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By : Savaial

From miniac on May 13, 2008
Pleeease finish this story *makes huge puppy eyes*. It is the best Seph/Aer fic on this entire site. I worship it! Your writing is supreme and I can only bow before the master...
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From Meepyish on May 03, 2008
Best.
Seph/Aer.
Fic.
EVER.
-worships-

Update soon! :)
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From KristinaDalton on April 29, 2008
I cannot wait to see these two finally hop in the sack.

The writing is always spectacular, but the UST tends to distract me like mad.
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From LamicaLee on April 22, 2008
Can't wait for more! Even though I can't review sometimes, I'm always reading your updates. You're an awesome writer, hope to see more soon. {as for the paragraph format for my SxC fic, my computer is very unreliable and I wanted to put it up as soon as possible.}
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From SavannahMarie on April 19, 2008
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD IT'S BEEN TOO LONG!!!!!

But I am here! And I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! GOD you have done such a great job with this!! And don't even get me STARTED on your little yaoi side jobs 'cause HOT-DAMN I'll never stop!

I just can't believe how cozy everyone has gotten. It's unfreakingbelievable. We've got car poolin' to the courthouse, Seph hookin' up boy Reno with ol' man Valentine, Cloud seeking Hojo for on-the-go medical advice, and (insert cute little laughter fit Here) are the Turks, General, Professor, and ex-members of AVALANCHE seriously going out for fucking pizza?

Well shit-the-bed, yes. Yes they ARE.

And whaaaaat is this - Hojo got GAME?!?!! Miss Thang is so gettin' bent over an examination table.. I don't care how old 'n' greasy the gimpy little shit is - the dude is an undeniable total effing freak in the sack.

In fact, I would do him.

So! The Golden Lemon fast-approaches, eh? I know how you feel about your sex scenes, so I want to say just take your time and no worries - you're far too awesome for sweat. This fic has been phenomenal.

I'm sorry for being away for so long. World of Warcraft? Familiar with it? Yeah. Well it apparently SUCKS the life and soul from housemates. We've got three computers in the house and I swear to god World of fucking Warcraft plagues every single screen from sunup to sundown.

I'm reading/writing you from Mom's house. Took a three hour road trip for you, dahling. Had to see what the hell was happening!

Mom thinks I came down so she could see the gran'baby.

Laff! @ Mom!

I'll be here for a week, hope to read more from you soon :).

-Savannah
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From tarynwanderer on April 18, 2008
Again, great chapter! I'm glad to see Sephiroth's...appetite is back. ;)

Good luck with writing the next chapter--I hear you on the difficulty of getting stuff done recently. I'm behind in nearly everything! For my and your other readers' sakes, though, I hope your next chapter comes out soon, haha. Have you planned out how many chapters you have left?
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From sephcounttheways on April 18, 2008
:busts into laughter: SAV! SAV! A HARD ON FOR JUSTICE?! PFFFFFFT!! I'll be lollerskating all morning over that one.

This is a cute little chapter. Much love for everyone, but now I worry about our dramatic little claustrophobe. What's wrong with Cloudy?

But we can't worry too much about that. No. We all know what time it is.

IT'S BABY MAKING TIME.

p.s. If you have the guts to do a Hojo lemon, we ALL would be baffled..but eternally grateful.
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From Savaial on April 17, 2008
Sephcounttheways, thanks! You think Hojo needs some lovin? Should I do a shortie for him?

Chibitaryndemon, I try to do updates as often as possible but spring is kicking my ass! And yes, I think plot is sexy too. I��m glad you like my Aerith. So many people fluff her up while dumbing her down. �� Hope you like the next chapter!

Hunewearl, OhHo! Someone else who thinks Hojo needs laid. I��ll have to do something now! Glad you enjoyed your biology lesson, lol. Priapism is a terrible condition. Maybe Laelin had a hard-on for justice?

Gslinger, it��s not over yet. Close but not yet. Got the sex coming next, then the follow up.

Ardwynna Morrigu, cruel and unusual was just what I figured a child abuser should get. If I had my way�K
No soapbox today, lol.
Might have to follow up on what Hojo does to his scientific competitor�K

A great big thank you to my readers and reviewers! You are the reason I write.

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From ArdwynnaMorrigu on April 16, 2008
O_o Just how long was the judge sitting there in that condition? Anything upwards of four hours and... well, Aeris can fix it anyhow, I suppose. Cruel and unusual punishment for a cruel and unusual man. Even if it's not actually carried out the threat sounds just right for giving Havars a well-deserved dose of fear.
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From RJaneyP on April 16, 2008
Oh please, tell me its not over yet, I don't want it to end. G
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From hunewearl on April 16, 2008
hahaha, Hojo's gonna get laid! And i learned something new about the male biology today, very interesting. I also loved Sheila's punishment and Aertih's possessiveness of Sephiroth. Keep up the good work!
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From tarynwanderer on April 15, 2008

Yay, an update! (I really admire your speed in posting new chapters, but it just makes me want moremoremore!) Another great chapter, just like every single one before it. You've got a great flair for creating tension--not just sexual but atmospheric. I don't think you delayed the gratification of all that sexual tension too long at all! Delayed gratification is the best! (And besides, too many fics have them jumping into bed together without an even semi-plausible plot. Plot is sexy!)

And yup, I'm a big AeriSeph shipper, but I don't mind some yaoi here or there. I actually liked that you worked in the fact that Cloud here is bi...it's completely believable to me. I see a lot of relationship possibilities with Zack, Cloud and Sephiroth. hehe. :)

I also meant to mention that I really enjoy your portrayal of Aeris. She's sweet and powerful, but has a lot of spirit and a bit of a devilish streak to her. She's very likable!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck!
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From sephcounttheways on April 15, 2008
Good chappie, good chappie.

Couldn't love Sephiroth more, he's an absolute doll.

Aeris is lovely - I think she deserves some drag impersonators or something.

And Hojo needs some lovin! Yesss a botanist, ay?.. oh la la!

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From Savaial on April 15, 2008
Sephcounttheways, I�m glad you liked claustrophobic Cloud, lol. Just a quickie I decided suited him. And hey, Reno can smell the burning ground Vincent walks on... XD Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thanks also for checking out my other shit in the yaoi section ;-)

Hunewearl, thanks! Crazy driving Cloud is my favorite ;-) And I can totally see Hojo randomly electrocuting people, even if he is reformed. Sheila done got smacked too, lol.
Hope you liked the judge�s problem�
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Chibitaryndemon, thank you for reading and reviewing! I like AeriSeph fics a lot (obviously) and I�m always glad to know another shipper. I like yaoi too, though.
Your review was good for me in that I wanted to know if Sephiroth had a believable transformation.
One of the things that helps me to stay in first person POV is to just imagine I am that person. Granted, Sephiroth is not the easiest person to image oneself!
Glad you like Hojo, that crazy motherfu**er.
Sexual tension coming to a head, I am glad to say. Perhaps I delayed too long but it was just the way the story wanted to come out for me. Thanks for the review, truly!

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From tarynwanderer on April 14, 2008
This story is completely amazing--I love it! I was up until 4 in the morning yesterday reading through the entire thing! It is truthfully one of the best AeriSeph fics I've ever read.

You have Sephiroth repenting and growing as a person while not becoming spineless or out of character, as happens in so many fics. There's an interesting, plausible resurrection premise and the intrigue makes the story so tension-filled, even if it wasn�t an AeriSeph I think I�d enjoy reading it. It�s amazingly written in first person POV�something that has eluded me in my own writing, I�ll admit�and you manage to write both Aeris and Sephiroth as entirely convincingly. You've even got me liking Hojo!

And of course, the atmosphere of sexual tension you've created between Aeris and Sephiroth is so thick it practically hurts, and I think I'll lose it if they don't get it on in the next few chapters. ;)

I absolutely cannnot WAIT until you update again! I'll definitely be checking back daily. All the best!
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