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Reviews for Burning Desires

By : ChronoDragon
  • From MyValenwind on November 25, 2009
    OMFG MOAR!
    Please? This is beyond delicious. Amazing work.
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  • From nekogirl1 on November 29, 2008
    Wow, very different idea & plot so far. Poor Vincent, lucky for him he has Reno. Curious to see what Rude's gonna do next
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  • From vivarose on September 11, 2008
    Hooray an update! I do enjoy this story so much! Its incredibly cute and heartbreaking.
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  • From RayneForrest on July 19, 2008
    What an intriging story this is! Great work! Only a few minor errors that I could see, and as another reviewer mentioned, the descriptiveness could be a bit more. But all in all, this is a fantastic story! Very hot! (Reno/Vin parts, cause what Rude did is soo wrong! *glares evilly at the bald dude*)

    I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next! I love the way you portrayed Vincent. Innocent as a child, accepting of his role as a 'pet', as if he knows no other way of being treated, which, in fact, he doesn't. I feel the utmost compassion for him with all the abuse he had to endure growing up and being 'trained'. Poor Vin *gives him a hug*

    Hope Reno is able to look past his own feelings and forgive Vincent, though, no forgiveness is needed, since Vin was only doing what he thought he was supposed to. Reno needs to teach Vin that it's okay to feel things and express himself, he has to help Vin learn all this stuff that he should have years ago. Teach him how to trust, show him that he no longer has to be afraid, he's no longer at that horrible place, and Reno is not like those other people and will treat him differently. And, of course, that he should enjoy sex and express that, just as much as Reno does. *wink wink*
    Reno has his work cut out for him...he has to teach Vin soo many things.

    And for Gaia's sake, Reno, get the man some more clothes! Does he really have to go walkin' 'bout in that faded dress outside? I mean, sure, buy him a new dress and panties for the privacy of your bedroom... But, by all the Ancients, he needs proper outdoor attire!

    How funny would it be if Vin learned some 'new' words from the tv?
    Vincent: *looks up to his master, confused* "Master, what is...a hooker?"
    lol
    (I actually did ask my grandmother what that was when I was like 10 or 11 and we were watching some cop/detective type show.)

    Reno needs to give Rude a serious ass kickin', yo! Put that rapist in a world a hurt! Poor Vinny! *snif* His 'master' didn't come to rescue him.

    And that 'Going out of business' sale... Yeah, riiight. They'll be long gone now, before the cops can trace them.
    Damn those human traffickers! They need to be thrown in Shin-Ra's deepest, darkest dungeon!

    Reno: *a little surprised* "Shin-Ra has dungeons, yo?"

    -- Yeah, of course. Where'd ya think Rufus has been spending all that 'recovery' time?

    Reno: *smirks* "So that explains it."

    -- Mm-hmm. He also wanted things ta be ready for you...

    Reno: *eyes wide* "WHAT??!!"

    -- Oops! That was supposed ta be Rufus' secret surprise...somethin' 'bout a job well done savin' him from that net.

    Reno: *thinks to himself -- So that's what the boss meant by an 'extra special' bonus... Emphasis on bone.* "...er...Suddenly remembered somethin' I gotta do." *makes a mad dash...away from or to the Shin-Ra building he has yet to decide*

    Anyway, keep up the great story! Update soon pretty please. *gives ChronoDragon a blindfold and handcuffs for Reno to use with Vinny (hoping that the innocent 'pet' likes those things)*



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  • From vivarose on May 18, 2008
    Very awesome work! And original too, kind of reminds me of "Pet shop of horrors" but with more sex ^_^ i look forward to seeing some updates in the future!
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  • From N00ne on January 22, 2008
    (Sorry for the weird spelling etc. english is not my native language)
    I'm really glad that I accidently clicked at the link to your story, normally I'm all for Reno/Cloud^^ But "Burning Desire" really got me hooked. Vinnie is such a cutie in your story, so "naive" and the way you write his thoughts - there is no doubt that beeing a slave is the most natural thing for him. I'd love to hear more about the "rules". I'm sure you already have a picture in your mind how the story will progress, but if you take requests... It would be cool if Reno would give Vinnie books and magazines to learn from (cooking, hygiene, doing house chores etc.) while Reno is at work.

    Well Renos last name was never revealed officially, as someone stated "Sinclair" is really widespreaded (originally from another fanfic), but I've heard from serveral korean sources that it's "Kiribani" (doesn't fit if you ask me^^). Lefay is cool though, somehow it sounds classy, couldn't place a finger on it, I heard the name before.. then it hit me^^ Morgan Lefay - more or less evil (depends on the book you read, i prefer Avalon) witch/sorceress from King Arthur. Don't know if that was intended though, but they both have some kind of power over people, they can't resist their "charm", I can so see Vinnie falling for Reno as the story goes on. Anyway I'm already babbling again - SRY! Keep the good "work" up! Love Noony
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  • From bellesang on November 21, 2007
    Oh I love this story! It definantly different! Keep it up I look forward to reading more.

    ... I think Reno's last name is Sinclair, but Lefay matches too!
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  • From RenMemory00 on November 19, 2007
    Aww... love it...!!! New chapter is so awesome, and....

    WRITE MORE!!! *GARRR!!**
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  • From RenMemory00 on November 19, 2007
    Yay!! This is Hannah and I am commenting on ChronoDragon's awesomely hot story. I don't know when you'll check this but just know that I did and I think its awesome and so cool and I feel so sorry for Vincent. I can't wait till you finish it. Well, I promised I would write a long paragraph so here it goes. The story was good but the descriptions may or may not need a little more work. I'm going to put up my own story...soon. It's got sex right away and Vincent's all emo like...hee hee. Oh my God you should totally finish your story soon. Yay! I really don't know what else to write so I'm just gonna say that keep up the good work!!

    ~RenMemory00
    ~aka...Hannah
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  • From Aini on November 16, 2007
    Aw, that's so cute! I love how innocent Vincent appears! It's just too cute. ^_^ I can't WAIT for the next update! :D
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  • From EmoSephy on September 23, 2007
    This is by far one of the most favorite stories that I've read here so far. It's nice how you have Vincent playing the pet as he seems so natural for him. Please write more and I look forward to reading future chapters, thanks again for the amazing story so far.
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  • From Killua on July 22, 2007
    Vincent...a pet? How HOT is that? o.o (I Will wait patiently for the next chapter...though not TOO patiently ^.^)
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  • From KillmeKissme on July 22, 2007
    AHHH! Update soon! Can't wait to see how the two interact together.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2007
    Ah! Only one chapter? You must write more!
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