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By : Savaial
  • From Savaial on March 16, 2008
    Savannah, your review totally cracked me up. I have as much fun reading what you're going to say as I do writing this fic. Yeah, Seph is indeed a busy guy. He's about to get busier, too. And I do love putting Sephiroth with Avalanche members and Turks, especially the playful Reno. Thanks for reading and reviewing so faithfully, even if you gotta pry yourself off my neck to do it, lol.

    sephcounttheways, LOL. I was just talking to someone about Chuck and you bust out with that scenario. But don't blame Cloud for his impetuous nature, he loves kids. He just needed a fire lit under his pale ass. Still, I'll now hillariously and forever imagine a Chuck Norris kick by Sephiroth whenever I go back over this fic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



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  • From sephcounttheways on March 16, 2008
    Cloud : Alright, dudes. Let's go down and save some kids.

    Sephiroth and the rest of the world : Shut the fuck up, it wasnt even your idea. :roundhouse kick Chuck Norris style:
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  • From SavannahMarie on March 15, 2008
    AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! YES! Oh, YES!!

    That Sephiroth certainly is a busy bee, man oh man.

    I imagine that if writing Cloud, Vincent, Sephiroth, and Reno together (alas, if only Zack were alive!) for a gnarly kick-assing scene were half as fun as it was to read - then you're one having one hell of a grand time.

    You make the shameless fangirl in me squeal.

    Lawd I cannot WAIT to see all the lil freed chitlins!

    Keep rockin' me mamasita - I shall never wander from thy wonder! I am a barnacle upon thy smooth, rubbery whale throat.

    Parasitically yours,
    Savannah
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  • From Savaial on March 14, 2008
    Thanks, Savannah! You're my own, personal cheering squad. Look for even more development of our three main characters now, and even a little more from support people. We're getting close...
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  • From SavannahMarie on March 14, 2008
    That was Beautiful, Lou..
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  • From SavannahMarie on March 14, 2008
    OH SHIT! ANOTHER CHAPTER appeared after I posted my review!!
    Now that's fucking wicked.
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  • From SavannahMarie on March 14, 2008
    Ah, so we meet Havars! What a ballsy little shit! It's going to be awesome seeing him go down. He's gonna cause a shit-ton of more grief, I can tell, and THAT'S going to be fun to witness as well.
    Oh, and I can't believe you threw Aerith, Sephiroth, and Hojo into the same bed together for the night. Ha! I kept picturing the image in my head and every time it just.. I mean,
    It was just bizarre.
    But I loved it! I'm a huge fan of the constant uncomfortable situations your characters end up in. You execute every sticky, difficult scene flawlessly. I swear you could write Sephiroth into a yellow tutu with matching slippers and I'd believe every word - wouldn't even question.
    Much Love, Savannah.
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  • From Savaial on March 14, 2008
    sephcounttheways, lol, "hotness sandwich". I love that. Hmmm, I guess I could have gone all pervy but ew, Seph and Hojo are father and son, so just...ew!

    Yes, save the children! I just had the mental image of all those children running for home in Temple of Doom, lol.

    Hearts and pi symbols on waffles seems very much something Aerith might do, at least to me. I see her as organized and playful.

    Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Makes my fingers dance across the keyboard!


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  • From sephcounttheways on March 14, 2008
    YES Sephiroth! Save the chillins! This is getting so good!

    And Aerith, what the hell. I can't believe I actually, genuinely LIKE HER in this story. Hearts and pis on waffles, what's not to love?

    And Hojo. Well goddam, he slept in a hotness sandwhich. I know, I know..healing, right? But.. that could have taken a disturbing turn of events.

    Loving the story. Please, don't stop.
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  • From Savaial on March 12, 2008
    Well, Cloud has just as much reason to hate Hojo as anyone else. Poor Hojo is hated world-wide, lol. Yeah, Seph was just too relaxed beside HIS flower girl to even hear the knocking. Hojo was just attempting to get Sephiroth back in the lab when he left that little cryptic message about puberty on Seph's answering machine. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Savannah! I just put up another two thousand words or so and I hope you enjoy!
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  • From SavannahMarie on March 11, 2008
    God it's always so fun when Cloud joins the fray! The image of Sephiroth calmly manhandling a frothing, flu-ridden Cloud just tickles all to hell.

    I wonder if anything is going to happen on their stroll home...?

    And ohh... when Sephiroth did THIS:
    "But no man fell to a better woman than this one."

    I sighed like SUCH a GIRL. I love it. It's perfect, Lou.. warmed my little heart.

    Also, couldn't help but smile over his obliviousness to Cloud's knocking.. That perhaps with Aerith is the first and only time he's been truly at ease; completely at rest.

    It's what I'd like to think is the reason for his state of unawares, anyhow.

    Sephiroth, blinded by Tranquility - it's got a nice ring. Good feel to it.

    Or he could be affected by something more sinister in nature... like whatever mess Hojo was hangin' over his head Way Back There. Maybe something's finally taking hold and causing his senses to soften?

    Perhaps I read too much into my reading? Haha. It's possible.

    Regardless, another great chapter, truly. Can't wait to read the next!

    Savannah
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  • From Savaial on March 10, 2008
    Savannah, don't worry about Hojo. He's never going to be completely "all better" but... you'll see. Thanks for reading and commenting!

    hunewearl, thank you too! The reform is a slow process, but we have Super Aerith to help, so things should be at least amusing if not interesting.

    Gslinger, thanks! I've read some pretty good stuff here on AFF, but thanks for the vote! No, I don't write for a living, but I am writing an original novel right now while I write this fic. I hope to sell it. And I really want that deep emotion in my story, so thanks for the feedback on that. Happy reading!
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  • From RJaneyP on March 09, 2008
    Your writing alway gets me, utterly emotional. I have read alot of stories in this forum... compared to yours, everyone's stories including my own come across like the work of immature children.

    Your so good at this, I hope you write for a living, you seem to have great insight into how minds work. I relish every single word that you write! Love, G
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  • From hunewearl on March 09, 2008
    YAY!!! You're back! The period without updates was a really long wait. Hojo's really reforming himself, as well as Sephiroth, i can't wait to see how this goes. Please keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to it!

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  • From SavannahMarie on March 09, 2008
    Glad to have you back!
    Oh, Aerith.. back to shitting fruit salad, I see. Haha. I'm just kidding around, I swear it! I'm really beginning to wonder/worry what's going to happen to Hojo's character once he's "all better now". My poor bottom lip's all chewed-out over it.
    Oh my, what a tumultuous toss back into the story! So many emotions.
    I wonder what your plans are... wonder wonder wonder.

    Happy Day,
    Savannah.
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