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Reviews for The Lamia Queen

By : touchstone85
  • From ANON - sean on June 18, 2010
    i liked the story and i would like to ask if you can do a request for me


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2008
    Excellent... Check out my "A Tail of Humiliation" (FFIX), as it's similar.
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  • From ricobanderas9 on May 13, 2007
    Excellent. I give it a definite 9/10, which is pretty damn good for a first fic! I want to point out what I liked...

    1) structure. You had the seduction, the turn, then the charm spell, the sex, and the conversion. Lots of people forget the conversion.
    2) style... I liked your attention to detail in the dialogue.
    3) completeness- none of it seemed rushed. You took your time and enjoyed writing it.

    I'm glad what I do inspired you to it!

    -RB9
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