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Reviews for First Class

By : MibuWolf
  • From Jenypher27 on May 31, 2008
    Even though you're not a fan of writing angst, your angsty chapters were incredible.
    And I have totally fallen in love with the way you write Zack, one-liners and all.

    Oh and yes! I love all your fics! You're a favorite of mine!
    Yes it's true, I'm a fan. And proud!

    Can't wait for more! Keep it up!

    =^_^=
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  • From sephcounttheways on May 30, 2008
    I reread the chapter. And then I thought thouroughly about your writer's block, and how to help you overcome it.

    So, here's a storyline suggestion:

    GRATUITOUS SEX. THROBBING RODS OF MAN MEAT. CLOUD SOBBING BECAUSE HE'S A LITTLE ANGSTY WHORE.

    Hope that helped. As previously stated, get to writing, bitch.

    ^_^ thanks for the review, btw. MWUAAAH!
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  • From sephcounttheways on May 30, 2008
    Oh I so so so love this chapter. Oh! Cloud had me going, let me tell you. I was like 'touch him! touch him! ' it was so sweet, so hot, so good. AMAZING!

    Now write some more, because the universe depends on it.
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  • From Yaoimunculus on May 15, 2008
    OMG! XD I love your story! You did a good job with Zack too! Hope to see an update soon!
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  • From Jenypher27 on May 07, 2008
    Ah, yes I'm a fan. Of all your writing, not just this one.

    Though I admit, this story is pretty damn fabulous.

    Keep it up! Can't wait to read more.

    =^_^=
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  • From ZacksTenshi on May 05, 2008
    YAY NEW CHAPTER!!!! *does happy dance* Once again I am impressed!!! This chapter was soooooooo good!!! Poor Cloudy was about 2 get raped....but thank gaia for Zacky!!! And it was so kool when Zack kicked those guys asses, they soooo got what was comein 2 them LOL. Awww and Cloud sees that Zack is alive!!!! Ohhhh I can't wait for the next chapter as always!!!! Luv Ya and ur awesome/amazing/wonderful story!!!! *HUGS* ^_________^
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  • From snnj11220 on May 04, 2008
    I thought this chapter was well written. I love the idea for the rhoka stone.

    And the dialogue involved in the hotel scene was so hilarious and amusing, it made you just sigh and think 'God I love Zack!' And let that be a lesson to those assholes, don't touch Zack's baby!

    I really like this chapter, I seen in the previous for the next one that Cloud unleashes his wrath on Zack. I am so looking forward to it.
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  • From Sekre on May 02, 2008
    Awww, what a cliffie. Can't wait to see how this is going to go down though. I'm guessing Cloud is going to have a hard time deciding whether hes more angry or relieved.
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  • From BlueBlaze25 on May 01, 2008
    Right after that cab driver spoke, I was like, "Did he really just say that? I mean really?" But I just grinned; I love this guy.
    And you weren't kidding when you said you upped the angst 'a bit,' but you're right; it makes the whole reunion (in no way, shape or form related to Jenova) worth it. I mean, you really get how much Cloud really loves Zack, and it's only after he's 'dead' that he can admit this to himself.
    Damn, Zack is the master of one-liner comebacks! Sympathy burn, ow.
    Oh jeez, I can only laugh at what's to come. Cloud notices Zack's boner and Zack sees Cloud's wet pants. That thought alone, I can't stop laughing. No matter how much I want them to be together, I just know that that's going to cause a very awkward (but still utterly hilarious) scene. Well, that is if the story goes that way. It's still a funny thought.
    And '80's wannabe' and his 'two dip shits' is just enough description. Ya know, it's the little things that I really appreciate; the cab driver's funny speech patterns, the inn-keeper's bitchy-ness, the biased narration, the short to-the-point descriptions. And you have mastered the dramatic pause spacing. Kudos to you.
    I'm flattered you look forward to my reviews, your ego deserves it.
    ~Blue
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  • From KagetsuAsame on May 01, 2008
    Hahaha, keep it up! I look forward to the next part. They certainly got what they deserved.
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  • From sephcounttheways on April 30, 2008
    Oh Zack, ye of awesome mid-combat one liners!

    And Cloud.. his pain was like, thick, hearty, beefy. I felt it. My face went like this --> .___.

    Really, really entertaining, and I can't wait for moooooore! XD
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  • From Sekre on April 21, 2008
    lol Thanks for the heads up. Hope you're having a fun time in florida.
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  • From ZacksTenshi on April 17, 2008
    YAY!!!! Another chapter!!!! Yes!! It was awesome!! Just as the 1st!!!! God I am sooooo hooked 2 your story!!! And Cloud's dream was soooooo hot!!! Yay for the yaoiness!!!! But I still feel sorry for Zack cause he can't tell Cloud he's alive yet, it breaks my heart!! *crys* I just love your style of writting!!! As always can't wait for the next chapter!!! *hugs zacky and cloudy plushies* ^___^
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  • From snnj11220 on April 16, 2008
    You and I must be kindred souls then because we feel the same way about Zack death fics. I really never understood how one moment people could be like Zack is their favorite character but then they are killing him off in their stories. Huh??? Anyway I love this so far, although Zack does really need to get a smack on the back of his head for screwing with Clouds already fragile mental state. After Cloud smacks him around for letting him believe that he was still dead and not revealing himself, Zack should do something special to make it up to him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Sekre on April 16, 2008
    Yay! Loving this fic - and I agree with you about needing more happy ZC fics, though honestly nothing but angst and grief seems to surround Cloud in general. Can't wait for the next.
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