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By : sephcounttheways

From Eveechan on March 25, 2008
*Gets an evil glint in her eyes as she runs off out of sight with a rather LARGE needle*
A loud popping noise is heard off somewhere, followed by "MWAHAHA! The Fic's '69 review virginity' is Miiinnneee!!"
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From Ellaer on March 23, 2008
Before I start... *bottles all the good vibes from the fic and hands over to the author and squishes her*. Yeah, I know how painful a forced heart transplant is, *send hugs and cookies.*

The fic is t3h awesome per usual, a few spelling mistakes here and there. God I'm in love with your Seph and Cloud, they are so whacked out and yet so real. I love how vulnerable Seph is, especially on that bit about Vincent, and how he realizes he's already in love with the blond space cadet. The cockroach and turtles were off tangent but damn cute, Cloud's right when he mentions Seph's totally random, I was lol'ing my ass off at the cockroaches getting freaked out. "It's not a hair gel!" is just too precious a moment. Methinks the General wants some ass after 2 weeks in Junon.

Thanks for updating in the midst of an emotional upheaval, I hope things will look up soon.
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From iamfair on March 23, 2008
Woah it feels like I�m in love! :D You are a great writer, and the story is beyond amazing!!
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From BlackBlade on March 23, 2008
Oh my gaaaaawd. The car incident had me in stitches. I was laughing tears for fucking five minutes. I was able to restart breathing shortly before my significant other was calling the paramedics. Oh dear, this chapter was awesome! And the cockroaches....bahahahahahaha. We can't forget about the cockroaches. I was almost peeing myself. Your style is simply the best and I cannot get enough from my two favourite boys. Don't worry, we can wait for da lemons. The motor mouth of Cloud and Sephy's naughtyness (the old perv...)makes the wait bearable ;)
Ummmm, on a more private note: I'm sending you loads and loads of positive vibes and a brand new substitute heart. Oh, and cookies. And a hug.

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From steisi on March 22, 2008
Hey, love. Before I start commenting on this much longed for chapter, I would like to send you every good vibe in my current possession! And that's a lot. I won't say anything else; I think we both know life has its ups and downs, one always after the other. So. I freakin' loved this! Mwahahahahaha! I really liked the fact that you picked up from where we left Cloud and Seph in the last chapter, and elaborated on the events connected with the truck and the parking lot. As usual, your sense of humor left me in stitches from helpless laughter (at times transformed into semi-sane cackling). The glimpse of Seph's past (his relationship with Vincent, how he found his apartment, etc.) was a lovely touch, by the way. It gave depth to his character and realism to the story itself. It showed the General's humanity more clearly. I love the chats Seph and Cloud have. It's nice to see them getting to know each other outside of the bedroom (though that's VERY nice too). Overall, this chapter was totally worth the wait, and I'm looking forward to the next one! Kisses!
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From Savaial on March 20, 2008
I don't believe I've ever had so much fun reading a story. Your phraseology, your pace, your humor and the utter REALNESS of this had me on the edge of my seat and sometimes falling off with laughter. I could never say enough good things about this fic, never. I am marking it to read over and over. You really tell a story well. Now that it's all over I feel like I've had a great big dose of dark chocolate after a day out with my best friends. Kudoes to you for taking me to live in your world awhile. The trip went without a single hitch. Loved this, absolutely loved this.
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From SavannahMarie on March 17, 2008
Hey you! I'm in sore needin' of some updatin'! I know you're there - I've seen you reviewin' 'round these parts hahahaha!
Hope to see you soon!
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From Decorinne on March 11, 2008
Awww he�s being all helpful! Sexy nerd is the shiznid :)

Oh noes! What�s wrroooonnnggg with him?!?

Lol � once again :) Cloud�s little side train of thoughts are so funny :D He is such a CUTIE!

Roofies?! O.o Oh that would be *funny* until he got totally dismembered in the morning that is . . . ;)

*jawdrop* That was HOT. Mmmmmm � those two are perfect :)

Awww! Queer eye! I�d forgotten about that show. I need a gay friend � like pronto !
Ohhh lala Labret! That�d be adorably punk on him!

Okay it won�t let me review that last chapter so we�re gonna have to make this a double!

Hah � Seph is so human :) I love the her reasons / his reasons bit :D

Oh wow � nice! Sephy has his fantasies too! Those two really need to get over themselves and just jump each other :P

Oh Zack :P While the nakedness is appreciated . . . okay that�s all I got - carry on ;)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! He�s being protective already :D

The movie was adorable. The kiss was totally hot. They are soooooo perfect. Cloud � what the hell did you just say?!

Wait . . . smoking shoe imprints? That can�t be good . . . :S

Oh no. Nononononono. This had better not be one of those stereotypical we need to talks :S That would crush my fangirlish heart and dreams!

:D Psycho is just . . . brilliant. Way to totally kill the mood in the cutest way ever!

Love how they act to get Cloud out of the building ^^ So cute - although not something that would work on a constant basis . . . hmmmm - well - they're nothing if not resourceful so I'm sure they'll be fine :)

Uhhhh.... I think I just swallowed my tongue. Yep - good thing I use my *fingers* to type then eh? That was hot hot hot hot HOT. Period. Exclaimation mark. Bold. Italicised. Underlined. HOT. That was *AWESOME*. They are, as previously mentioned approximately 51 billion times, adorable. I lovvvveee them! :) Oh citrus, how I adore when there is an actual story with developed characters underlying thee!

Okay the entire last chapter there was jus delicious. Seriously. And now I have successfully spent the half of the day previously designated for doing my epidemiology progect reading this :S So screwed. But entirely worth it! Is there a way to like set an update watch on this? I know on ff.net it's possible but I never really played with aff.net? Must figure out! Otherwise I suppose I could just bug your lemon beta to let me know. That sounds like a plan :D Awesome.

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From Decorinne on March 09, 2008
Hold his booze like a pirate! I am sooooooooo remembering that one :D
I love his mirror conversations :) Too cute.

Hahaha � oh dears? What will he choose?! Oh and hung-over Zack makes me smile :D

Okay . . . that is DISGUSTING. But it certainly� erm makes the reader feel the experience?

CLOUD � you TEASE! That was awesome ;)

Haha � that�s . . . an interesting group of songs! I can�t wait to see how the mighty general reacts!

Oh wow. They certainly are . . . thorough? Yaayyy! Seph likes!

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From Decorinne on March 09, 2008
Awwwww � Cloud is such a fanboy :) I love how you write him so OOC but still strangley IC at the same time? Doesn�t really make all that much sense to say it out loud but in my head it makes sense?
Oh my � the tension is simply rolling off the poor boy as he stands there :S Think of something! Think od something unique and cute and awesome and most importantly quick!

. . . . . well that was . . . original? Actually really cute :) It�s like saying � � I want to know you as the person not the hero� . Hot.

Awwwww � cheer up emo kid! You made an impression at least! Probably a quirky favourable one at that! He certainly has placed himself on the radar � and he made everyone smile and laugh!

Oh wow � Cloud certainly knows how to share :)

YAAAAAYYYYY! Seph is cool and nice and awesome and *pant pant � gotta remember to breathe* Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! So cute those two!

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From Decorinne on March 09, 2008
LOLz - his mother is helping him figure out how to seduce his *general*?! Hilarious. Original. Brilliant. Hahaha - Cloud is such an adorable space cadet! Erm . . .perhaps his mother should have kept the wheel . . .

Okay eww. 5 fricking 30 breakfast?! Good lord � I wasn�t even *asleep* by 5:30 am last night!?! I�d DIE.

Awwww! I want one! Psycho is so cute :)

Andddddd . . . enter the Sephy!

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From Decorinne on March 09, 2008
Homg I love Cloud and his mother! Haha and the Queer Bait shirt :D So cute!

��Dying on the battlefield, his pants would be tight and his ass would look amazing.�� Fabulous. Seriously funny! Sooooo happy that my good friend recommended this story �V you are quite the writer �� I kinda want his *entire* wardrobe O.o

Hah �V flinstone vitamins and condoms :) Awesome combination :D Made me grin like whoa. Awwwwwww! Poor Cloud �V *hugggggssss* - very smart mother though ;) Already knows her son is destined to be a uke :P That has to be the best coming out ever! They are so adorable and understanding :D:D:D:D:D

Okay that��s embarrassing ^^; Even with his mother being so very understanding . . . Eesh. Thin walls are the devil :(

Oh geeze . . . I *reeallllllyyy* hope Seph isn��t a huge jacktard in this :S Cloud has to get his man!

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From Decorinne on March 09, 2008
Lolz! This is hilarious :D Hahaha - I love how Cloud goes off in his head like that. Zack and Cloud make me so happy - their personalities just work so well together :P Can't wait until Sephy is physically in the story :) Awesome - time to read on.
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From Curio on March 08, 2008
You're right, it was OC, but it didn't ruin the story at all. I loved it. Really fuckin' funny. XD QUEERBAIT! It doesn't matter if that song is fake or not, I'll be singing that for a week.

Much love,
Curio
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From EnchanteNoir on February 29, 2008
Okay so I finally have some free time to write a review after giving up working on my own fanfiction as writing while sick just isn't seeming to happen. ANYWAY I have to tell you... I have become a complete fangirl of this fic... I can't help it! And to see them finally together I couldn't help but to have a total fangirl moment and squeal. LOL I just wanted to tell you that you are a wonderful writer and I look forward to every update you make as well as the sequel because again... I've become a Blonde Ambition fangirl. I can't WAIT to hear Cloud's Mother's reaction to THIS NEWS! WHOOT!
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