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Reviews for Picking up the Pieces

By : spookymuffin
  • From ANON - Jo on November 12, 2007
    Hah! I'm back! Randomly on chapter 3! Lol. I'm re-reading the story. Because it's an awesome story. And because I'm actually writing a story at the moment about Reno/Cloud/Zack. And i've never written a lemon before! Well. I wrote my first one like 3 days ago. But that was one of the chapters in the story! Sooo. I'm trying to read other people's stories because I want to make sure I do it right. :] And since yours is amazing I wanted to look at your writing. No worries though. I'm not gonna go n copy/paste your story. That'd be terribly awful of me! But I love your story. And absolutely love Reno and Cloud in this scene and decided to review again! Hah!

    -jo
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  • From ANON - Jo on November 04, 2007
    Wooh! I totally had forgotten what I had reviewed! But I re-read it and I'm still not entirely sure why I was hesitant. I think it was just the RenoxOC thing. I think I was kinda afraid it'd play a prominent part? But it was just minor and all in good fun. :) So all is well! I'm glad you enjoyed my review though! I do love this story, it's awesome. :D

    And ohmigod. I love Death Note too! And you encouraged me to get a PSP. >_> So I went on ebay and got it! I think this makes me sound way more spoiled than I am. But meh. :p But I've been playing it. And I luuurvveee it. But it's so sad. I keep crying and am all depressed. >_> Which is why I read RenoxCloud stories. :p Cause they're always humor-filled even if there are dramatic parts in it. But I'm definately looking forward to your next update. :) I'm gonna add it to my bookmarks on my computer cause I'm not too familiar with this site. :D
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  • From ANON - Jo on October 10, 2007
    Ohmigod. I'm so jealous! I want a shiny PSP with FFVII art on it T_T This makes me want to cry. I can't understand japanese!! Nyuuuuuu I'm doomed!!!!

    I like your story though. =[ It's good, I'll admit, I was a bit hesitant to read it, but I figured 'what the feck' and here I am. Read to your latest update. =] I was really hoping they'd find Reno under the table though. That would have been a bout of hillariousness all on it's own. =]

    Anywho! Keep up the good work =D
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  • From ANON - Debzi on August 10, 2007
    Yay an update! You're welcome for the reviews by the way. I like the story. Reno breaking the lamp was hilarious! I like the idea of Tseng and Yuffie being siblings too. Great idea!
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  • From ANON - Debzi on July 08, 2007
    Yay an update! ^_^
    I think Zack's eyes were meant to be purple. But SquareEnix are always changing things lol. Cloud's birthday for instance, some sites say its the 19th and some say its the 11th.
    Ha ha Reno has to hide under the table! lol! Poor Reno!
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  • From ANON - shinrasukiyaki on July 03, 2007
    "How long does it take to have a baby anyway?!"

    Priceless. >
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  • From ANON - Debzi on June 18, 2007
    ha my name's Debbie too! ^_^
    This story is awesome! I 've read it all in one go tonight. Reno/Cloud is sweet pairing xD
    Continue please!
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  • From GothPunk on April 25, 2007
    Wow, next chapter please, I'm really loving this story already! I've always had a soft spot for The Turks so it's always nice to see them get some attention. I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle the main characters from the game (especially Cloud XD) and how the new character Adrian Frayne develops. Oh, and more Reno please, yumm! You say the story is going to be about 30 chapters? Well sign me up because I'm very curious to see how things pan out.

    Dr.Scientist (GothPunk)
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