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Reviews for A Passionate Mistake

By : Tieo
  • From rinoa2530 on August 15, 2009
    It doesn't suck. It's a great story and It's the first time you've done first person writing, you did very well, :-D.
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  • From nickkroon on July 03, 2007
    dont be so hard on yourself about your writing. i really enjoyed it, especially Seph's perverted little sceme to get cloud into his room. i like reading the contrast to how i see seph as a bit of a tragic hostile loner to a perverted sex freak that porks his way through the cadets at the academy ( hah!) looking forward to a next chapter!
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