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By : sephcounttheways

From ANON - kira on June 18, 2008
Brilliant, bloody fuckin' brilliant.
This has been by far one of my favorite fanfics to have read. Not just in the FF7 fandom either. I really do hope you continue with it soon, as i can't wait to see what happens next in here.
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From ANON - Sars on June 17, 2008
So, I just finished reading this, and I really must say that this story had me howling with laughter from the start. I really love it; it's a strange brand of AU, but I am eatin' it up. Cloud's mom is so my favorite character here. I also love that this story has everything--angst, sweetness, fluffiness--the works. And I especially love the accents. So cute.
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From ANON - Missa_vk on June 16, 2008
I really LOVE this fanfic. Also while rereading the 1st chap.s I realized there is aband named anal orgasam.
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From ANON - Mirien on June 15, 2008
I discovered this story via a friend and I'm trying to think of what to say without coming across as a complete and utter squeeing fangirl. The words, 'fantastic' and 'brilliant' spring instantly to mind. I love everything about this, the style, the characterization, the story, all completely addictive and all around f*****g wonderful. I'm hooked, addicted and loving every word and cannot wait to see where you go next with this.

I do want to ask and please tell me to GTFO if you want to, but I think I read in your notes for one of the chapters that you just want the FF guys to be happy? Dare I hope this story is all about the happy and there won't be the whole insanity, madness thing happening later? I'm a much, I realise, but I would so love this to go completely against canon and just be happy. Sorry if I'm overstepping the mark with that, especially with a first comment, but I love these guys anyway and your versions of them are pure magic.

Mirien.
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From ANON - Jen on June 03, 2008
wow...i have read a few stories on here, but yours is the first to prompt me to comment. I love the story and definately appreciate the pictures to go along. you are a wonderful artist and a great writer...please, keep up the good work!
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From ANON - sporkoon on May 31, 2008
oh my GAWD! i was going to wait til i finished reading all the chapters to review, but now i just HAVE to! chapter 9 was the hottest thing ive ever read! it wasnt even a full lemon but it was soooo good!! like BOILING limeade ^_^ you have no idea how sad i am that this is the only story you have on here! your cloud and seph are so cute! and psycho is the most adorable little kitty ^_^ the swearing just makes him cuter! and the condor scout cloud is just genius!! what a perfect jailbait costume! wow... just wow. you have absolutely made my night! i worship you!
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From Infek on May 27, 2008
*Snorts* The Cloud in your story is seriously the cutest I've ever seen, although very OOC. But I don't care! I'm loving this story.
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From LamicaLee on May 27, 2008
Lovely chapter! Made it worth the wait...but don't make us wait that long again! xD Love how you added the bit about Vincent and his reminiscing of Lucrecia and the many different stages of Sephiroth. {Because you know how we all love him} And of course, need I mention how I loved the steamy shower scene? ;D Keep up the great work doll, hope to read more from you soon! ♥
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From ANON - Komikitty on May 26, 2008
Noooooo! Why is Vinnie a hater? Poop! And everything was going so well to! I did love the bit about their shared past though. And Confused Hojo equals Win. =^_^=

PS: You write really heart string-tugging angst, you know that?
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From ANON - Decoinne on May 26, 2008

Horror! Oh noes! It started off all nice and cosy too. Poor mini-Cloud :( I don�t know who I feel more sorry for � Cloud for not having his love returned fully, or Sephy, who probably *wants* to love Cloud, but for whatever reason is having hang-ups about it? Hmm � well at the very least (and obviously their relationship will never be the very least) Cloud knows that he will forever be the one to steal the great general�s V-card? ;) Cloud is so his worst enemy. Ruminating on such unpleasant thoughts can so *not* be good for the kid�s ego :S Oh no. Cloud you silly boy. You neeed to stop lying! This is never a good thing in the beginning of a new relationship! Smarten up kiddo � he likes you, just give him a chance to turn that into recognizable love! Getting all snarky is not going to help matters! I feel bad for Seph � he seems to be genuinely puzzled � and if my lover became all withdrawn and cry-y right after we first had sex� well � I�d probably take it personally?

Awwwww � and just like that you turn me into a ball of fangirlish goo again :) Sephy is brilliant. Just horribly brilliant at being perfect. You give him a situation with no way to win, and he�ll find one � or at the very least manage a tie :D Impressive General, Impressive.

Hot. Very, very hot. And ouch on the head meets shower wall Cloud hunni. Ouch.

Haha � slippery!

LMAO. Oh that is too funny. Poor little Cloud�s hand! Gluts of steel!

He� turned green? :D LOLZ � what is up with him? He�s crazy superhuman!

. . . Children creep me out :S Village of the Damned ftw! Vincent is the most adorable non-kidperson, kidperson ever :D Holy wow did he go through Hell to make Sephy�s life just slightly better :D Awwww � he�s a softie under it all :) Ohhhh lucky one Cloud! That was too close!

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From Kiheki on May 26, 2008
Ah!! An update!! YAY!!!!! I loved it. The little insight into Sephiroth's life in the lab and Vincent coming to the rescue was genius. So many people make it seem like that sort of thing never happened to Seph. Poor guy. All his suffering for nothing.....

Keep it coming!!
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From steisi on May 26, 2008
Greetings, my beloved authoress! I was near orgasmic with delight when I saw you'd updated, mostly because I was bizzarely and unnaturally curious and anxious as to the aftermath of our boys' first time going all the way. I was delighted at the way you handled the situation with poor Cloud's insecurity. And I was glad they solved it so soon, since it would have been a shame to just let the matter fester. The following shower sex was the cause for a dopey expression that included glazed, half-lidded eyes, slack facial muscles, and (though in VERY small amounts, for the record) drool dribbling from a slightly ajar mouth. All in all, great work. I hope Cloud and Seph get to have more fights dash misunderstandings in the future, if the make up sex is as hot every time! Ohohohohoho!...Anyway, I really appreciated the second half of the chapter, the one describing more of Sephiroth's past in the labs and Vincent's involvement. I gotta say though, Vincent's reaction at seeing Seph kiss Cloud disappointed me bitterly. I'm sure you have you reasons though, and I'm not about to bitch/flame at you to make you change anything at all. I respect you as an author too much for that. So, congrats on a wonderfully written chapter, and I hope to get to read more sometime soon! Kisses!
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From ANON - Gismo on May 26, 2008
Aaaaaaahhhh, yes. This update was so very much needed! Thank you, you saved my vacation and made me a happy happy Gismo! Soooooo, I'm glad the boys were able to work things out - quite literally. Mmmmhhh, there ain't nothing like a good hot shower ;)I absolutely squealed with delight over the Vincent interlude. It's good to see he cares about his not-son. Poor confused Emo Turk, though. Failed him because he turned out gay? Tsk tsk. *grabs brick to wash his head*
I am curious what Mr. Broody Pants will come up with in the future. So thank you again for this refreshing chapter and keep up the good work, oh Awesomness!
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From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2008
aw shower sex, got to love it^///^

It sounds like Vin is a homoaphomb or something lol

Sweet update I'll be waiting for the next chapter^^
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From ANON - Amanda on May 26, 2008
I'm going to have to get an account so I'll stop looking like a loser when I review..Anyway. :D Your update was perfectly timed, because now I'm going to head out to boot camp with a spunky Cloud-attitude. I'll be sure to give them your name.

You handled that crazy thing last chapter very beautifuly, and with minimum drama and angst..but..don't be afraid to get dramatic, ok? Because I'm pretty sure you could make a little drama rock. Your writing has so much emotion, don't be afraid to use it to drive us readers crazy. Man, I can't wait until Cloud's mom and Cameron get in on what happened these last two chapters. Har har.

And the Seph-child thing? Flawless. Wow. You win.
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