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Reviews for Paper Tiger Burning

By : Savaial
  • From sephcounttheways on March 01, 2008
    OH SNAP! Hojoooooo! Was it Vincent? AGHRGRH!

    CALL 911 SEPH!
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  • From Savaial on March 01, 2008
    sephcounttheways, thank you. I just can't believe Hojo would be so batshit insane he couldn't halfway pretend to be a normal person. After all, he made Sephiroth... who is batshit insane, (cough, cough).
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 01, 2008
    Thaaaat's right, fuck you Cloud! Har har, enjoyed that bit more than was polite.

    I totally love how Seph and Hojo's interactions are actually readable and intelligent, vs. 'SHIT, WE SO CRAZY!' 'ZOMG I KNOOOOW!'.
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  • From Savaial on March 01, 2008
    sephcounttheways, thank you very much. I really enjoyed writing this last chapter. As practical as Aerith seems to be, it just seemed right that she would have no issue with her corpse. She's in touch with the dead anyway...

    Cannibal and Jamie (Savannah), thanks! Like I said, I can imagine Aerith wouldn't be too impressed with herself. But Sephiroth's newly aquired guilt would have to flare up on seeing his handiwork. I just like to torture him. Having a conscience sucks, and it's about time he learned that; he's way overdue.

    Hope you both enjoy this next installment of No-Morals-Theatre!



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  • From SavannahMarie on February 29, 2008
    Okay. The image of Aerith kicking her own lifeless, frozen body back, without giving a SHIT - was fucking badass.
    I loved seeing this chapter. You paint spectacular pictures in every scene you write, but in this latest are just especially captivating.

    Sephiroth-summoned lightning bolts ripping apart glaciers? Awesome. Reanimated broad booting her own corpse? Sweet. A Sephirothcicle? Wicked!

    Even the small part where Sephiroth took off his coat and let it fall, and Eldon picked it up before watching the general freakin' swan dive into icey waters..

    Bad-ASS, Lou - that's what that is.. Poetry in freakin' motion, my friend.

    Oh how I cannot wait for more.
    -Savannah

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  • From sephcounttheways on February 28, 2008
    Whoah. Total brain stop when her body floated up. That's fucking hardcore.

    Still thoroughly enjoying this! You're doing awesome.
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  • From SavannahMarie on February 27, 2008
    And so Miss S. created the Wondersome World, and She called it "Paper Tiger Burning"
    And the Savannah looked down upon it's words and it's chapters, and saw that it was good.
    And then Miss S. begat Chapter 27, which then begat Chapter 28, and lo, there was Vincent Valentine.
    And the Savannah looked down upon the Wondersome World and all that was therein, and saw it not only good, but damn good, and verily the Savannah said unto Thee: "Thou Rocketh".
    Amen.

    Or something like that.


    Savannah
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  • From Savaial on February 27, 2008
    Thank you very much, you two, for leaving your thoughts on my last chapter. It really helps my writing urge to hear your feedback. I'll try to fit more romance in the next segment if you want some feel-good goo, lol. Again, thanks!
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  • From hunewearl on February 26, 2008
    YAY!!! You updated! You just made my day!
    I love this new chapter, oh, the interaction between aerith and sephiroth is so intense, yet subdued. Gosh, i swooned from this chapter. I hope you'll continue with the good, no, MAGNIFICENT, work you've been doing!
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  • From SavannahMarie on February 26, 2008
    oh siiiiiiiggghhh
    You've melted me.
    I, am a soggy philly cheesesteak sub for your words, my dahling.
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  • From Savaial on February 25, 2008
    Hey Savannah! Not a problem for you to be MIA, but I missed your feedback and support for sure!
    I actually almost edited out Cloud Over For Dinner because I worried it was weak. Sheila Shinra might get more coming to her than this, too!

    Aerith: Bitch! Get yo paws outta mah Kool Aid! LOL,that's funny.

    I'm sorry you're moving when you don't want to. It sucks. I'll try to keep your spirits up as best I can.

    And you just might have guessed right on where I'm going with this. Angst Ahoy!

    As always, thansk for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your feedback, truly I do.


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  • From SavannahMarie on February 24, 2008
    Wow.
    Just.. Wow. I think I may know where you're going with this, but I'm not going to say a word.
    This chapter, I believe, is definitely a favorite.
    Savannah.
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  • From SavannahMarie on February 23, 2008
    oh man! sorry I've been MIA. All caught up now and still can't believe how awesome this fic is! Cloud Over For Dinner has got to be one of the biggest highlights of the read haha. And FINALLY - Sheila Shinra gon' get what she had comin'!! YES! Go Aerith! Knock that silly cunt OUT! Save your man!
    Aerith: Bitch! Get yo paws outta mah Kool Aid!
    That's right.
    Can't wait to see what else you've got up your sleeve. I'll try not to disappear anymore. I'm in the process of packing up my entire house/kid/life-in-general from Va to Fl and I'm loathing every fucking second. Keep the story comin' - reading what you write alleviates the pissiness mighty righteously.
    Word.
    Savannah.
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  • From Savaial on February 20, 2008
    sephcounttheways, thank you!

    A good conversation is what I tend to focus on, but I also tend to omit descriptions or action in favor of these conversations.

    The romance isn't rushed or pornographic because I think it would take those two some time to be comfortable enough for it. They are mostly opposite forces and are operating with past issues in the way.

    Thank you for reading and reviewing. It feeds me!

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  • From sephcounttheways on February 19, 2008
    Well, ya know what? This story is really quite good.

    I appreciate the conversations Aerith and Sephiroth have, very intelligent without being overly snobbish. The mark of a writer who understands the meaning behind those big fat words haha. Very nice.

    I also like the dash of romance, it isn't rushed or pornographic. Draws the reader in and makes it believeable.

    I'll be watching for updates!
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