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Reviews for Redemption

By : suixcausa
  • From ANON - Sage on June 20, 2008
    Awsome story hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - ZeBo43 on June 10, 2008
    ...dude...awesome. That's all I gotta say.
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  • From ANON - Twelve Candles on June 10, 2008
    This really is an amazing story. I have yet to read one where Cloud goes back in time to re-write history, but the premise and the execution have drawn me in completely. I love the interactions between Zack and Cloud and, find myself especially drawn to your Cloud. It's so rare to read a story where Cloud hasn't become a complete uke when near Zack but your Cloud strikes me as the type that is quiet but deadly. I like that he can go toe to toe with Zack and I hope that will apply to all aspects of their relationship. I thank you immensely for that. This story is shaping up to be a worthy read, great job. Till next update.
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  • From lonelyreverance on June 08, 2008
    I die for time-travel fics!!! I can't wait for more, so far this is one of three fics that are timetravel and worth reading, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From KagetsuAsame on May 29, 2008
    It was good to see that you updated, keep it up and I look forward to the next.
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  • From MibuWolf on May 28, 2008
    Okay, I'm going to review for each chapter even though you've already published three of them. I abolutely love your fiction so far. it's innovative; a really fresh idea, you know? I'm looking forward to Cloud's reaction when he realizes that, yes, Zack is, indeed, alive.

    Kudos so far! I'm off to read chapter two. Oh! And don't take too long update, yeah?
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  • From adventchild16 on May 15, 2008
    I LOVE this story, it has one of the best plots I have seen yet. The idea is really cool and original. I'm excited to see what happens next, so I hope there will be another chapter soon. Please? ;)
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  • From ANON - Asilem Dlanod on May 12, 2008
    SO AWESOME.
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  • From ANON - Sabriell on May 11, 2008
    This looks VERY promising!
    And I'm really not a fan of Angeal XD
    But I can't wait to read what will happen next
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  • From ANON - thisissparta on April 30, 2008
    i really enjoy stories like this but unfortunatly there are not enough around here. i hope you update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Jagwarakit on April 26, 2008
    *tackles* OMG! This story's incredible. I really hope you plan on continuing this since I'm really curious about how you'll continue it.
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  • From ANON - nlb on April 23, 2008
    Loved it! :-)
    Sometimes the scene breaks seemed rushed(...or I was simply too tired while reading it), but I like your writing style. If you don't rush the relatonships between characters this promises to become one of the gems of the fandom.
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  • From ANON - fataltea on April 21, 2008
    Wow.

    So, I was caught a little off guard by these three chapters. I have to admit, when I read the summary.. well, I was skeptical. Seemed like the average, ordinary, "let's get Zack and Cloud in bed however we can" type of plot.

    I was pleasantly surprised, and proved very wrong. ^_^

    Your portrayal of Zack and Cloud's characters seems right on the money, without being.. cliché. What little you've shown us of your Angeal seems to fit, as well. And the plot is intriguing.. I find myself itching to read more. =O

    In other words, I LOVE your story so far. I hope that you continue to write and share it with all. ^^


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  • From ANON - blackwidow on April 21, 2008
    I don't get it why you're not getting enough reviews for this...good job
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  • From KagetsuAsame on April 19, 2008
    I likes, keep it up!
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