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Reviews for First Class

By : MibuWolf
  • From manda1028 on October 06, 2011
    omg this is a awesome story :)
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  • From ANON - Kaz on May 30, 2010
    Wow. Just... Wow.

    Please continue. You're conveying the emotions beautifully and capturing the characters so well.
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  • From xXKittieChaosXx on February 09, 2010
    Holy Crap! This story is SOOOO good! :D I can't wait to read the rest of it, please do NOT stop writing!
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  • From ANON - yuneek on August 31, 2008
    Well I'm absolutely in love with First Class now :D Zack lives?! I cant tell you how happy that makes me!!! I'm sorry this is such a short review but if I were to list all the things I love about FC I'd basically be recapping the whole thing XD I'm also a fan of your other works! You're an amazing author :D
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  • From Syan on August 29, 2008
    Upon stumbling into this site, I knew EXACTLY what I was looking for. Serious, not always fluffy, ZackxCloud fiction.
    Fiction with good description, few mistakes, and not the underlying feeling that a 12 year old wrote the piece. God knows my brain is full of terrible fanfiction, things I wish I hadn't read, but giggle about sometimes.

    In my search for some deep, perfect ZackxCloud, I realized there wasn't much to be found. However, I stumbled across your "Animal Instincts" and it immediately drew me in. Finishing the chapter I HAD to see if you had more. And you did! It was a surpreme joy to stumble over this one. I had started reading it, but had to stop and go to bed when I started feeling ill. However, I came back hours later, laying in my bed, just to read this lovely writing. It has me wrapped around it's finger. I WANT to know more, and can't wait for the day when you update. The descriptions are perfect, the characterization is completely proper, and top notch. You have a wonderful thing going on here.

    Please continue writing at some point; when you are ready, of course. This story begs to be continued.
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  • From ANON - secretwishes526 on August 28, 2008
    that was awesome! i loved those single sentence paragraphs you had sometimes. they were very strong. and i liked the description in the first chapter. i always cry for the death scene, but i think you did an extremely good job describing this one, and it wasn't all cheese-loaded. update sooooonnnnn!!!!
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  • From ANON - ako-chan on July 25, 2008
    i can't wait for the next part! this story's awesome! keep up the good work ^_^
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  • From SakuraSeru on July 10, 2008
    Honestly, for a while I was debating whether or not to read this fic. *shrug* For some reason the summary didn't quite appeal to me, or maybe it was the warnings. Still, I'm glad I finally did since I too am a fan of the Cloud/Zack coupling. *sniffles* I still hate the fact that SE decided to kill off the my favorite character... Now, if I were a writer I would so try and think of another way to make him live other than having Hojo be involved some how. *kills teh hobo* Sadly, I am unable to write as of late. My muse has either left me or is taking a nap that's lasting a few years. *shakes fist* Damn muse... Anyway, Hope to see an update soon~! ^,^

    ~Crescent
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  • From ANON - Kamakaz Morgen on June 27, 2008
    I love this fic! It's excellently written and tugs at the heartstrings. I hope you plan to continue it, I'll be eagerly waiting the next chapter! Keep writing!
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  • From Jdee on June 22, 2008
    Awwwww so cute!!! I love this pairing thanks for posting it up for us to read.

    *is still playing Crisis Core*

    I've been in love with Zack since I saw him in the Last Order OVA a couple of years back... him and Cloud are my favorite FFVII guys so yay a fic about them... hehe and I love the one liners OMG I'd totally use them *has cheesy one-liners herself*

    Love your AMV's too babe but they're so tear jerking I have to stop come back watch some more then stop again ect ect

    very beautifully written we need more what if Zack survived fics out there so thank you

    Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - nick on June 19, 2008
    fluffy I Love it for once zack Lives
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  • From KagetsuAsame on June 06, 2008
    I was happy to see that you updated, keep going! I look forward to the next part.
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  • From ZacksTenshi on June 05, 2008
    I think ya made a good choice with the goons, it did help out. Your action writting was awesome!! I loved it!!! (hmm that did sound pretty kinky, but i loved it! LOL) Naw ya made him perfect!!! *hugs* Wow!! But it paid off really well! No I should be thankin ya 4 writtin such a wonderful story!! ^__^ Now 4 my review 4 the newest chapter!! Lol. I LOVED IT!!! Finally Cloud sees the truth!! Poor Cloudy thought he'd gone crazy again lol. I thought it was kinda funny when Cloud tried 2 beat poor Zacky up and I love it when Zack pinned down Cloud....so many yaoi images came 2 mind!! XD And the lies Zack was tellin the hotel clerk was 2 funny!! LOL *happy sighs* This makes me love CloudxZack even more now!!! I wish I could write a fanfic about them...hmm...maybe I should try sometime Lol. Anyways I love you and your story!! *HUGS* ^____^ Can't wait 2 see what happens next!! (Maybe some kisses < and/or more XD > 4 Zacky and Cloudy? Maybe? LOL XD) ^_______^

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  • From JastissJade on June 02, 2008
    I apologize that I haven't been reviewing from chapter one, but I just wanted to keep reading, I forgot to pause to review!

    I. LOVE. This. Fic. Honestly. Revival fics rank highest on my list of likes, after all.

    Zack trying to be stealthy is fun, considering that due to his nature, I would think it would be hard for him. And see, he went and blew his cover! Oh, Zack, when will you learn that you has not teh mad skillz for plotting?

    Aerith giving her life for him, wow. I didn't expect that to come out of there. In fact, I tend to forget she exists, lol. It was touching, however. Even though I was glad the girl died. Heh.

    The preview for the next chapter sounds particularly intriguing, and I can't wait to read it!
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  • From ANON - Cyerena on May 31, 2008
    Again, a good chapter. I could sense the writer's block towards the end and there were a few typos and missing words, but overall, another well done installment. I just hope there was a reason for Aerith's death at the midpoint; at least more than just an excuse to get her out of the way. I look forward to your next chapter.
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