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By : sephcounttheways

From ANON - Amanda on April 25, 2008
Wtf is a Jiffy pop?
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From ANON - Decorinne on April 25, 2008
Value?! Hells no. Wrong answer kiddo. Although . . . at least he was honest about it? Shoot though. That's gotta hurt. Poor kid :( Awesome chapter though. I really liked their hanging out. Just too cute with the dressing game and back at the appt was hot! :D Absolutely adorable! :D
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From ZacksTenshi on April 18, 2008
Awwww I just love re-reading this lovely piece of art!!! It always makes me giggle in some or most chapters lol. Anyways once again I love ur work!! Please update soon!!!! ^_________^
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From ANON - moOnsRruck on April 14, 2008
AHHH! I... FUCKING -no wait, excuse me- FAWKING... LOVE YOU!!! I love your style, your humor, your characterizations, your... everything!
I'm not quite sure when my feelings progressed to undying love, but I know what made me realize it. Chapter 10, Author note #7: "If you have to ask, you'll never know." This Rugrats quote has always stayed with me for some reason. And for someone else to actually remember it... and then use it... what words can convey, the joy of this day?! Thank you kindly!

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From ANON - dealla on April 12, 2008
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before!(*apologies for any mistakes in my English!)

I have been in love with this story from the first chapter. Cloud is a sexy, witty, devious kitten and Sephiroth is the coolest, most chilled-out hot virgin bastard ever! I adore the way you're writing the conversations between SephyxCloud and Mom and the junior. They are full of life and so unbelievably funny sometimes! Just like this chapter: I knew April wouldn't go easy on Sephy, she was great:D My other two favorite scenes of this chapter were Aeris smoking cigs among her precious flowers and of course Cloud being attacked by lesbian Turks - his whole scenario about what happens when he dies left me laughing so hard, I almost cried :D And the lemon was just right, it felt right anyway *grins* Thank you so much, can't wait for more :) (love the pic of Sephy moving the turtle, so cute!)
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From ANON - Marisu-dono on April 09, 2008
*giggles* I was your 69th reviewer~ whee.

I love this chapter. I love how you portrayed the differences in Cloud's and Sephiroth's sexual attitudes. I adore Cloud's hysterics- it's just so offbeat. Aeris is a smoker caught me off-guard, but it's a refreshing change. Cam is adorable per usual. Julie and Elena are such lesbian loves. I'm glad your version of Sephiroth has such cool friends. And respects to Mama Strife, she's totally made of awesome!

My favourite bit in the whole thing? When Seph declares he's gonna keep Cloud. Awwww.

Your DA pictures totally rocks too.
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From ANON - Amanda on April 06, 2008
Thank you for setting the anon reviews for me! Finally, I can spread the love on this hot mother. I'm a cadet, so this stuff is like drugs for me. Military smut, hell yes! You win the award for best characterization for pre-Crisis Cloud. People are begining to wonder why I'm suddenly unexplainably into SWAT team memebers...
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From LamicaLee on April 06, 2008
I love this story, it's very well written! It sucks that I read it in it's entirety practically in one night and now have to wait for an update x,x; This story is like crack-- give me more! xD Love your DA pic's too. :3
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From snnj11220 on April 05, 2008
Loved the Seph/Cloud moments in this chapter. And between the ladies at the restaurant and Cloud's mom the fucking had me rolling. This chapter has to be one of my favorites, then again I've said that for everyone of the previous chapters, see the trend. But yeah I am so happy mama was in this chapter, I swear she is a fucking riot. Even if things don't come around with Vincent, Seph has a nice family there with Cloud and mom. And I see that Cloud was more daring and bolder in this chapter in regards to intimacies with Seph, I liked it. Loved this chapter, looking forward to the next one.
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From steisi on April 04, 2008
Hey there, love! God, I had fun with this chapter! It made my day, it really did. I mean, I haven't seen a better FFVII story on this site! Only Green Dreams comes close to it. And I don't mean just the ideas, but the writing style and overall feeling of the fic too. I loved the interaction between Aeris and Seph. And Aeris smoking? I cackled like a mad hyena at that. I mean, I've never seen that side of Aeris anywhere else before! What a stroke of originality that was! And overprotective Elena, Julie, and April (though for different people)! That was too sweet (in a slightly morbid sort of way) for words. And I think you have every right to be proud of your lemons. They make me happy. Vry, very happy! Mwahahahaha!...Um, 'scuse me. Anyway, keep it up, hon! Kisses!
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From EnchanteNoir on April 03, 2008
I loved this chapter... I have been checking every few days for updates and I'm so happy there was one today. They are too adorable and are honestly my favorite couple. *Sighs dreamily* Man what I wouldn't give to get my hands on Sephy. I'd probably get on his nerves though wanting to comb or brush his hair all the time *giggles* Oh and I have to say I about died of laughter at the phone call from Cloud's mom... now THAT was unexpected. Great job and I look forward to the next update.
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From BlackBlade on April 03, 2008
The lemon wasn't nasty, it was fucking hot! And you stopped at the blowjob...lol DAMN!!!
We want MORE!!!!
Nah, seriousely, that was another one of your awesome chapters. I love those boys. The way you created these characters is simply brilliant. I love their down-to-earth behaviour. This story is so refreshingly different from all other CloudxSeph pairings. I am going through serious pains until each update. There are only very few pieces of literary gemstones that have the right to be called that - and yor work is clearly amongst them. Absolutely wonderful. So hurry the fuck up, I wanna read more!
Just playing. Take your time and make it good. And hot. And sour. ;)
Jesus...I write like a first-grader...
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From ZacksTenshi on April 03, 2008
OMG!! I am soooooooooooo in love with your fanfic!!! It's sooooooooooooo cute and sexy!!! Please update soon!! Can't wait 2 see somemore hot and sexy CloudxSeph-ness!! Lol You are soooooooooo awesome for writting this btw!! LUV U!!! *glomps* ^___^
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From workdamnyou on April 01, 2008
Hey, hun! Sorry for not reviewing earlier - I was going to last night, but just as I got the review box up, I had to go on a plagiarist hunt, so all the awesome bubbles you gave me were gone. This was such an awesome chapter, though! I love the differences between Seph and Cloud - I laughed out loud at Cloud's fave movie, it's *definitely* him. The coolest part of this exploration of each other that they're doing is that we end up getting to know more of Seph's backstory! I am *loving* reading about him, and the wingspan thing! Oh, man, that was so precious! This image in my head of lanky Seph flapping his arms and knocking the walls! I loved seeing that end report of chapter nine being lived out in this one - haha, and Clooouuuuud, with the luuuuube! Oh, man, you embarrass that boy so well. Cam once again earned my undying love - haha, those rumours were fantastic. The thing I adore with your writing is the mental images you create - seeing Cloud leap-frog that guy for the phone, seeing it all so *clearly* in my head. It's so vivid, I always end up slipping from 'reading' to 'experiencing'. And VINCE! You nearly killed me! I was taking a mouthful of water, and I have no idea why, but his entrance made me choke on it! I exploded this laughter-water all over my goddamn monitor! It was so wonderful to see him in this, I love the realism you give your characters. It's so easy to see them as real people. Oh, and last but not least - the tripod thing. Ohhhh, the tripod. Especially when the guy looks him up and down, and Cloud asks suspiciously what he'd just thought of XD Well, if Seph thinks of tripod, surely that's a good sign for Cloud? Despite his embarrassment in the last chapter?
I'm sending as many good vibes as I can for you, hun - forceful heart transplant is never a healthy thing. It's good to hear you're being positive about it, but it doesn't really take away the suckiness. I am now yours for life!
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From Decorinne on March 26, 2008
Okay this'll have to be short and to the point because I'm fricking exhausted and have to work early this morning - that said, this chapter was awesome! :D Serious wow going on - loved all the back story on Seph. Definately helped round him out into less of the two dimensional mythic hero of the first few chapters, turning him into a more complex deliciously sexy bishie with an interesting history? Score. Those two are bloody adorable btw. Ohhh also very happy about Vincent! I have a special place in my heart of hearts reserved for all time with Vincent's name on it and it was great to see him introduced here! I really do want to know more about their common past though :) So cute. Oh and it made me laugh about Seph knowing they were being observed, and the going through the backpack, and the selective divulging of information, etc etc etc. Way too many parts to rhyme off now :P Oh on a side note - I'm not sure if you've been in contact with . . . shoot what name is she going by on this site . . . ummm carmine crinoline I believe? Something like that? I believe she is lemon betaing for you? Anywho just in case she hasn't been in contact and you have been trying to reach her I know her computer apparently 'died a horrible, horrible death' or somesuch and was out to be fixed for the last little while so if you have been trying to get in contact and it hasn't been working that's probably why. She was supposed to get it back soon though so have no fears ;) Ummm not that you would be likely to have further quesions but I can be reached at decorinne@hotmail.com in any case. Koolio. Awesome chapter --> Can't wait for the next one! :D Great way to de-stress after a truly energy zapping day! :D :D :D :D :D
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