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Reviews for Blonde Ambition

By : sephcounttheways

From workdamnyou on February 18, 2008
Hi, there - wow :D I finally registered with affnet with the sole fucking purpose of reviewing this, because I've been reading since chapter five, and it's physically harmed me to hold in my glee and not shower it upon you. This is, without a doubt, the best damn fic I have ever, ever read. I look forward to each chapter with my nerves, literally, humming. I am humming. I am so excited for the next one, and so damn enraged (at life, not you) that I have to wait at *all* to get it. Your sense of humour hooked me, first of all - I was just skimming with disinterest, because too often the multi-chaptered stories on here are a load of bollocks, and then there was this awesome Cloud doing what you get him to do, and I was gone :P The characterisation of *everyone* causes me spasms of delight, because even in an OOC setting, you make them all incredibly IC, even Cloud with his bouts of yester-emo. Although, it feels trite labelling his occasional dark thoughts as emo - I adore the way you've given him these real fears, it's so easy to *feel* them when you're reading. Zack = love, absolutely endlessly. He's a fave character of mine, and I pretty much want to worship your shoes for making him like you have - I've never enjoyed reading about him more than I do in this. Sephiroth is absolutely wonderful - I love that you've given glimpses into his mind, being able to see that he likes Cloud too, instead of just suffering along with the 'does he, doesn't he??' stuff with Cloud - although, it's pretty safe to say that was aaaaall taken care of with *this* chapter. Thank you for making them awesome - thank you for introducing the weirdness with the footprints in the brick - thank you for just absolutely making my day every time I see that there's a new chapter. Your style is gorgeous, your grammar/spelling is beautiful, you've just made this utterly incredible fic that I actually can't rave about enough. I'm kind of stumped, have run out of steam, but there's still so much I want to say. It's been too long since I got fired up like this, and I love you for it :D Seriously - counting down the days til the next one. And I will giggle and clap my hands over my mouth, and slam my head against the keyboard, and clap, and OHMYGOD, I nearly forgot Cam and Psycho! Holy crap, woman, how the hell do you make an OC that awesome?! I *hate* OCs, OCs are *shit*, in all my experiences but *one* other, they have detracted from the original setting, they muddy the waters, I avoid giving them any limelight in my own fics, BUT I ADORE CAM AND PSYCHO, AND ALL THE SOLDIERS NOW THAT I COME TO THINK OF IT - AND NURSE WHATSERNAME - TO THE ABSOLUTE ENDS OF THE EARTH. I've read this story... three times now. Yep. That's how much I love it. There's no part that doesn't delight me. So! Going to hush now, go get some much-needed sleep - I stayed up late to read this, another sign of my adoration since I am a sleep-whore who can't function on less than ten hours - and I just hope this goes straight to your veins and encourages you, and that you believe even a fraction of everything I just said, because it's aaaaaall true! (PS, sorry for the babbling review ^_^;)
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From steisi on February 18, 2008
Oh, love! The fat that you'd updated this practically made my day! It was a more than awsome chapter. The anointment before the party was especially amusing! As was the scene where poor Max found out our beloved General fancied going commmando! I was in stitches by that point, really I was! The karaoke was a great idea too. Too bad it wasn't Cloud who got to moon the audience! Hehehe...Anyway, I really hope you update again soon! I loved the small part you wrote in Zack and Sephiroth's point of view and wish you'd consider adding more such moments in the future. The kiss was...hot, as cliche as that may sound. It was a prequel of things to come, in my opinion, and damn worth the wait! Kisses, hon!
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From Ellaer on February 18, 2008
Yay! The boy got his man! Or is it the other way around? Nevermind :D. Will you be illustrating the kissing scene? It's really, really, really, hot. *fans self*. Sephiroth the sly dog, feeling up Cloud that way, and Cloud loves it too. If I'm already hot and bothered by them snogging, I have no idea what will happen when they really get it on. This is a riot to read~ you made this SephCloud fangirl uber happy today.
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From SavannahMarie on February 17, 2008
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wont lie - I totally screamed at The Point Of Makeout. I screamed and hooted and hollered for our sweet sensuous young Cloud.
Oh MAN. You are still insanely brilliant - and don't EVER SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN!!!!!! You disappeared for far too long young missus! Next time, a fair amount of butt-booting will be in order!
But yes! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
BOOM SHAKA-LAKA!!
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From BlackBlade on February 09, 2008
This is the most awesome Cloud/Seph story I have ever had the pleasure to read. You have a very refreshing way of writing. Your Cloud character really cracks me up. He is LOVELY! I really enjoy your Seph as well. He is very unique and I love it that you make him really human and acting his age. The Slang idea is brilliant.
I seriousely can't wait for the next update. Please HURRY THE FUCK UP!!!! Just kidding ;)
Your story has me hooked somewhat fierce!
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From SavannahMarie on February 07, 2008
Ohhhh how I LONG for an update (insert much moaning here).
I know you cannot rush Greatness, but you can certainly encourage it. :)
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From Eveechan on February 02, 2008
Dear god, you have no idea how much I've been anticipating this next chapter. I mist have checked for updates twice a day XD
This chapter just about killed me, I laughed so hard!
Keep up the good work! I will be keeping a close eye out for future chapters
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From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2008
XD .....if it makes Sephy hornyer.

So far i like it.
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From spookydaedalus on January 30, 2008
a long awaited chapter, but it was worth the wait :p

Love your characters and their interactions. Your orignal chars are pretty interesting too. Just can't wait for next installment ! - and CLoud and Sephiroth kissing and fucking like rabbits :p
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From steisi on January 30, 2008
Hello, love! I finally registered here and can now review your one-of-a-kind, deliciously perfect story! I've been anxiously checking for updates daily and was really miserable I couldn't tell you what a great job you were doing with this fic before. I absolutely love Cloud's character. And I'm very happy your Sephiroth isn't just some stuck up, cold, emotionless fighting machine. He actually has a personality, imagine that! I honestly hope you update again soon! Kisses from your number one fan, darling!
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From snnj11220 on January 29, 2008
This was such a good chapter.

I am happy to see that Seph feels the same way about Cloud. And its funny because if Seph thinks that he is a pervert I wonder what he would think if he knew what Cloud was thinking.

And I said it once and I'll say it again I love Cloud's mom. Mother and son are too funny together.

And I can't blame Seph for not likely Aeris, I don't like her either.

Btw I went to your website and checked out the pictures for Blonde Ambition, you've got talent.

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From SavannahMarie on January 29, 2008
Firstly: I KNOW THAT FUCKING INFOMMERCIAL!!!!!!!!!
I died laughing at the sleep talking.
DIED.
Upon reanimation, I couldn't help but LOVE how you've finally written again from Sephiroth's point of view. I had been hope-hope-HOPING you would - and again you executed/wildly surpassed all expectations. God you rock.
Speaking of rock.. so our little Cloud got his obnoxious drumming habits from his rocksta' daddy eh?
SWEET.
And I couldn't help but notice how you wriggled in ol' Seph's gravitation to Cloud's left side der at de end.
Oh you sneaky sneaky little pinata of yarns, you - I shall pelt thee with blows of lurrv and affection until ye burst and let fall 'round my deepest desires.
MAKE HASTE!!!
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From Ellaer on January 28, 2008
I feel so bad that the first thing that came on my mind after reading this is "OMG, SEPHY IS A VIRGIN!1!11!!!." Lol, that's just too cute. And damn if he isn't one fine man in the SWAT uniform, and Cloud looks like the prettiest jailbait in the Condor Scout uniform.

Nice story development with that subtle Aeris vs. Sephiroth moment. Really interested to see how that plays out.

I think my favourite moment is a toss up between Seph's fantasies or that he walked on Cloud's left. That's just too precious.
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From Ellaer on January 23, 2008
Loving your story a lot. Love your Cloud's taste in music, a boy right after my own heart. And Sephiroth too, bless his sexy-Indie soul. This is not much a review as it is fangirl-ism. Heehe. It's refreshing to see an AU SephCloud fic with a different take. Keep it up :D
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From SavannahMarie on January 22, 2008
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssse update!!!! I've got severe withdrawels and you mah crack-momma!!
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