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Reviews for Don't Drink the Green Liquid

By : Jiangling
  • From coldxfire on January 04, 2008
    "Right, suspicions confirmed. This had to be the creepiest dream Basch had ever had in his life. How desperately he wished he would just wake up screaming and it would all be over with."

    This line made me laugh out loud. Now my housemates think I am crazy. I hope you're happy.

    A wonderful, sweet and clever story- I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
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  • From maderine on January 01, 2008
    "It turned me into a cat!"
    "..."
    "I got better."

    I'm sorry. I'm having a "Holy Grail" moment...
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  • From Streti on December 09, 2007
    Oo, FFXII het. And genderbender! That counts, right? The characterization is spot on, especially for Balthier, who I can really see wanting to try out such a "fascinating opportunity" if it ever presented itself.

    The paragraph with '“Oh dear.” Basch was not...' seems a little bit too complicated at that point, the language and structures in that one might have conveyed his stunned reaction or non-reaction better.

    The sex scene was a little bit surprising. I was thinking it was foreplay, and they were already done! Then again, I write different sort of stories, myself. Description of "Balt-her" could have had more detail, too. Short hair, long hair? How did the clothes fit or not fit? These details are more important in gender-bender than normally.

    Was expecting more smex, but it was a good, fun story.
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