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By : Savaial

From ANON - Aijin on May 23, 2016
Oh my heart! It swells with warm fluffy feelings! I love that ending with Cloud revealing he had been playing matchmaker all along. That was great! I truly love all of your Hojo/Vincent stories. You've made me a fan for sure and I don't know if Kanaye is canon but it is to me now. Hojo will always be Kanaye in my heart. Thank you for sharing this story with us 8D
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From fairietayle on March 08, 2009
I'm not sure there are words enough in this world to express what I feel about this fic and the way it is. But I'll give it a try ;D

I love the portraying of characters. They are just the way I thought they would be. And I love the spin that you did on the never-but-always-there Lucretia. I've always seen her through the eyes of Vincent so I throughly enjoyed watching her in Hojo's eyes and mind.
I love the feelings. The bitterness, the hurt, violence, the spite, the hate, the want to hurt and tear the other one to pieces.
I love how in the beginning there is nothing gentle between the two. And the way it oh so slowly starts to change.

A few things they said stuck in my mind.
Vincent: "I hate you so much I cherish you." It sums up perfectly how nemesis's should feel about each other. There is not one without the other.
And Yuffie about the pendant: "It feels like... love." That was beautiful :)

The ending in the epilogue was perfect. To think that Cloud orchestrated it all! x) It's priceless and perfect :D
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From ANON - Amon2 on February 25, 2009
There rarely are any good Vincent/Hojo stories out there, but your story is awesome. I especially liked how submissive and loyal Hojo is to Vincent and how aggressive Vincent is in the story. I hope write more stories like this in the future. please continue.
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From ANON - Githany on February 18, 2009
Just so you know, it's 3 a.m. right now, and I honestly considered going to bed and all, but somehow I ended up reading THIS. At first I was like "wtf, Hojo less than a light year from the Merry Band and still breathing? O.o". Then, I don't even remember the moment when it happened, my eyes ended up kinda glued to the screen, and I wonder how in the hell I managed not to get drool all over my keyboard... it's not just the porn, which is brain-melting by the way, but THE INTERACTION, and the chemistry that is just SO THERE, and that scene when Vincent laughs and surprises the ever-loving crap out of everyone... This is pure awesome. Undiluted.
Whoa. It's amasing how my language and composing skills shoot up after indulging in some really good reading with what seems like a nasty cold developing... almost in the middle of the night to boot. So I'm shutting up. No, wait, one more time I'll say it: AWESOME. Thank you very much for writing this.
Now shutting up X)
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From Savaial on June 23, 2008
Thank you, Goki! I wanted a good challenge and this was it! Thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought!

Gslinger, hey! I did so want to contrast good is evil to good and vice-versa. So glad to get a vote on how I did! Well, how about a 264 page fic on Hojo again? I�m slapping one up in Final Fantasy 7 Het, AU in a few minutes. As always, thank you for reading and reviewing, I love it!

Mizubenten, thank you very much! I wanted all those emotions in this fic and its nice to know I got some of �em! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Savannah! I�m not MIA, just offline to work on Cell Division, my newest fic that occupies my days while I procrastinate on Paper Tiger. I�m so glad you like it, my very first reviewer! I got a clear picture of how I wanted these two and I tried very hard to mae that picture clear for everybody. (whew) A road trip so soon after going home? You are a jet-setter these days! I don�t envy you.
Thanks for your never-ending support in all fics Final Fantasy! Hats off to you, too!

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From SavannahMarie on June 20, 2008
I've read this one thrice now. I just love it. It's beautiful.

You've taken a completely unrealistic, nearly impossible pairing and have not only made it one of the best reads I have ever encountered, but have also crafted such a sinfully alluring picture that your reader is eagerly and ecstatically convinced. It's the way it always was, and the way it always should be, no questions asked. I am a great admirer of such an accomplishment.

In fact, this fic is so good, I haven't missed Paper Tiger for a whole month... I've seriously just been happy chewing away on this.

I do miss you now though. I went for a road trip and now, three weeks later, I return to find you're still royally MIA.

Aw, dammit, AW.

Still! You know where I'll be once you do come back around. Hats off to you, dear lady.

Savannah.
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From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2008
I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story! You got me laughing, crying and shaking me head over these two. Just...ah! Brilliant! *rambles on*
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From RJaneyP on June 15, 2008
Dear Savaial only you and your incredible creative muse, can make me feel such an emotional response to your stories. I always considered Hojo the true evil Monster of the piece even more than Shin-Ra or Sephiroth...but you made him the enlightened Hero of Piece... only you could do that I think?

Now you have given me a new impression of evil itself... perhaps in someway evil can be in all of us in some form or degree... Yet after reading your story, I get the impression we can all be saved by love and forgiveness, if we only endeavor to control or excise our own evil demons...with compassion and forgiveness for ourselves... above all else.

Evil doesn't have to be forever... it can be a temporary state! And the Righteous don't have to be perfect, just be kind.

Love you and your righteous writing. Gunslinger Cal, as always your Fan

Nothing would please me more than reading a 600 page Novel of yours, which could be about... anything, I would read every last word I promise!

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From z32 on May 23, 2008
At first I thought it was Ooc, but when I read it further I understood and loved it. It's wonderful and different, I absolutely adored the ending, you made a wonderful job, I also liked this pairing, misunderstood, and hate becomes pure love. Thanks for writing this jewel! :3
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From Savaial on May 18, 2008
nihilatrix, lol, thanks! I guess its obvious I have a soft spot for the daddy of all that is evil in FF7. Saturday squicktacular, OMG, I love that. Can I use it? Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad to spread my Hojo-sympathy to others. Honestly, if someone had stolen my spouse, I think I'd shoot them too.

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From meowwl on May 18, 2008
Do you have any idea what you've done to me, you terribly wonderful author you??...You've made me like HOJO! This guy is normally my idea of a saturday squicktacular...Intelligence, charisma, and lack of ethics or morals, all wrapped in a tentacly package. *shudder.* I'm all reading along, thinking I should be creeped out as usual by his sadistic mad scientist ass, and you make him into a sane, honorable guy trying to make up for his past mistakes! Add in the masochistic streak, and you satisfy my urge to bash him a few times for Sephiroth's sake too.
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From Savaial on May 17, 2008
Thank you, sephcounttheways, and KristinaDalton. I appreciate your reviews very much. To KD, I*'m glad you liked the fic. Hojo getting thrown out of his own tent was fun to write. To Sphcounttheways, muchas gracias! I looked over the fic and you're totally, absolutely correct. I didn't put a thing in about Hojo's bod. Sorry! Will probably look over it and add in. Thank you! In the meantime, imagine a thin but built dude.
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From sephcounttheways on May 17, 2008
Finished it, and it was total buttah. TOTAL BUTTAH!! I'M VAKLEMPT!!

Where to begin? Loved Hojo. Loved the line 'I almost came in my pants' oooomgg I seriously snorted and like, giggled for minutes. Loved Vincent. Loved Cloud! My goodness, what a sweetheart in this. Loved Hojo drawing, and Vincent going all vampire all the time. Loved the mansexing.

Only question I have is.. Hojo's bod. You kinda left that open for reader interpretation.. is he supposed to be.. ripped? Hot? Saggy yet loveable like Bill Murray?

Ooooh it was seriously, seriously good. You've got mad skills, this story rocked, and I'm greedy. I want more awesome shit to read from you, because you're fucking brilliant, you're a wicked awesome writer, and your stories make me smile all over town.

And a happy ending to top it all off? Bitch, please. Smiles, smiles, smiles. MWUAH!
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From KristinaDalton on May 16, 2008
This is the funniest, most tragic tale with a happy ending I ever read.

Though I am a slash hound, Hojo getting thrown out of his own tent was just the BEST!

Wonderful work!
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From sephcounttheways on May 16, 2008
pfffft!!! This is highly entertaining. I made it up to chapter 5, but I gots to go to bed. Will definitely read the rest tomorrow.

As always, your dialogue is totally on point. Never cliche or dull for a moment.

And another knock down, drag out man fight! YEEAH!

Freaking awesome, can't wait to read the rest.
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