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By : Savaial
  • From hunewearl on April 05, 2008
    this chapter just made my day. Oh and the humor!!! So funny, especially the hugeness of sephiroth, omg, i can't even imagine. That threat that sephiroth made at the end though, i can't wait till he follows up on it. Very good job on the lemon! I don't know how many times i did a mental swoon.
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  • From KristinaDalton on April 04, 2008
    Woo-hoo! That was great! I love the way he talks to her. So hot!

    KD
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  • From Savaial on April 03, 2008
    Sephcounttheways quote- "I wanted a fiery, blistering cum-shot from Seph, but I'll take what I can get."
    Well, it will get better. I had my reasons for the half lemon. Though I don't think at this point anyone is still reading this long-winded thing to know, except for you and a few others.

    As for the massive penis issue, we ARE going from Aerith's point of view and she's never seen one up close and personal. To her any ding-dong could look big, lol. Personally, I think he'd have a big one; he's got big everything else. :-0

    Thanks for reading and reviewing! I need it.

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  • From sephcounttheways on April 02, 2008

    Good lemon. Swell! I wanted a fiery, blistering cum-shot from Seph, but I'll take what I can get.

    And is it officially canon now that Sephiroth has a massive ding dong? I mean, seriously. We've perpetuated the rumor enough, it must be true.
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  • From Savaial on April 01, 2008
    I’ve missed you too Savannah! By now you are…moved? Supposed to be the 30th…

    Heh, I’d like to have a Teddy Hojo, aka MY version of a redeemed Hojo. The canon Hojo is a scary, warped thing!

    Aerith is about to be awoken by horney Sephiroth, don’t worry. I’m writing the sex scene now. I plan to have it finished by late tomorrow or early the next day. I am not so good at writing smut and must take extra time to make sure it isn’t stupid.

    Glad you liked the fight! Fighting is MUCH easier to write than sex, I think. Although, in some cases they ARE the same thing…hmmm…

    Lol, Cloud just might want to dick the General at that. Can you imagine the lovely angst-fest?

    “But I can’t fuck you, Sephiroth! You killed my mom and burned my home town, killed Aerith and offed Tifa’s dad!”

    “That was a long time ago, Cloud. How about if I just fuck you? Would that be better?”

    “Argh! No, not really…well…MAYBE. No, I take that back, NO!”

    (Sigh) “Just bend over. I promise you won’t be thinking about any dead people while I widen the hole in your ass.”



    Hunewearl, thanks for that vote! I start to gag at too much lovey-dovey myself. And yep, I’m happy to tell you the sex is coming up next. Might be a day or two- I have company coming and another job on Thursday. I’m working like a fiend on it right now. Be prepared for humor amongst the horny- I couldn’t envision their first moves toward intimacy without a certain element of funny/fun.

    Thanks for your observation on my narrative style! By limiting the POV to two, it’s easier for the writer and the reader both, I believe. I don’t do a lot of third person but I have been known to attempt it.

    As always, thanks for reading and reviewing! I’m a feedback whore and I’m not ashamed!


    Sephcounttheways, so glad you liked it! But don’t be sad. Good shit coming up, I promise. Thanks for giving me your eye warble, lol.


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  • From sephcounttheways on April 01, 2008
    :eyes warble:

    Simply lovely.
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  • From hunewearl on April 01, 2008
    *sigh* another heartmelting scene done flawlessly. The one between father and son was good, not too lovey dovey, and the one between sephiroth and a barely concious aerith melted me (again!). I'm glad you didn't get to the sex immediately, but is it going to come soon? You've left me waiting and waiting and now with this, *swoon*. But take your time if you want, it'll make that scene all the more perfect with the anticipation.
    I know this might be a bit late into the story to say this, but i want to compliment you on the structure of how you narrate this story through the eyes of Aertih and Sephiroth, it really allows for me to understand situations better and really get to know how they react and all the emotions they're experiencing.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!!! (but don't overwork yourself, if you need a rest, take it, i'll be patient)
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  • From SavannahMarie on March 31, 2008
    Sweet damnation have I missed you. I've had serious and indecent pining issues concerning your sweet ass - I just wanted you to know that.

    It's all just too true to ignore.

    My god, where to begin? My time here is limited, but christ do I want to pick this Thing apart. I just can't get over the sheer awesomeness of the fic's complexity. I'm loving it more now than ever before.

    Shit, I'm going to have to make this short.. spent the majority of my allotted time just getting caught up.

    You were right on when you called Hojo a teddy bear. In fact, I'll be needing him for my own (frequent) cuddling purposes.

    Aerith? Wake the fuck up - Seph is horny.

    Sephiroth? Word, homie.

    I was very, very pleased at seeing a REAL fight scene. Sans weapons it was raw and dirty and and and just - exactly right, ya know? Needed. I so badly want to delve into the subject deeper, because it was truly a superior move on your part.. excellent excellent decision. Made all the difference, in my world.

    It also ripped a whole lotta "HEEELL YUH!!!"'s outta me. Aint no lie. It's always nice to feel some enthusiasm of that magnitude. I was eatin' it up. I wish I had the time to read it again.

    Oh, and ah, Cloud totally wants to dick the General.

    Just sayin'.

    Love-Love and Yours,
    Savannah
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  • From Savaial on March 31, 2008
    hunewearl, thank you! I opted to not do the sword fight because it was so well-used. Besides, who wouldn't want to see these two kick the shit out of each other? I appreciate the prod, the review, and the reads, believe me.

    sephcounttheways, heh, you make me want to write a cut-scene yaoi. I think I could swing it. Got a het scene coming up very soon. Anxious to see how you take it, oh you of the lovely man smut. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it so much!




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  • From sephcounttheways on March 31, 2008
    :fans self frantically: Oh my! Go for it boys!!! Hit him, Cloud! Kick him, Sephy!

    Eldon: Don't just stand there! Get the camera! Get the feathers! Get the chocolate pudding!
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  • From hunewearl on March 30, 2008
    Nice fight scene, i liked how Cloud and Sephiroth went for a more rougher aproach to a fight than the expected choreographed sword fight. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Savaial on March 30, 2008
    And by the way, Emeraldcrow, Happy Birthday!


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  • From Savaial on March 30, 2008
    sephcounttheways, be my guest! Take Hojo as your grandfather. He does awesome tricks for parties, up to and including turning into a...thing...a green thing... Take Vincent too, he's one you can rely on. Just don't put the two men in the same room together.

    KristinaDalton, thanks! This genre is difficult because everyone has their own idea about Seph's personality and I'm going to step on toes no matter what. But it is OOC/AU so no one can totally flame my sorry ass.

    Emeraldcrow, thank you! I'd be glad to help you if you want me to. My email is blackmasamune at aol dot com. Just send me your stuff and I'll look it over. I'm no expert but I have some tricks.
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  • From goldenlady88 on March 30, 2008
    your story has a great plot, your characters are given depth , your grammar is excellent and the POV is very well done. i love your story! i have taken mine down to fix it up a bit i should be putting it back on soon so i was wondering if you would read my first chapter and give me any advice you can so i can write at least as half have as good as you! please hurry with the next installment!
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  • From KristinaDalton on March 29, 2008
    I always have to preface my comments about this genre with, "I am ignorant." However, powerful mastery of the craft shines in any genre.

    Strong, prolific production of quality work, Sav.

    Kudos.
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