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Reviews for Loves young dream

By : TroubleNStrife
  • From IggyLovechild on May 29, 2008
    Yo.

    I'm going to swallow my strong urge to tell you what I really think and try to be constructive in my crit of this...drabble.

    1) Why do you like VincentxReno? It seems this entire story was written just to think about them making out, which is really sad. Do you realize that other fanfic authors can't stand shounen-ai/yaoi writers for exactly this kind of pointless writing?

    2) But I really shouldn't be complaining since the two men in this fic are clearly not Vincent or Reno. Your characterizations are non-existent. Nothing about their words or actions portray who they are.

    3) Please get a beta if you can't be bothered to post a grammatically correct story on your own.

    That's all. I'm sure you think I'm a horrible person for being-gasp-honest rather than squeeing over the image of two such lovely boys kissing that you so clumsily attempted to convey. Keep in mind that this is not really directed at you as a personal attack but an attempt to reach out and help a little bit. Believe me, I could have been meaner and crueller in this dissection of your writing.
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  • From vivarose on May 24, 2008
    A cute drabble piece, I just can't see Vincent giggling. Although the thought in and of itself is HIGHLY amusing :D
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  • From VincentsValentine on May 22, 2008
    niiiiiiiiiice :P
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