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Reviews for The Meaning of Teamwork

By : Xax
  • From wanderingaddict on March 28, 2013
    hahaha holy shit dude, I'm sorry I know I said I'd leave a review on GF101, like, ages ago, but I so often come and... well, I finish reading Squall get fucked and then I forget to review! for other reasons >.>

    anyways I'll say flat-out that I don't know or play the Final Fantasy games at all, so I really was just reading GF101 any time I needed to jerk it because a friend recommended it to me, but damn if this might not be one of my new fucking favorites! holy SHIT balls I can't believe I didn't read this sooner, god fucking damnit I'm going to have to read all your stories now!

    okay, so first of- woof. holy fucking shit, Zidane being an ass-man and eying Amarant the whole damn time like he's a piece of fucking steak. god damn, reading about Amarant's outlined cock and Zidane constantly eying the cleft of his ass? that was promising that it'd be good (well, that and the fact that I already know you write about beefy guys being absolute sluts). and DAMN son, god DAMN I like this Zidane character!

    like I said earlier, I have no idea who these guys are in-game, so I just googled some images of them to get an idea, but let me say now that I love their interaction! just the right amount of character development to get some romance goin' on (something I, uh, honestly didn't expect from you,! hah, no offense, it just didn't seem like your thing). it was sure appealing though! I like Zidane constantly outsmarting Amarant, hah, especially just trying to one-up or denying him just to see the dude scowl. it's a really cute dynamic, and it's made all the better for the fact that they're both extremely attracted to the other so it's sort of a constant one-upmanship. you make it into just about the cutest possible dynamic. even more so because the size difference makes it that much funnier/hella fucking awesome when Zidane calls himself an ass-man and wants to shove every finger he can up Amarant's hole.

    speaking of, awwwwwww damnit damnit damn! the whole time I was SO rooting for Zidane to sneak his little monkey ass behind Amarant and just start plowing the dude! haha man, god I love the way you write guys enjoying it when their holes get stretched out. Zidane's got a workout, and I definitely wanted to see him get stuff with Amarant's cock (only in part because I have a thing for cute little monkey guys too) but also I was really eager to see Amarant get some god damn cum splashed across his face/chest/hole too. so torn! seeing the big guy's head roll back (and that fucking line about his asshole relaxing every god damn time Zidane even touched it, holy fucking cow I can't believe how much of an absolute whore you make your dudes when it comes to getting their butts stuffed!

    this was a little different from your most recent stuff about the Precurser legacy (I think that's the latest thing I read?) where it's about the two dudes exploring each others bodies. come to think of it, the first two chapters of GF101 are a lot the same way, where Squall and Ifirt and Squall and... uh, the incubus-y type bottom explore each other. I really like that. those add some great touches that really bring the story to life (on both parties parts). in this story, it was Amarant being surprised/amwazed at Zidane being furry all over (and then fucking those furry thighs!). it was just awesome because it made him seem really into and invested in getting Zidane to put out.

    hah, well, that and those fucking lines you end on. Jak getting a tongue shoved up his ass right before he's going to leave the metalheads, Squall strugglign to stand only to realize he's soaked in cum, and here, Amarant leaning back to smear their mixed semen across his cock and start jerking again as Zidane just stares at him (heh, and damn if I didn't want to see his little monkey fangs close over Amarant's cockhead there!). great stories dude, even for a reader not in the fandom. just fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 23, 2009
    Woah! Dirty and steaming hot sex. My favorite couple is Blank x Zidane, but this little adventure of monkey boy was totally worth it.

    And... oh my god, I just remembered something... Amarant's hands are HUGE!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2007
    Sequel please! O_O That was a great fic. It was hot and had a good amount of characterization and description.
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  • From ANON - NicoChan on October 03, 2007
    My favorite couple from FF9. XD

    Anyways, the writing was really good. Leagues beyond a lot of the stuff you find around here. The characterization really impressed me. Zidane was cute and impish but never fell prey to the 'uke' stereotype I've seen put upon him in fics. Amarant was also especially good. The start of the story made me chuckle quite a bit, especially Zidane's bits on "teamwork." I really did smile. The sex was hot and the whole fic was really excellent. It would be great to see more of this pair, or more anything in general from you. Excellent work.
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