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Reviews for Blonde Ambition

By : sephcounttheways
  • From MistressNyx on February 12, 2009
    AH!!! Seeing this story updated made my day!
    Ok so...how do I get that second DVD Sephiroth and Cloud were watching? XD
    Also..."cupcake factory"? Is it wrong that was my favorite part?
    I loved the fact that eventhough there was sadness in the separation you still kept the interaction between them playful and romantic.
    Excellent chapter, each one just keeps getting better!

    Nyx
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  • From ANON - Mirien on February 11, 2009
    Never, never, never worry about chapters being too long, the longer the better, as far as I and I'm damn sure many others, are concerned!

    I have a confession to make...I stalk this story. Around the time I start hoping for a new chapter, my standard morning procedure is check email, check Live Journal, check to see if there's an update to BA. Every day. When the update appears, it's like a mini Christmas *grin*

    I love so much about this story, but to pick out a few things about this particular chapter, I really like the subtle changes Cloud is going through. His physique, the way he copes after the intial heartbreak is done when Seph leaves. He's gutsy and real and on the way to becoming all he dreams of.

    The club was all kinds of wonderful, just perfect, but I have to say my favourite part was Seph just picking Cloud up and his, "That's mine" atttitude. I have to confess to a squeak at that point.

    And also, hot, hot, HOT. The sex is a seamless part of the story, yet it never fails to stir me up and the phone sex about blew my mind.

    So, in short, fanfreakin'tastic chapter, as always! You pack so much in, so much emotion, characterization and just wall to wall storytelling. It makes me all kinds of happy to know there'll be a BA2, I could read this story for as long as you feel like telling it. I think you once said you want the FF boys to have some happiness and they get it in this for certain. Long may it continue!!

    Thanks for writing this and for sharing it!
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  • From ANON - Lysiaamazon on February 11, 2009
    Oh darling....never ever worry about chapters being to long....if they weren't I'd be a little upset. *grins* I love reading each and every word and since I never want it to end, the longer the better. This was absolutely amazing. I honestly can't remember ever reading a story, EVER, that has me literally laughing, giggling, tearing up, squealing, grinning, aww-ing, or anything the way this story does. It's so awesome I don't even have the right words to say so and thats the truth. You deserve more credit and more reviews. The witty banter, the cute remarks, the cursing, all of it is fitting for the story and it makes both the iconic characters seem real and honey, if there ever was a script to write and create a movie bases off Final Fantasy, I give all the money I had just to see this one made into real life. The best thing is that you actually illustrate some of your chapters, and that happens to be the best thing ever. Gods, if I could draw and illustrate what I write, that would be so awesome, so I praise you on your wonderful effort. This was a well written chapter and even though my heart sank dramatically at the heartfelt loneliness, you did end it pleasantly. And just cause I have to ask, well two things. What do you mean by BA 2, (I would love to see a Genesis/Rufus, fic by you by the way) and is Skylar gonna make a move on Cloud now that Sephy is gone? It makes me think??

    Beautiful chapter and thanks so much for updating. I love losing sleep over reading this *grins* It's the best thing ever!

    -Lys
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  • From Katonie on February 10, 2009
    Oohhhh My Gooodddd, that was such an amazing chapter! Thank you! I feel sorry for both of them though. Poor things have to be away from each other for so long...But they'll make it through*sniffsniff* I think I may just cry*sniffsniff*

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From itstartedwithapaopu on February 10, 2009
    Your story makes my heart happy. That's all.

    I'd leave a more intelligent review (and, truth be told, I will later), but my brain is kinda mush right now (OMFGPHONESEXWHUT), so I'm unable to do that, lol.

    I'm going to go back and re-read this about fifty times, then maybe it'll work out, lol. :D
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  • From ANON - Dierdre on December 31, 2008
    I love this story, for reals. As silly as it might sound, everytime i find it has updated, it brightens my day. Its so cute, and sweet and I love how you portray the characters. And it is FUNNY. I laugh like crazy, everytime. Keep it up, cuz i'd cry if you ever stopped! Happy New years to yah!
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  • From Kiheki on December 25, 2008
    I loved this one! So sentimental and sweet without being syrupy. The dog tags were a good idea, and so was the cell phone since Seph is going off to war. Is Cloud gonna see him off at the station, waving a hanky? (I seem to recall this in one of his little fantasies) Anywhooooo......I know I must be patient and wait for the next chapter....so I shall try! *sits and waits*
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  • From snnj11220 on December 25, 2008
    Loved this chapter and am glad they had such a nice Christmas. Lol, at the Aeris part, *pms pfft* I am probably the only person that thinks that she actually meant those stuff, it just seemed to close to heart.

    Oh and loved Cam and Psycho here, its funny because at times Psycho acts more diva-ish than Cloud.

    I am anxious to see how things go with Seph going towards the conflict, and if Cloud will be deployed there also as a drummer.
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  • From Katonie on December 25, 2008
    Damn You! There was NOTHING!!! But it was SO GOOD!!!...yeah, this was such a great chapter, so sweet, I was grinning like, the whole time. :) Update again soon!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie

    P.S. Thanks for the "Christmas Present" ;)
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  • From itstartedwithapaopu on December 25, 2008
    I have no idea whether or not I've reviewed this story ever, and if I haven't, SHAME ON ME.

    I ADORE this story. Seriously. I can honestly say that you're my hero right now, you and this story, and your other one, but mostly this one. XDDD

    Now, past that, this chapter in particular positively enchanted me. Especially the end. I have cavities, for serious, and I love them. AND THE DOGTAGS!!! OMFG THE DOGTAGS MADE ME SO HAPPY!!!

    Okay. Fangirly moment over. ^^ Anyway. I sincerely hope you update soon, because your updates make me smile very much. ^^ ... Okay, and your sex scenes are fucking amazing. Orgasm-worth, I swear to god. Okay, I'm seriously done now. I promise. XDD
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  • From Nekoluver666 on December 24, 2008
    -_- Ok, I give up on trying to give you semi-long review. It hates me I swear!!! *cries* I still lurved this chapter and the whole Aerith bit her bottled lip thing cracked me up. Was that a missed typo? I've been trying to tell you that, "“I wasn’t angry, I was hungry. Their drama was standing in the way of dinner,” He was still piling an alarming amount of food onto his plate." is fucking epic. EPIC I say!!! *shakes fish* Anyways, here is a complete review for you...I hope. Keep up the goood wooorrrrkkk!!! x3
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  • From ANON - Komikitty on December 24, 2008
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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  • From CyNeko on December 24, 2008
    Aww the dog tags were sweet. Still I am not looking forwards to this whole Sephy going away business...poor Cam is gonna have to deal with a lot of emo Cloud lol
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  • From ANON - EgyptInnocence on December 24, 2008
    heyyyyy, me and seph share the same blood type! only, i'm AB positive! ^^ actually, we're not the universal donor for whole blood because A blood types will reject the B in their blood, and B's will reject the 'A', we're the universal donor for plasma only, s'why they usually ask AB's to donaate plasma. O is the universal donor for whole blood. also, we're only able to recieve AB or O, just to clear it up.
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  • From JastissJade on December 24, 2008
    Yay! An update! And on Christmas (Eve) no less! I'm so happy! XD

    This was a great chapter. Christmas funtimes, Zack and Aerith getting back together... Cloudy being all domestic and cute... Pretty much, all of it was wonderful. And the bit with the dogtags was the most emotionally intense moment. Wonderful, seriously.

    Can't wait for more! Merry Christmas!
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