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Reviews for Break Down

By : Mitts
  • From ANON - Golden Feathers Edward on March 20, 2008
    -giggle- such a visous thing isn't he? Go for the groin Cloudy!!! -cackle-
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  • From sephcounttheways on March 14, 2008
    Oh Snapple! Don't do it, Cloud! Just be a good boy and let the General have his way with you!

    Cloud never listens, does he? Sigh.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 25, 2008
    Sephiroth is such a bastard! I can't wait to see what he has in store for Cloud and the other kid!
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  • From sephcounttheways on February 25, 2008
    Sephiroth is SUCH a cock, haha! I loove it!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 21, 2008
    Poor Cloud...He belongs to Seph now.
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  • From sephcounttheways on February 19, 2008
    Hey now!

    You've got MY fucking attention.

    :wipes mouth:


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  • From ANON - Alicia on February 19, 2008
    Yay two more chapters, and I am soo hooked on the story. Hope to see more soon :-)
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  • From RJaneyP on February 16, 2008
    Warning this review is X-rated

    Naughty! Naughty! Mitts Sephy and Cloudy.... bondage! So how long will it take blondy to "Break Down" Mr Gorgeous Hot Stuff and pull that long silver Hair... and his special sword??? Giggle! You have excited G's spot... I can't wait for more!
    Gslinger
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  • From silentserene on February 16, 2008
    oh my.. can't wait for next chappie!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 14, 2008
    BTW...thankies fo spacing out the paragraphs! I read it perfectly now!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 14, 2008
    Oh poor Cloud. That jerk! I hope Sephiroth kills him! Just for fun! update soon!
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  • From silentserene on February 09, 2008
    ooOoooo i'm glad you did another story! update soon and hope it's longer! Thanks~
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  • From alleycat88 on February 06, 2008
    Sounds proising so far...but could you space out the paragraphs its kind of hard to read please? Update soon!
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