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By : lilypad
  • From RaceUlfson on February 18, 2007
    I like that Reno is tops - he doesn't get to top in many of the fics I've read - but Cloud isn't a total melting uke. I like his softer, vulnerable side, yes, but I admire the way you've presented it so neither man is feminine.
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  • From RaceUlfson on February 18, 2007
    What, Vincent felt a disturbance in the force and rushed off to save Cloud's virtue? I'm sure Reno would love to strangle him with his red hair scarf thing.

    I love blanket fics and the visuals of the two of them by the fire was... mmm. Nice build up, too. It's a rare pairing but I can feel the chemistry.
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  • From RaceUlfson on February 18, 2007
    Oo, so Reno is feeling a little soft and protective of Cloud, too?

    I like the way you show them slowly working out how to work together.

    What worries me is, if Something really is scary enough to go after Cloud, how can Reno be expected to stop it?
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on February 17, 2007
    damn, that was low, cloud. *shakes head* i can't wait to see how reno fixes this. looking foward to your next update.
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  • From KDSarge on February 12, 2007
    time's up indeed. uh oh!

    More??? *makes puppy eyes*
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  • From on February 12, 2007
    Cloud was still sound asleep with both hands tucked under his chin

    LOL, I do that when I sleep to. But just one hand under my chin.

    Good update! I'm loving this fic alot!
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  • From KDSarge on February 03, 2007
    mmmm...
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  • From KDSarge on February 03, 2007
    Reno had to laugh at the image of Tifa standing over a bunch of tough guys on their knees scrubbing a sooty floor
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  • From KDSarge on February 03, 2007
    hee hee, a sleepover! I love!
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  • From KDSarge on February 03, 2007
    (chapter three) hee hee, that's it, Reno, watch Cloud CLOSELY, now...
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  • From KDSarge on February 03, 2007
    yay, new bike! *wanders on to next chapter*
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  • From on January 28, 2007
    HOLY SHIT!!!! Reno fucking Cloud!!! Oh, hot damn! *needs a shower* I don’t see that much! This was really enjoyable *nods, nods*
    Reno: Yeah, so follow what she’s doing.
    *kicks my muse*
    My Cloud’s not so willing to my Reno.
    I love this alot, can’t wait for the next update!!!

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  • From AkitoSouma on January 27, 2007
    Love, love, love. I want more. Eeek! The make-out scene between Cloud and Reno was so sweet, and long anticipated. And gosh to goodness, you had so many clever lines in here that cracked me up. I was nearly crying, it was so funny.
    Tifa's smile faded. "Why are you watching him, Reno? You practically dog his every step."
    "The truth? I have no fucking clue."
    And lines like that...Wow. You've got Reno's character down pat. Cloud, I'm not so sure. He started off great, but he becomes so talkative later. Do you think he'd really talk so much, even if he was falling in love with someone? And he seemed unusually bold to initiate that kiss with Reno. I thought Cloud was more shy than that. It was difficult to tell exactly when the two of them started becoming attracted to each other, too. You did explain it a little bit, but it didn't seem sufficient. You'd think there'd be more absent-minded gazing in the beginning. Or something.
    Anyway, regardless of those things that I'm not entirely sure I agree with, I loved this story and I love you for writing it. Please, pretty please, update it soon, okay?
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  • From on January 25, 2007
    OMG!! The ending just made laugh so hard! I almost choked on my coffee!!

    Damn, that was good. I don’t see Reno being the seme much with Cloud. He is the seme right? XD, it seems it. Update soon!

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  • From mjx017 on January 24, 2007
    Please continue!! ;) Veyr nice job!
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