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Reviews for The Kisses and the Bruises

By : VampireMooglez
  • From ANON - ReaperRain on June 01, 2007
    Ooh! So...damn...good! I wanna know what happens! If you would be so kind, could you possibly email me when you update? I know it's a bit much to ask, but it'll allow me to keep up with the story, which means I can keep reviewing! The idea is very original, the characters beautifully described - and I quite like how you've introduced characters from other final fantasy games as well. Hope you update soon!
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  • From synthetikmancer on May 05, 2007
    -_- It cut me off. You know, I really am starting to hate these review boxes. xD ...

    But I went on to babble about adoring Irvine and thinking that Squall wasn't so bad himself. Anything else.. I have no idea anymore. Oh.. And "ove" was supposed to be "love" ......


    And with my rambling done for the time being.... I'll give you some peace. ..And quiet....


    Ra
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  • From synthetikmancer on May 05, 2007
    >.> ...Gingerbreadmen..? o O

    ...And I know what I said the first time around... And I still mean it. I just have neglected to notice that you even updated until I saw this earlier... >.> ..And I still ove this as much as I did before. *smiles softly* .. Especially since you mentioned Vincent. >
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  • From DB2020 on May 02, 2007
    Wonderful story. I can't wait to read more. While Seifer/Squall will always be my favorite pairing, you won me over with cute little Irvine and Squall as the reluctant guardian.
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  • From RyokoPorter on April 23, 2007
    it's adorible so far... i'd really like to read more
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  • From synthetikmancer on March 21, 2007
    O_O Dude... That's it? ... That was awesome. I loved the idea. And ideas you had floating at the top. xD But the plot you have developing is beautiful. I mean, usually I look and I find something... And when I read it, it isn't anything like what I expected and that's a bad thing. This was... Much better. And with not that many noticable errors. (I'm generally a grammar geek so that was supposed to be a compliment.) I mean.. Some of the stuff out there is just.... xD

    But anyway. Now I'm babbling. And I should probably head off to sleep. But I had to tell you I really enjoyed what you posted. I think I'd be depressed if you stopped. :)


    Ra
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  • From ANON - delonariel on March 01, 2007
    I really like the plot you have going on here. And the fact that it's Squall and Irvy ^^ Hope to see more soon
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  • From ANON - RedSpade on February 22, 2007
    Sounds Great!!! I'm Really interested in reading more!
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  • From ANON - Plushie Doll on February 21, 2007
    >_< Oh, Squall being a daddy! I love it so far. I love SqXIrv, almost as much as I like it when Irvy makes Squally his cute little uke, but I guess the taller one can't always be on the top so I like to read it the other way around too... okay I'm ramblin'. I was scared for a bit after seeing it was Irvy and Squall, thinking oh no it's a shota, but then you said you were jumping ahead and I was like psyched. Gah, I can't wait. Update soon please!
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  • From Sharon20 on February 19, 2007
    It's a very interesting beginning and your writing is refreshing among the sea of incoherent drabbles that wannabe writers post so frequently on this site. It doesn't say so in the summary, but this is an Alternate Universe, so there should probably be a little warning up. I like how you've done the characters, though there are some moments of OOCness, the storyline is interesting enough for me to look past that. Although I'm looking forward to the next chapter, knowing the pairing is a big part of staying with a storyline for me. Even if it’s a spoiler, you have to take into consideration that fanfiction readers are generally shipping on certain pairings. I become agitated when authors don’t even know the proper way of presenting the pairings in the summary, not realizing the difference between Seifer/Squall and Squall/Seifer. That stated, I guarantee that there are a lot of readers who won’t even bother reading your story without knowing the pairing. Reading your author’s note, it seems like you’re dead set against revealing the coupling, but I recommend you reconsider. Just like posting the proper warnings about this being Yaoi, and hopefully putting up an AU warning, it’s just as important to state the pairing. For some, reading a Squall/Irvine fic instead of a Irvine/Squall fic is the difference between reading Yaoi instead of Hetero.

    Oh, one last thing… I see that I’m the first to review. If you’re not wondering why so few have reviewed, I can say that I was curious since this is a pretty decent piece, even for a first chapter. You have it set so that no anonymous reviews may be given. While this may be intentional, I thought I’d point it out in case it wasn’t. You’d be surprised at how many people won’t review if they have to log in. Anyway, for more feedback, just go to your profile and uncheck the option for logged in reviews only.

    Good job, looking forward to more!

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