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By : sephcounttheways

From ANON - BlackRainCloud on July 20, 2008
I have to tell you, about something, dear.

Your story single-handedly brought me out of my typical winter depression (which unfortunately has lasted waaaaay into the warm months #$@!^*) It is absolutely farken awesome, to see a feel-good story written by someone that has complete control over the English language. (Ya know, the difference between to, too and two--wait and weight etc etc) And the fact that I can see some of your personality --methinks, anyway, in your writing style. I bet you are super fun to hang out with. PLEASE keep feeding your muse, I am in love with this story, and probably all the other ones that will eventually squirm their way out!!

*tackles chibi Cloud and gives him noogies*
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From JastissJade on July 16, 2008
Ok, I've caught up, and now I can breathe and take a moment to review. My apologies for not doing it every chapter, but I was so eager to continue, well, I just did. lol

Truthfully, I really put off reading this story. The description sounded painfully OOC and I kept skipping over it, and skipping over it... Well, finally, I was reading all these rave reviews in random places for your story and then I said to myself, "oh, fuck it," and here I am.

I was hooked from the first few paragraphs. I like how you write Cloud, angsty, but not horrendously so. Of course, him coming out of his shell, making that conscious decision, that was so awesome. I also love how Sephiroth is unsure, and yet not. Bleh, pretty much, let's say this: I just love everything. I love the snippets of humor, the way you portray everyone (ESPECIALLY Cloud's mother). It's all just wonderful, and now I really can't wait for updates.

Grats, this fic is complete awesomesauce. XD
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From ANON - Recalesce on July 14, 2008
Ah, fun chapter - April and Rhonda continue to be awesome, the boys are all cute at the zoo and at home and at work and... yeah, everywhere, and Zack manages to be both sweet and obnoxious at once with his heartfelt proposal over the phone. And his other propositions. :D

When that girl says Genny, I can only imagine it sounding like Jenny. (Wonder if anyone ever called his extra testicle mom by that nickname?) Also wonder if Rufus' trip to Seph's office has anything to do with Vincent's wrath. (Glad we won't have to wait too long to find out.) And it's nice to know the fic's going to stay feel-good. 'Cause that quality is why reading it feels... uh, good. (Damn, need more words...) Looking forward to fifteen, anyway.
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From Sulangel on July 12, 2008
I keep trying to think of something profound to say and all I keep coming up with is, "I fucking love this story!!" Another awesome chapter! I did think Zack was being a bit of an asshole and Seph too, a little, at the end, but I consoled myself with the hope that was what Seph meant when he asked Cloud not to call him on his bullshit. I may be wrong, but I couldn't see any other reason for it. Zack needed a slap though, love him though I do!

Looking forward to the next update!

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From MibuWolf on July 08, 2008
I absolutely loved the newest chapter! You really almost have chapter 15 done?! I'm going to be the first to read it! *nods*

Thank you for the update! (And, here's a two-fer) "Kittens" is promising to be an absolute gem as well. Why haven't you been recognized more as the amazing author you are? You take time on each of your stories, pouring humor, love, and just overall emotion into them. I've never seen such beautiful devotion to a story before. I'm proud to be a fan of yours! *sentimental tear*

Looking forward to more like the greedy bastard I am! Much love!
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From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
Sweet I got to say it was a very humorouis chapter lol. Love the whole seen were Sephy and the gals are running lol or the phone call with Cloud and April.....or lol drunken fuck ME Zack

So will Rufus create a love triangle? wooooooo Can't wait till the next chapter lol
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From LamicaLee on July 08, 2008
xD Yay finally an update! WHHOOOOOOO! lol It was of course, awesome. :3 Can't wait to read more, don't leave us hanging forever now ;D
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From ANON - Katonie on July 07, 2008
I LOVE YOU! You Updated! I have had a simple wish granted! The update of this story being the wish. Thank you.
Keep up the good work and the cute Shephy/Cloud loving!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie
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From ANON - Komikitty on July 07, 2008
HOSHIT! It's Rufus! Run for your life Cloud! Anyway, I adored this chapter, especially them watching TV together. Though i admit I feel a little stupid because it didn't occur to me that Zack was drunk, until he asked Cloud for a blow job.^_^;; Yeah I'm unobservant. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! =^_^=
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From ANON - Gismo on July 07, 2008
Yay! The desperately awaited update! I liked the woven in past of Cloud, the small touch of depression combined with utter hilariousness.
Can I say I wanted to kick Sepy's ass a bit for cracking jokes about vertically challenged boyfriends??? *mumbles and bitches*
So...umm...yeah. I hope the next update will come soon 'cause the end of the chapter came quite sudden. *snickers* I actually reloaded the page to see if it was not loaded properly before. I need to see what Rufus is up to, the little bitch!
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From Kiheki on July 07, 2008
Yays!! Everyday ordinary people stuff. I like the little details that pop up in those scenes. Poor Cloud..he is so anxious about himself when he and Seph are around other people isn't he? That boy needs some confidence and a cell phone of his own!
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From ANON - recalesce on July 05, 2008
Hey, I found this from the rec on myprettypuppet and thought I'd review here rather than comment there now that I've read it 'cause then it's, you know, a review. There's so much awesome in this story. :D (I'm seriously glad of all the drawings on your dA, btw; it's such a visual story, and I totally suck at picturing outfits and hairstyles and anything really visual, so seeing them illustrated added a whole extra dimension of cuteness and hotness and all that.)

The 'fun OOC' thing kinda makes the characters more the way they'd be if they were real people - the accents, the swearing, the bitching and playfighting and everything. I mean, Aeris as a flower seller with a proper cart and union membership is so much more believable than Aeris as a waif with a basket, it sorta makes me wish I could label the game 'out of reality' instead of calling the fic 'out of character'. And I love the vibrancy this allows for in Cloud and Seph's attitudes. Their upbringings left them both with plenty of IC insecurities, but they both decided to live their lives on their own terms when they moved out, and it's paying off; through their totally Cloud-like and Sephiroth-like determination, they've won themselves the sort of lives where they can watch dvds and burn music and hang out between classes/missions. The Seph flashbacks are some of the best bits (and speaking of vibrancy - cows are cute, cockroaches are freaked out, turtles are all over the place, he's a chameleon - his animal themes are building up quite a petting zoo.) Maybe this is overthinking it, but if his skin camouflage-matches his clothing in a chameleon kinda way, how come he doesn't go pale in white clothes and dark in black clothes? All I can think is that Hojo ironed out that much in the lab and then couldn't foresee any need to ever dress him in other colours. Vincent is so much better outside of that coffin - he did a whole lot of good for Seph even with those emo Turk issues of his own. (Since he couldn't entirely let himself see Seph's childhood as what it was, and didn't let himself see how thoroughly he abandoned him at seventeen, it's not the hugest surprise ever that he's seeing Seph's adult life in such a distorted way - and the the way it plays out now oughta be interesting.)

There's one thing that I'm kinda surprised Seph didn't think of when Cloud brought up the condoms. He may have gone straight from virgin to monogamous, but he periodically gets pills snuck into his diet that put him through every nasty disease in human history, and it seems to take him a day or two to notice; in the long term, shouldn't he be worried about, like, getting dosed with HIV or syphilis or something and passing it on to his not-so-immunologically-enhanced lover before he's had time to realise?
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From SavannahMarie on July 03, 2008
Due to a unbelievable freak occurance I discovered that it may in fact be your birthday, and that you are 22.

So happy happy birthday, and hope to read you soon.

Savannah
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From ANON - Isa on July 01, 2008
So I can review more than once, here I am.
The report done after their first time together is hilarious, lips' reading, I had to giggle at this, the whole chapter made me smile. Thank you so much for this story.
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From ANON - Isa on July 01, 2008
This story is awesome, I even read your comments at the end, and I do usually skip them. And I couldn't wait reviewing right here. Hope you don't mind, I find out later if I can praise you more than once.
Found it through LJ it is one of the first stories nominated at the Genesis Awards. Good luck with that, and may the muses be always at your side.
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