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Reviews for First Class

By : MibuWolf
  • From KagetsuAsame on April 15, 2008
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Cyerena on April 14, 2008
    I really enjoyed your writing style and the way you portrayed the characters. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From BlueBlaze25 on April 14, 2008
    I love this even more than before. First of all, new chapter in less than a week. I so wish I could do that.
    I love the humor in this; "...an energetic Chocobo on crack," "...a strategically placed man with an afro..." Those two in particular, I had to stop and just burst out laughing. That whole scene made me giggle. The second scene was hot, to say the least, and I am dying to read more. After getting a taste of your abilities at writing smut, I am throughly pleased. I know I'm not going to be disappointed in the future. The abrupt change from smut to angst came out of nowhere, but it makes scene. I mean, it's Cloud we're talking about!
    Speaking of Cloud, I am so happy that Zack and Cloud are not OOC. They sound exactly how I imagine. Thank you so much.
    In short, I laughed, I almost cried again, I could not look away (except for those two parts), and I loved every moment of it. You know, I think I love this story so much, because this is the style I strive to write; humorous, smutty, and angsty all at once. Regardless, I am now a dedicated fan, if I wasn't already. Keep writing!
    ~Blue
    P.S-> Yeah, I try to think my reviews out. I think this took me, like, 20 minutes to write, but it was totally worth it.
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  • From ANON - Mel on April 13, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE O_O I can't wait!
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  • From Savaial on April 13, 2008
    Oh hell. So emotive, so deep and dark! You can make the words do your bidding. I loved this fic, truly. It wrenched my heart. Great work!
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  • From steisi on April 13, 2008
    Hey there, hon! Thanks a milion for the review answer. Most authors don't bother, so it was a pleasant surprise! You can bet everything you got that I'll be following this fic (with at times an obsession-like viciousness, which I hope won't feak you out) and every other you write! I was, in fact, ecstatic to see you'd updated this as soon as you had. It still had and aftertaste of angst in it, but I had fun with it nonetheless. I'll be looking forward to the next one (and, hopefully, more Zack/Cloud goodness), love! Kisses!
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  • From ANON - Hebi on April 13, 2008
    Great Story :D YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAH ZACK IS ALIVE WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT :DDDDDDDDDDD
    but it's sad that Cloud doesn't know :( poor little cloud but hopefully he will know soon :) in later chapters ;) and I really had to laugh when Cloud covered the front of his pants XD looooooool teenage hormones ^^
    I like your story :) I think the first line of the rewiev was proof enought XD it's not an ordinary plot :D keep that going, your writing style is great, too, I think you will get even better when you write more and more and more :) What I mean with this is: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER? XD :)
    next chapter next chapter next chapter please *sing* :D sry >.> :)
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  • From sephcounttheways on April 13, 2008
    I laughed, I cried, I went "Hey grrl, Heeeeey" at the naughty bits.

    I like Zack stalking a poor, grieving Cloud and freaking him the hell out.

    Make more! Make more!
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  • From steisi on April 09, 2008
    Hey there, love! Wow, do I feel lucky to have stumbled across your story! It's so hard to find good Zack/Cloud fics, and yours promisses to be one of the best out there! I certainly hope you get to update this soon. You're right, Zack deathfics are too overrated in my opinion too. I can't wait to see where you take it! Kisses from your newest fan!
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  • From BlueBlaze25 on April 09, 2008
    Oh God, I wanted to cry. I still kinda do, but it's the happy kind, ya know? You really captured that scene, and I am throughly amazed. Furthermore, you're adding what I wished for; for Zack to live, and it flowed so well.
    Damn, you've rendered me speechless. I love this so much. Please continue writing.
    ~Blue
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  • From Toushikku on April 09, 2008
    Absolutely beautiful. I loved it.
    And wow... using Josh Groban... now I don't feel like the only one who listens to him while I write sad stories!!! ehehe....
    Anyway, I definitely look forward to more.
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  • From LadyVorlana on April 08, 2008
    Eek! What happens next?! I never really got to know much about Zack although he is one of the characters that interests me the most. Can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From ZacksTenshi on April 08, 2008
    OMG!!! Please write more!! It's so hard 2 find a good story where Zack lives!! I love what you've wrote so far and I hope you'll keep writting, cause now i'm dyin 2 know what else will happen!!! Sooooooooo please write more!!! ^_____^
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