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From ANON - Kuromei on October 01, 2009
*sniffle* Oh, how I love happy endings. TTwTT

Regrettably, I wasn't there since the beginning, having discovered the Shattered series towards the end of Shattered Dreams. But, I went back to read everything from start to finish, and I've commented on every chapter since I got all caught up. ;3 That I will never regret. ^w^ Like I think I said before, it takes dedication to finish something four years in the making, and I'm glad I became a fan when I did. *heart*

But a Tseng/Seph fic as a thank-you gift? To who? OwO *tries not to get her hopes up* And I'll be looking forward to that Chronicles of Valentine update, as well as more chapters of War of the Animum. ^w^ You're writing's too good to pass up, no matter what. =D *glomps Draco-san*
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From ANON - Nelleh on October 01, 2009
...well, than I'll do the weeping, hon'.

*sniffles*

Thank you. It has been a good two years for me now. I _adore_ this Saga, and I'll be forever thankfull for you writing it down. It feels... so good, so beautiful. You are a damn good writer. Did I ever tell you that?

Ah, Yuffie. I like her, damn, I do. Thank you for giving us her and Nanaki (and grandkids); this way it all ended so fine, so peacefully. I'll keep an eye on you, of course, and I'll be reading EVERYTHING you write from now on. The day you become an author and give out your own books, remember Nelleh -
- 'cause I'll be buying them all! *lol*�

*HUGS*

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From ANON - Nelleh on September 28, 2009
*snort*

I got the name wrong, of course. Kuromei it is :D
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From ANON - Nelleh on September 28, 2009
No, no, nooo! I don't want it to end! *wails*

Do you know just how MUCH I love your Saga? I've been reading them for so long, that I can't even express how much I am in awe... *inhales*

You are a wonderful author. I love that story-teller brain of yours. It's like... sayin goodbye to something really loved. I hope you understand that the Arc's of FFVII you've written are among my absolut favorites in this genre. It's pure pleasure to read anything written by you and...
Oh, sweet gods - five hundred years later? This is like saying goodbye, then. Thank you - thank you so much! It has been amazing, funny and beautiful; thank you for sharing this with us. I'm pretty sure Kurenai agrees ;)

*hugs*

PS. I died reading this chapter. *grin*

/Graw

Honestly; you have a gift.
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From ANON - Kuromei on September 27, 2009
O//w//O Yay~ XD Tseng and Seph finally....! X3 *superblush* You're right, though. Those two aren't really suited to that kind of lovey-dovey, heartfelt confession stuff, anyway. Besides, I'm sure Tseng would be able to tell, without Sephiroth having to say anything. ^w^

And wow, spending four years on one continuous story arc... That's dedication. ;3 You're an author worthy of respect, and hugs. ^w^ *hugs Draco-san*

Just one more update, then you can work on Chronicles of Valentine! XD Or, you know, War of the Animum. ;3 *hugs one more time*
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From ANON - Nelleh on September 25, 2009
OH, sweet gods! *laughing ass off*

Cute?! Kadaj, cute? Holy f... Well, it's Sephiroth so he is, er, allowed to think so. Yeah. *LOLOL* And, see - they are just a bunch of mistreated kids that are in a DIRE need of love, any kind of love, really. I think Sephy will have his hands full of siblings the nearest future. *grin*

*blinks*

"Do you like children?"

*mwwahahahhahaha!!!!* Priceless! Shit, that was PERFECT! She wants kids with him! Oh, so simple and so damn right! *snort* I can see a bunch of small terrors attacking both Kadaj and Sephy... *lol* Again - just perfect! Man, I gotta say Yuffie is a devious and sly one ;D

And, beautiful Yazoo. Having nightmares? Of course the music helps, and with music comes Reis. I think they make a nice couple... and DAMN! YES! Sometimes it's the Princess that saves the Prince, dammit! And, it's kind of sweet - he wants a strong woman to be his mate. He wants a normal life, with a couple of kids and just... you know - everything a normal person wishes for.

This chapter was so nice, so warm. Thank you :)
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From ANON - Kuromei on September 24, 2009
lmao Iliana! XD OMG I can see the smiles on their faces when they meet. *fake shudder* Scary~ ;3 I'd be worried for Loz, too. rofl

*looks at Kadaj and Archer* Awwwww~www! ^//w//^~*heart* And as for Reis and Yazoo.... I hope Reeve doesn't kill him, either. XP But, Reis made the first move, so there's nothing he can do about it, as far as I'm concerned. So HA! >D

SMUT! XD Bring it, honey! >D ... In three days. XP *hugs Draco-san and waits*
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From ANON - Nelleh on September 22, 2009
Waaaaahhh!!! *fangirling*

Oh. MY. GODS! Sephy in glasses?!! Gaaah...*dies* Do you... do you know HOW HOT that is?! O.O *sigh* Oh, man... you do know how to paint a very romantic AND sexy scene, don't you? *GRIN* It was simply PERFECT!

And, Valenwind is *purrrrr* lovely! *lol* With said Lady Luck, of course. Please add a Hawai-dressed Vincent and a horny Cid and you have a very, very, VERY happy Nelleh over here.

PS. Zack, cleaning? Oh, please say he was dancing!!! *I just got a new kink* I can totally see him doing it, too. Sweet gods, how I want him to be my maid... O.O

PS.2. Yuffi ROCKS! I would eat that lovely be-tailed male for breakfast too, you know ;)!

Ok. This chapter is just perfect! I'm already dying for the next! *yays you* I ADORE you!!
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From ANON - Kuromei on September 22, 2009
Coooo~ooool~! O//w//O What I'd give to see a sunrise like the one Vincent saw... -//w//- Then again I'd need a boyfriend. lol X3 And I finally see what was up with the burnt potatoes. I should've know Yuffie would be involved. lol XD

*gigglesnort* Romance novels and glasses? O//w//O The novel part was just plain funny, but the glasses.... OMG You put Sephiroth in glasses. *dies of happiness* X//w//X

19! 19! Chapter 19! OMG It's so close! XD Who could possibly be a match for Loz? What kind of promise are we talking about? And I know what you mean when you say "Sephiroth extends his family." ;3 But that doesn't make me any less excited! *squeak!* XDD See you in three days, Draco-san! ^//o//^
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From ANON - Nelleh on September 21, 2009
*gah*

Poor, poor Archer! *wanna hug him and give him Kadaj in a pink bow*

But, still - I feel so sorry for all; Barret, Zack, Tseng, the Turks... Elena and Marlene were so important for everyone. And, then we have the issue with the three brothers. Somehow is rather funny - the idea of them being taken in by our heroes. I just wonder how they are going to treat the kids and I really hope they don't get hurt in the long run.

Ah, the date (dinner) thing! I wan't to see Tseng and Sephy fool around now! *grin* Oh, they are SO worth the wait... *lol*

Thanks for a great chapter!
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From ANON - Kuromei on September 19, 2009
Yay! The brothers will live! XD In custody and under surveillance, yes, but they're alive. X3 Poor Archer, though, getting ganged up on like that. I hope they see that Kadaj is much more mature than he seems to be. In fact, I think he's a little more mature than Reno was at that age. I've read the Reno/Reeve backstory, so I like to think I know what I'm talking about. lol X3

But lol, only Tseng can pin the great General against the wall and kiss all the sense out of him. XD Why is it that I love seeing Sephiroth all flustered? ^//w//^

Moving right along, yay for the interlude that's coming! X3 Cid gets a new airship, and what's this about Nanaki burning potatoes? Sounds like fun. X3 And what kind of secret of Sephiroth's isn't scary? =/ Eeeee~! I wanna seeeee~! XD *hugs Draco-san*
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From ANON - Kuromei on September 18, 2009
Meep! This updated on the 15th, and I missed it! DX And it was such a great one, too. ;__;

I could have sworn Aeris was still in Rocket Town. O_o;; Maybe I need to read through the story again and refresh my memory. lol X3 Still, it's nice that she was there to help Sephiroth. And Zack. =3

And the reunion of Yazoo and Reis... *sigh* I'm so happy for them. -//w//- But the question still remains; what will happen to the brothers? I'm so glad today's an update day, otherwise the wait would kill me. lol X3 *hugs Draco-san*
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From ANON - Nelleh on September 16, 2009
Oh...

So much peace in the piano-scene. It was very soothing and oh, so beautiful. Yazoo should be a pianist, not a murderer, dammit. I hope he can have a future with Reis, too.

Oh, and Aerith (so sweet!) helping Sephy out? Perfectly gracious! *heart-ache* And, then... Tseng.

I was a little bit afraid he'd started to drink again, but the words he said HURT AS HELL! �Elena wouldn't approve.� (again - perfect!) Of course Elena would mind! *wanna hug him*

:)

Sephiroth is wonderful, dammit! He doesn't even know it... which makes me wanna weep. Gods, I love the way you write him!
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From ANON - Nelleh on September 13, 2009
Oh, I liked the three brothers so _much_. Yazoo was cute, Kadaj was sweet and Loz was totally loving his brothers. Oh, so perfect... I loved it! *sigh* I hope they get a life very much like this in the end - with an older brother watching out for them, of course.

Archer getting kissed like that? Hahha... poor bastard! Talk about getting hooked on a lovely boy. And, the baby coming - shit, Reeve's nerves and Reno... *snort*

Ok. Totally loved this chapter! (and, dear GODS - you are spoiling us! I hope you take time to eat and sleep, too)

*hugs*
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From ANON - Kuromei on September 13, 2009
Yaaaa~y! XD Finally, Loz's POV! And... *snigger* Yazoo in an apron and a ponytail. X3 Why can I only see him in pink and frills? lol XD

"Just in case." Yet another set of famous last words. X3 I really hope they can work things out. And Reis is going to visit in the next chapter? Man, I can just see the ass-tearing she could give to both Reeve and Reno. lmao X3 And I still want to see who Sephiroth asks for advice!

Good thing there's an update in two days. ;3 See you then, Draco-san! ^w^ *hugs*
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