!
    I love how you pointed out that Cloud's weakness is that he never got into SOLDIER. It's little references to the game like that, that I love.
    I don't agree with Christy. I liked the start. It gave a good perspective on when the story is set.
    I would have liked a bit more reaction from Cloud at the end, when Sephiroth assumed Cloud was trying to steal the Black Materia though
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  • From ANON - dreamcatcher on November 26, 2006
    Thank you so much to those who reviewed. It's greatly appreciated. And a shout-out to Christy for the constructive criticism. It's always good to know when a fic lags so it can be fixed and/or handled differently in a future fic. (Rehashing canon/monologuing. Oy.) :)
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  • From ANON - Christy on November 25, 2006
    Hey! It's Christy, just dropping a line. I have to admit, the beginning didn't catch my interest at first. It was kind of mleh. But then....once you started delving into Sephiroth's mind....and the lifestream...it became a sonnet of words. They flowed beautifully, and Sephiroth seemed......perfectly Sephiroth, not good...not evil...just Sephiroth.
    It comes down to one word. Extravagance.
    ~Tori Singer
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  • From ANON - squallpaine sephirothpaine on November 20, 2006
    Love it! Hope to read some more in the future!
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  • From KiaraExodus on November 18, 2006
    This is really good. Keep going!
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  • From horrorgal on November 18, 2006
    Once again you have written a great piece of work. Beautifully done. I love your description, so intense, so sexy. Absolutely brilliant!
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