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By : Savaial
  • From KristinaDalton on March 29, 2008
    This is a big complex story in a difficult genre. Great job.
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 26, 2008
    Vincent is such a badass. B.A. BADASS.

    Can Hojo be my grandpa? I love his one-liners.
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  • From Savaial on March 26, 2008
    sephcounttheways, you ain't seen nothing yet with Cloud. Thanks for the read and review!
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 26, 2008
    Cloud is such a BITCH!

    .. I'm rather sad to see child Seph go.. byebye :waves:
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  • From Savaial on March 25, 2008
    So glad you got a laugh out of it, Savannah!
    You're taking a train? How romantic! I prefer that to flying but you can't smoke. I would die. The world hates smokers right now.
    Yeah, everything is going ok...for now... The extra work is killing me.

    "Silver Nightmare Industries" loves to serve you! And thanks for reading!

    Dear Sephcounttheways,

    Silver Nightmare Industries regrets to inform you that your order has been determined a health risk. Enclosed is your 600,000 gil. We apologize for this inconvenience. If you desire we can replace your order with Pre-Nibelheim Sephiroth.
    Again, sorry for this inconvenience.
    Thank you for reading and reviewing!


    hunewearl, thanks for telling me about the typo. I'll go look at that. I don't have a beta so I miss these things sometimes. Glad you like teenage Sephiroth, heh heh. Writing more now as we speak. Thanks for the R and R!


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  • From hunewearl on March 25, 2008
    Oh my, I'm really digging this new side of Sephiroth, there are so many more facets to him now. The teenage "stage" sucumbed me to the giggles. Well, to point out, there was a problem with one of the parenthesis in one of the last 2 chapters (46 or 47), it just gave me a little bump in the story, but it was no biggie really. I hope to see more updates from you soon, it's getting so exciting!!!!
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 25, 2008
    LOLLERBY ME IN THE TREETOP!

    Fuck me, this chapter was funny. And happy day, I check back and an update already! Oh, double the pleasure!

    When the FUCK does my child Sephiroth arrive?? Fedex stopped answering my phone calls.
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  • From SavannahMarie on March 24, 2008
    Oh my god! Hahaha! I laughed.. and laughed and laughed. Just what I needed, thank you. I love you for posting that chapter so soon.

    I'm actually still packing. My train doesn't leave until the 30th. I've got four days to get the rest of my house in order before the "relocubes" arrive to take my shit away. Being alone, I wouldn't mind your Sephiroth's busybee attitude and supapowers right about now.
    Thank you, again (for asking).

    I hope everything is going well on your end, I remember you mentioning some extra work being passed your way.. I know how that can be a curse and a blessing - I hope it's moreso the latter.

    Oh, and I've GOT to tell you.. That "Silver Nightmare Industries" thang? God that got me howling. Then I got the Angst/Guilt Ridden Cloud part and just fell completely apart.. Came all KINDS of undone.

    Keep rockin it mah sweet sistah!

    -Savannah
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  • From Savaial on March 24, 2008
    Sephcounttheways, don't worry. He doesn't. All he needed was foreknowledge. Thanks so much for sticking with this fic. I know it's dragging.

    Savannah, hey! Moved yet? Sorry, not going to give you THAT flip-out, but will make up for it, I promise. Got a fight scene and a fuck scene coming close upon one another and I thought I'd "choose my battles". Hope you're doing ok! And you know I love ya.






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  • From SavannahMarie on March 24, 2008
    I know this is short - and there is so much I want to say! I'm going to have to save it. Soon, soon, I promise.. I've just got entirely too much crap-tastic shit to do.

    Girl, ya know I adore ya.

    As far as these last couple chapters go... between my current state of anxiety and the hardcore nail-chewin' you've managed to thrust on top of it, I need a paper bag and a dark corner.

    God, but you better not stick Sephiroth outside that door without a close call of some sort.. I may be on the verge of a massive panic attack, but I still want mayhem.

    I'm a sick fuck like that.
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 24, 2008
    onos. I hope Seph doesn't flip out. :O
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 22, 2008
    :dies from laughter:

    Box that thing up! Can I get an angst-ridden Cloud, also? Me and Eldon have decided to quit our day jobs and become sweat shop pornography entreprenuers.
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  • From Savaial on March 22, 2008
    Dear Sephcounttheways,

    Congratulations on your good taste and eye for a bargain! The Adult/Child Sephiroth Model 666 Advent Issue is the best buy for your hard-earned gil. Enclosed in our patented Adamantium Box, your new addition to the family comes complete with several exciting features and a few, common-sense warnings.

    1. Adult/Child Sephiroth is self-cleaning. Baths are no issue for this model, however, great care should be taken not to introduce to sterile showers. Model may become hard to handle. We strongly urge all owners of this model to instal a whirlpool bath in their home specifically for the unit.

    2. Adult/Child Sephiroth is helpful around the house. Unit may be persuaded to perform duties his owner does not care for, as long as the owner uses chocolate bait.

    3. Adult/Child Sephiroth does not come equipped with Masamune. If Masamune is desired, another unit must be ordered. Try our Nibelheim unit for Slash-And-Burn Action! Order our Pro-Shinra/Hero Against Wutai model for all your military endeavors!

    Silver Nightmare Industries thanks you for your purchase. Should you have any questions of concerns, please feel free to contact us at Silvernightmarenexus@most-wanted.com. Our cutomer service representatives work twenty four hours a day just to serve you.

    We also offer Angst/Guilt-Ridden Cloud Strife, Martyr Aerith, and King-Pin Hojo.

    Remember, Silver Nightmare Industries is the only company to offer Automated Turks.
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 22, 2008
    little kid mind/big body Sephiroth is about 25 different shades of adorable. I love it, I want one, and I must have one. Do you accept paypal? Money order? Send me one right away.
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  • From Savaial on March 22, 2008
    Savannah, you crack me up so bad. Oh yeah. What a great review to coat the day! LOL, how about-

    "And this fine young girl is Darla, she's a very talented child."

    "Hi, Darla."

    (Darla's eyes roll into the back of her head as she sprouts two big wings.) "Hellllloooo," she booms in a voice to make Satan proud. Horns erupt from her forehead.

    "Now Darla, I told you not to do that anymore. You know how it scares people."

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    Seriously though, you'll see the two siblings again. And Cloud is in control of an orphanage, remember?
    As always, you make good observations on my fic. Thanks for dropping in the review section, my dear. And how is that move going for you? You should have everything under control by now, that is unless you've been shooting noisy things in your backyard again... ;-)
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