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By : sephcounttheways

From ANON - Nightclaw42 on December 24, 2008
Love the new chapter. Lots of drama for the het couple and plenty of WAFF for the gay couple. One nitpick thought, AB negative is NOT the universal donor, it's the next to universal receiver. The true universal receiver is AB positive and the universal donor is O negative. Ja ne.
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From snnj11220 on November 24, 2008
Cloud so kicked ass in this chapter! I love how he handled the situation in the beginning and was there for Seph throughout. I also love how Seph's thoughts were on Cloud throughout. Its like see he may not be able to say it, those words, but he does show it. I can't wait to see what the three Turk stalkers have in mind for Seph and Vince. This was great, thanks for such a nice lengthy chapter!
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From CyNeko on November 24, 2008
YAY I was so excited to finally see a new chapter of this up! I love this story! I honestly can't get enough of it...you write the characters so well.
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From BlackRaincloud on November 22, 2008
Omg, omg, omg. Finally! My prayers have been answered! I was so scared for Seph, and wanted to kick that mutant alien bitch straight in her teeth when she used his own hand to strangle the shite out of his sexy ass. GRR! Hay! Evil mutant lady! Go get your own puppet! This one is Cloud's to manhandle. HE'S NOT YOOOUUUUUUUURRRRSSSSS! *starts yanking tentacles out*

Do aliens shrivel up like slugs if you salt them?

*Brandishes salt shaker*

I was so relieved when he was saved by the sweet and butchy Nurse Rhonda (by poppin' caps in his ass, oddly enough) I was like, "yo, this cookie-smelling phantom has possessed the strongest person on the planet, Oh shit. OH SHIT!! AAAAA savehim savehim savehim!!! Or everyone gonna DIIIIIIIIIEEEE"

teehee.

I loved this chapter. I am sure I will love your doujinshi as well, as soon as its done! I will whore that shit right up the second its released! Words cannot express my antici......pation. YOU ARE LOVED.
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From ANON - lysiaamazon on November 20, 2008
Okay wow...what a great few chapters woot!
Okay the sex scene was great, so wonderful written... Hello oh wonderful perfect writer God you!! *grins*

I was like:
Oh I can't wait for them to finally do it

Wow the movie thing was so cute...Ida jumped to if Sephiroth whispered in my ear...

Cuddling with the boy toy and making out during the movie...oh I could just picture the grinding of the hips...*fans self*

OMG they are..wow...that is hot...hmmmm the perplexed look on Sephy's face over the condom...

Damn the finger prep...hot too...* fans self feverishly*

*faints* Fuck that was hot....I think my whole world would be Sephiroth to...if that God of a man wanted me....

And oh the shower scene...they gotta do it there...my biggest fantasy ever....*blushes*

*Dies* OMFG they did to it in the shower...geeish...that was really well done and I can't seem to get the images out of my head...

Can we say please do a picy of that? HUH HUH HUH HUH HUH?? You can hide all the parts....PLEASE!!!

Aww cute baby Seph...
Is curious about Vincent's intentions really... *blinks*
Is Sephiroth magical???
Cloud's mom is fantastic...

Very nice few chapters...wish I could say more and I usually can but alas my brain is in puddles thanks to you.

Thanks a Helluva lot!
-Lys
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From JastissJade on November 20, 2008
WOOT! While that chapter was a beast, it was fucking awesome! I wondered how long it would be before you updated... >.> Shouldn't talk though. I do that myself. Oops.

It was so... so sweet for Cloud to be there every day for poor unconscious Seph. Fucking stupid ass Jenova. Urgh! Anyway, and the artwork that went with that pulled at my heartstrings. Completely adorable. My favorite non-smut part: Seph being awake after Cloud's Christmas shopping. Awww~!

And of course, the beautiful smut scene. Ahh. Good things come to those who wait. No pun intended.

Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more!
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From ANON - EgyptInnocence on November 20, 2008
It's EgyptInnocence from deviantart. why was your account suspended??? do you think it might be because of that smut picture for this chapter? if so thats ridiculous and totally unfair that they wouldnt even give you a warning. if you need me to do anything, email me at SukiRios@aol.com or aim me at SukiRios
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From ANON - lysiaamazon on November 19, 2008
I absolutely love you now....MY GOD....I had to run to the bathroom the last few chapters...these two are like rabbits...quite adorable freaking sexy rabbits...can we say...can't get enough of each other....God I love LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY...THERE IS A GOD OUT THERE.....THANK GOODNESS!!!
Okay so I have been reading a few chapters and then reviewing...so forth...so now let's get to what I have just recently read. Hmmmm well what I thought was most funny was Zack and Sephiroth's banter in the car...and on a quick note...Sephiroths driving is hellish...scarey yet sexy...now how can that be? Any who, Cloud jumping in the car and mulling Seph to death and then Zack speaking up, truly, truly, oh my fricken God funny.
I have to say you built and built on them having sex and then the laugh from Cloud right in the middle of it...just about took me down, nearly causing me to spew my mouthful of water and OH MY GOD the cloths shopping thing, boy Sephiroth is not modest at all...meat hangin out and all..*drools* Why are those two so sexy. Again I want to comment on how real you make them both seem, real feelings, real first times, kisses that seem to melt and mold into each other...clearly you should quit your day job and just write....you have a gift!
It's the little things for me I guess, how Sephiroth acts, dresses and eats. Them ordering hotdogs was classic...."Two for him, three for me!" hehehe!
Well my goodness I'm going to read more mmk!
-Lys
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From ANON - lysiaamazon on November 19, 2008
You now....I am speechless...the first scene between Cloud and Seph...(sex scene) was so well done. The humanity you have given the stoic General is so lovely. I have never read a story in which he is written as human, young, nervous, vulnerable about the same stuff any normal human would be, not to mention he is a General now and things about him are blown way out of proportions..
The way you write him almost makes me feel like I am intruding on some privacy that he wouldn't normally share and also, the way he and Cloud so openly like each other, it's all so new and like untraveled territory and I love the innocence in Cloud over it all.
I find myself wanting to see them finally have each other and yet I am so in love with the small relaxed banter between them that I really don't care. I mean the little stuff, the conversation when eating pizza, the conversation on the phone the lovely quaint "Hi" "Hello" that each seem to utter breathlessly to each other, and while Seph is saving a turtle...all if it is priceless and very warm and sweet. The miracle of your writing is that you were given a gift for it and I wish I could say more....I mean yes...the story is not played out truly cannon but who really cares, to me it's your own artistic take on it and Seph and Cloud are just perfect, to me. I adore how Cloud's mother is with him, how she supports him and the shopping thing...the lube and condoms...floored me..I should have commented on that a loooooooong time ago.

Zack is perfect as well. I laughed my butt off at the small conversation between them over the phone when it was first revealed that Seph was Gay...Zack is fricken hilarious....yo! And I know I haven't finished this story yet...but Reno and Tseng are around aren't they and do you plan on bringing Rufus around...like I said you can ignore if you have and I just haven't read it yet.

My heart broke at the Seph and Vincent scene...*cries because Sephiroth cried* But I was quickly happied up when Cloud talked to Seph on the phone again (The turtle scene).

I find myself hoarse with laughter and joy at this story...i mean I haven't stopped reading it for two days and I even re-read one chapter twice. *grins*n If I were Cloud I might find it hard to believe that I am dating a man like the General for friggin out loud...the adoration and all, the fear and authority brought on by his mere presence...but then knowing that the man is so polar opposite when alone is completely lovely....I love that side of him...the real him...not the him everyone sees....
Thanks for the great story...
-Lys
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From ANON - Kinushi on November 19, 2008
Awwww, that was yet another phenomenally awesome chapter!
I lol'd when Cloud manhandled Zack XD Also, I soooo would give an arm to see Seph in the Dior trunks :3

Kat
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From ANON - Lysiaamazon on November 18, 2008
Okay I was the one named Amanda who cried "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD " at the beginning of my review and also was the one who frigin' fell off my chair while reading it.

RUN BITCHES RUN - RUN BITCHES RUN - let's just say I couldn't breath after I read that part for I was laughin' so hard my ears were ringing...yo that was funnny funnnny stuff. I absolutely adore how you write Sephiroth...like he is an actual person and all. I mean wow...the Cloud and Sephy phone conversation was breathtaking and perfection to a tee in my book. As is I found my jaw hitting my desk in response to it all and still couldn't pick it back when I read the ending, finding out that everything Zack had done was testing and recording the young blonde. And Sephiroth....hard...after watching it...wow weee woow... I love how real you make him seem, it is just so well written it's Godly and out of this world....I still only dream of being as good as you...*smiles and hugs*

Love it!!!
-Lys
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From ANON - Amanda on November 18, 2008
OH MY GOD...OH MY GOD...OH MY GOD...YOU ARE A FREAKING GOD WHEN IT COMES TO WRITING....

Can I say that I have laughed and grinned so much that I was wiping my own tears from me as I read this...I know I am only half, well I don't think I am half way through yet..just got done reading the chapter where Cloud first meets Sephiroth...let's just say when Cloud asked what Sephiroth's favorite music was....I died....I freaking fainted out of my own chair. You are a delightful, awesome and perfectly well suited to write for these FFVII guys. Cloud whether or not he is OOC or stuff in character is brilliantly wrote and your description of Sephiroth just made me run to the bathroom wishing for something I couldn't have. Yeah I know I am a dork, a frickin fangirl, but who cares! And I love staring my sentences with 'And' as well....*grins*
I love your story...it makes me smile like some goofy Cloud like virgin (I am not being literal just being stupid more or less)...and I am so excited I am not done reading it yet. I love Cloud's thing for music and his persistent daydreams with Sephiroth...talk about a mind blow, I wish I had his imagination then maybe I could bring Sephy to me hehehehe *evil laughs* Two things that made me stop breathing... 1- Cloud telling Sephiroth (daydream Seph) that when he first fucks him it will be in that school outfit and Sephiroth just replying "Okie Dokie" *drools at that and doesn't know why* 2 -- Cloud asking Sephiroth what kind of music he liked and prior to that...your one line when Cloud realized he was on the monitor...and I think you said something like "and there he fucking was..." to that affect...but it was priceless and I loved it....*sighs*
Your writing is like a dream and I can't wait to read more...

Please keep it up, my writer pen name is Lysiaamazon...I write to...but I could only dream of being as good as you...
Thanks for a lovely story...*goes to read more*
-Lys
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From ANON - Komikitty on November 18, 2008
It occurred to me that in my haste to tell you how much I loved this chapter I left out some of my favorite parts. Okay, so I can't wait to see how Sephiroth reacts to the Porno version of him, I'd love to see how Zack acts if/when he finds out about it. And I adore the junior turks I really do. When they decided they were gonna help patch things up I went "Yay!" And then in my shower I thought about it and remembered that Vinne doesn't like Cloud. Vin doesn't like Seph being Gay either, and I went "hoshit..." So Yay you!
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From ANON - Komikitty on November 18, 2008
Oh my LANTA. Poor Cloud, but thank god Rhonda finally turned on her phone. But those doctors "All I did was ask a question!" XD And the sex was hot and sweet. All around a lovely update. =^_^=
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From LamicaLee on November 18, 2008
That was fucking heart-breakingly sexy, if that even made any damn sense. ♥ Wonderful update, can't wait to see the next update. ;D
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