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Reviews for Blonde Ambition

By : sephcounttheways

From ANON - Yuutousei on April 14, 2011
Bluh, too lazy to log in. So, you don't know how much it means to me to see a new chapter put up. It was exactly the push I needed to fuckin' finish writing my paper. It was just ridiculously cute and it made me smile and feel... I dunno, extremely awesome. It made for a great ending on a day that was actually pretty aiight despite classes and shit.

I've decided that I'm going to reread this bitch from the beginning... And again when you and your beta finish with the remastered version. And I kinda liked the italics, hahaha.

Oh gog, it's 4 in the morning and I have a 10 am class... Let me wrap it up and head to sleep. Three years of awesomness and crazy generals and even crazier blondies - what's not to love?
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From ANON - Mirien on April 10, 2011
Oh nooooo! I've been rereading in anticipation of the new chapter and it looks like the formatting for chapter 24 has gone all funky...and worse, I can't seem to see chapter 25, even though I got notification it went up yesterday! *claws at screen* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Damn technology! Gimme my Blonde Ambition!!!
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From ANON - Aiko on April 10, 2011
>.> As much as I'd love to read this chapter, it is made difficult by the rampant coding that seems to have escaped. Halp?
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From ANON - Sciamachy on April 10, 2011
Um, aff.net kind of chewed the chapter up and spat it back out with bits of questionable substance all over it. Just letting you know.
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From ZombiePocky on March 21, 2011
Oh my sweet jesus you are glorious. I've actually read all of your stuff, and some of it more than once. XD BUT SRSLY. *worships* THERE ARE OTHER PEOPLE WHO KNOW THE KAISER CHIEFS. *squee* May I sire your children? Anyways. *hands cake* Congrats on being awesome.

Callum
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From mizperceived on February 07, 2011
holy fuck.. i just spent 2 days straight reading this.. this..
*SQUEALS IN DELIGHT*
i think i was hooked way back in chapter 2 or 3.. the mentioning of uncle jessie painting over michelle's bunny..WHO THE FUCK THINKS TO PUT THESE RELATABLE THINGS IN STORIES! you are awesomesauce.
it just got better from that point on..
i simply love this story..
thank you for sharing it for all these years =)
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From ANON - Caz on February 03, 2011
So, wow... I just finished reading Blonde Ambition and I just got to say that you are an absolutely, amazing writer. I laughed a lot, I got nervous for the characters, I got sad (maybe even cried a little). You made me fall in love with the characters in this story. I couldn't read through this story fast enough and loved every minute of it. Also can I just say something about the whole thing about love in this? You got the emotions and feeling and hurt and caring that any one who has been in love can admit to feeling. I blew my mind how well you were able to hit the nail on the head, and it's not an easy thing to do. This is a fantastic story and I'm sad to see it's end. Keep writing and I cant wait to see what you come out with next!
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From ANON - MibuWolf/MiruKail on January 04, 2011
Emotional reviewing time:

Did you know that it's been about three and a half years since you started writing this? I've been following it since the beginning and it feels like we've all gone on this epic journey together. Three years is HISTORY, seph. I was eighteen when I started reading it and since then, I've lived my life through a shitload of tragedies, met a metric fuck ton of people, and changed a thousand times over... all the while following as Seph and Cloud fumbled their way to true love. As odd as it may seem, this story of yours has been a constant for me. It's been there as I went from an idealistic teenager to a rather cynical twenty-something year old and comforted me at the worst of times. It's like... I don't even know. I guess it's sort of like an old shoe: When you look at it, you know where you've travelled with it and you know where it's taken you, and you can't help but feel grateful for it.

To be honest, Blonde Ambition is a lot more for me than a simple fanfiction created by a humble fanfiction writer with something to say. It's also a lot more for me than a journey we all shared for a period of time. Believe it or not, it is actual the first story that told me, "Hey, look! It's okay to be original. It's okay to be yourself. You have something that's untouchable." You demonstrated all of this not just with Cloud's growth as a character but with your writing style. You gave fresh air to a fandom teeming with over-used perspective. You let Cloud tell his story without feeling the need to weigh him down with restrictions and fandom must-haves. You lived the message you were sending through Cloud. I felt empowered by it all. I remembered thinking that somewhere out there was a writer who GOT IT, a writer who had so much experience with being different that he or she was able to make Cloud's journey believable.

I know it sounds weird but that originality gave me a fuckton of insight throughout these past three years. Whenever I was feeling depressed at being the odd-man-out, I remembered that you and your story were out there, being different in the face of adversity and ROCKING IT... if not you then definitely your story.

Thank you so much for letting us go on this journey with you. Here's wishing everyone three more years of successful journeying. You rock, sephcounttheways.

-MiruKail, MibuWolf
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From ANON - Akahoshi on December 21, 2010
I have not even read this chapter yet, but the fact that it exists is making me deliriously happy. The firm Christmas lunch-party thing is about to start and I am totally going to snag a laptop and go turk off in an empty corner somewhere so I can read. I cannot gush over your writing enough. Your creativity, your humor, your depth. Best thing ever. It's so infectious, the "Run Bitches Run" playlist I based off the songs in this fic is now my favorite. So yeah. You and your fic are everything that is good in my world and I have an office to sneak into.
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From Dreamfool on December 16, 2010
I was afraid that this chapter would be a let down, most endings are. It's like the journey is over so who cares how it ends. You saved the best for last.

Sephiroth's birthday was adorable, no other word for it. Then the s�ance for the pop-star who isn't dead. I would think that as a gay teenager Cloud would watch GLEE and there for know Madonna is still alive, but since he's in the military I'll forgive him. I was laughing so hard, for so long my throat hurt. All I can say about the subway scene is Cloud really needs to learn when to stop drinking. I'm sooo glad I don't have Cloud's family. I thought he was blowing it out of proportion. And I officially want a boyfriend like Seph.

Thank you for taking three years to write the most inspiring, hilarious, and utterly real story I have ever come across. And I'd re-think that whole "I'll keep writing as long as you keep reading" thing cause honey, I�ll be trying to explain to the nurses why I was sneaking out at 2 in the morning to read gay porn. And you�ll be explaining to your nurses why you�re writing it.

PS What did Zack get for his birthday
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From ANON - gwyllion on December 09, 2010
I EFFING LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!!! This chapter is awesome!!!! I laughed on so many parts. Especially with the "ladies" of teh Strife family. Hahahaha!!!!! This sure passed down the genes to Cloud. XD And teh ending was the sweetest I've ever seen of Seph. Not only he went through th nightmare of enduring those women, but when he's with cloud, he can be so real and romantic. My love for this fic has grown twicefold and wish it will never end. Looking forward to reading more! THANK YOU!
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From ANON - Levynite on December 04, 2010
Yes! Yes!! Yes!!! YES! YES!! YES!!!

*summons her entire 3 year's of choir and drill sergeant practice*
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I anxiously await for more more moremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!! And I simply cannot stop myself from keeping it to a single exclamation point; I am that freaking excited and thrilled that I finally got the read the final chapter of part one!
Please excuse me while I wake up my entire neighbourhood on an early 3am Sunday morning by screaming my joy into the darkness.
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From ANON - Jastiss on November 29, 2010
Un-fucking-believable!

The end of this is just so... awesome. I am in love. Coming from not wanting to read this fic because it was all AU and such to following it to its current end... wow. Let me tell you. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART. How will we know when you write it?! We need a mailing list update or something! Ahahaha

Thank you for writing this. Honest. :D
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From LamicaLee on November 27, 2010
I only have one thing to say because you already know how awesome I think you are...

Keep on rockin' in Midgar! xD
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From AloraCorwyn on November 27, 2010
Okay, one more thing, and I rarely do this: if you'd like another beta, I'd like to offer my services. I've only offered to work with two other authors because I'm insanely picky about the quality of the storyteller. I think you write incredible characters and engaging plots; you're one of few fanfiction writers who bends and breaks the canon so beautifully that we hardly notice you're doing it and when we do realize it, we don't much care. If you're interested or if you'd like to test the water or ask about the other authors I beta for or anything else, shoot me an email at aerawyn.edits@gmail.com
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