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Reviews for If Zack Lived...Silly Thoughts

By : Wondera
  • From ANON - Prince Lex on June 12, 2008
    Zack x Cloud is my favourite pairing, and I've spent a lot of time looking for a LONG fic with lots of chapters that deals with the idea of this fic. (Where Zack lives and he and Cloud get to enjoy each other in many ways as though they were both part of the original game).

    So far I like this one, please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - strife-lover on October 05, 2007
    Haha, I'm actually registered on ff.net, but their server is down right now so I couldn't look for this fic on there and review on that one. Anyways, it was really cute...and I love all of your A/Ns in there...very funny side comments. But...to honestly say, I seriously don't like Sephiroth and Cloud....T_T I much prefer Sephiroth and Zack, I think they'd make a much cuter couple...though I love this could too!! =D

    I remember reading somewhere in your A/N that Zack was your fav character....O_o...he's one of my top 3 characters! xD

    Strife-lover (that's my name on ff.net though I don't write and final fantasy fics...haha)
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  • From ANON - Amarissia on June 28, 2007
    Like where you're going! More, please?
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  • From Wondera on June 13, 2007
    "Zack said, his voice cool, it seemed," - it only SEEMED to be cool, it secretly wasn't though.


    It wasn’t his first time being kissed but at least it was consensual (Wut does THAT mean?!). - I know what that means. I found out last night while I was making it true.

    Zack kissed Cloud’s cheek softly but consecutively at least 8 times - Simultaniously for two years!


    Soon Zack pushed himself away, smiling sleazily, drool falling out of his mouth and into Cloud’s. - I like that mental picture....(me too)

    Raiden: okie!! (strips) Look! I'm naked!!! - The saf thing is ... it's in his personality.

    Bye. Bye. I'll see you in about two seconds when I turn to me left. unless if I melt of course.
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  • From ANON - nomatter on June 07, 2007
    Girl... you are insane ¬¬
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  • From fmalust on May 11, 2007
    When does the action start, if you know what I mean? ^_~
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  • From Venks on May 08, 2007
    I LOVE this story. Zack is definately my favorite character and his personallity is dead on in my opinion. My favorite part was when Cloud protected Zack from Barret. I was jumping up in down, it was awesome. I hope you'll post again soon and keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - fmalust on April 24, 2007
    Noooo, moooooooooore!! ;-; That was the best-est story I've ever read that didn't show any yaoi action yet! I demand more! ~Gives you sugar cookies~ Please? ("')^o^('")~
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  • From ANON - SeveredWing on April 21, 2007
    My only complaint is that this chapter is too short, but if it means they are posted more often than it's a small price to pay! :) And there's nothing wrong about delving into a character's thoughts. In my humble opinion, knowing what a character is thinking is essential to a story like this, particularly this chapter where there is minimal dialogue between the characters. Just think of it as "internal dialogue".

    Besides, how else are we to know how Zack and Cloud feel about one another?
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  • From ANON - Chris-no-Baka on April 20, 2007
    just for the record, cloud is adorable. lol and his stiry is adorable too. :) bu yeah, i've never played ff7 so i don't know who zack is, but i do know the rest of everyone, though zack does sound like a lovely character indeed. :) also, i don't believe that you ramble too much. i thin the story flowed rather nicely.
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  • From ANON - vailea on April 20, 2007
    Hello,and thanks for add another chap.
    First you story is great,really!! and of course many of us would like Zack to live,he is one of the truly forgotten heros of the whole plot,i mean he saved little Cloud from the lab tank,he fought Seph!!hell,his my favourite!!(¨^_^) i know you must know that too) but my point is:Go! Go! and write whatever you want,i´ll support you.
    bye
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  • From SeveredWing on April 19, 2007
    I'm absolutely loving it so far, though I'm a little curious to know why you tacked on "Silly Thoughts" at the end of the title. The only silliness I've come across so far is Zack's usual exuberant behavior...and Barrett. For whatever reasons he makes me laugh, shake my head, or both.

    I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't keep your readers in suspense for too long!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2007
    This is pretty good....I hope to read more in the future.
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  • From ANON - kittiekat on April 14, 2007
    Very good job, Damon! I -love- stories involving Zack and Cloud ^^ and the scenes you write are very active. The way Zack and Cloud are so protective of each other is very sweet, and the conflict that Barret presents is very promising for interesting scenes. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the up-coming chapters. Please continue writing!
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