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Reviews for Kittens

By : sephcounttheways
  • From crystalwind on November 18, 2008
    Kitties!!!

    You pretty much made my day with this. Yay :)
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  • From LamicaLee on November 18, 2008
    =Q~Q= Awww so cute! ♥ I can't wait to see what happens next, such a fucking tear jerker. xD
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2008
    OMG, I Love the baby egg scene! It was so cute^_^

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  • From ANON - sierra quest on November 18, 2008
    please keep updating this story, it's a nice dose of happy/angsty/fluff after all the rape and incest stories...
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  • From ANON - Recalesce on November 07, 2008
    ... Really gotta review, this time. This is about my third readthrough, on average (I've read chapter 2 about four or five times; chapter 3 only once previously, after which I flicked back to ch 2 as a salve to bring the sting of ch 3 down to a dull heat bringing the needy sex of ch 2 into greater definition, like how bitten skin goes all prickly and glowy when you lick it) - and, uh, I think you said reviews are fire to your loins or something like that, so I guess you're not too freaked out by compliments like the fact that I kept dozing off after finishing with mine. ^^;; But I'm reviewing, this time! This fic is such a series of uber-expresso shots, like Sephy's drink that time in BA - several shots of refined, distilled, highly concentrated liquid sex; quite a few shots of that-is-so-yes laughing out loud every few lines (Nibelheim. TLC. Yes.); a shot of nihilism ("...thrown in the same plot as if they loved each other." Not the sort of paragraph you can forget in a hurry); a shot of absolute heartbreak ("...I’ll snap your neck"...!?!!) - and they may not all hang together in such an integrated way as the scenes in BA (they remember that Sephiroth's mother told him to give up his humanity and destroy the planet, and yet he doesn't understand why Cloud's afraid of her? The jokes work in humour-mode, but there's a bit of suspension of disbelief in switching to the other shot modes, and it feels like a bit of a guilty-pleasure-paradox to try to think of the fic as existing in all modes at once), but the characterisation stays consistent and intense, emotion-wise.

    And... yeah. This Sephiroth spent weeks at a time staring at the laboratory ceiling, and doesn't seem to have had a Vinny to talk to him, like BA's better-adjusted version. It must have taken him a long time to get himself treated like a human. No wonder he's flipping out at the thought of becoming some monster-spawning specimen. He could leave the human world behind as a vengeance-wreaking god, but not as a fucked-up experiment lying in the lab being torn up and devoured from the inside out by a swarm of disgusting, malformed hatchlings. And a Cloud that could work himself into Sephiroth's good graces in the middle of the Nibelheim crisis - who could react to all that humanity-forsaking anger by opening up and drawing closer - really would be the sort to nuzzle at his neck when he's at the height of fury. It's like the more intimidated he is, the more he offers up intimacy in a stubborn attempt to drag the mood in the right direction - but when it doesn't work, he leaves himself defenceless against every blow, and his instincts still don't let up on the urge to hold tighter & love harder. I'm just feeling for them both right now, and hoping the kittens make everything better.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 03, 2008
    Lol Cheech n Chong. I just got it.
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  • From ANON - secretwishes527 on November 02, 2008
    'begs for more' pleeeaaasseeee!!!! anyways, i love seph being dominant, and he so totally is in your fic. so...pleeeaasse!!
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  • From ANON - lauren on September 13, 2008
    hahaha. This story is kind of OOC, but that's to be expected. Still, I love the way you write, and I was laughing a lot while reading. In a good way. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - laz on September 13, 2008
    Mou!!! Please update this!! the angst is killing me!! Seph is in sooo much trouble...and maybe some pretty boy will come after Cloud and Seph will have to beg!! MUAHAHAH!...............ok, this is what happens when you dont update, my brain goes haywire making up possible next chapter senarios...............halp?
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  • From ANON - secretwishes527 on September 06, 2008
    waaaaahhh!!!! do you have to end like that?!?! what's going to happen?! they're gonna get back together right?! of course, of course...'self consoling'

    this story is so (insert most positive adjective you can think of here)!!!!!!

    please update soon! i'm so totally a fan of your writing! and i love the way you characterized cloud and sephiroth and their relationship. it's like my dream come true!
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  • From ANON - Etrixan on September 06, 2008
    Oh, very nice. I'm not a fan of mpreg, but I figured, from the way you wrote earlier chapters, that it would be Sephiroth as the mommy and I wondered how you'd handle it. I'm liking it so far. Sephiroth is some pissed, which he probably would be (pregnant? only women get pregnant!) and the whole egg thing.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From Lynsey on September 03, 2008
    *squeeeeeels*

    I love your Cloud to little, fuzzy blond bits. He's so freaking cuuuuute. And, doobie? Priceless. Seriously. I think I laughed so hard I peed a little.

    There are so many ways you could go from here, and I am interested to see where you take it.


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  • From ANON - Anon on September 02, 2008
    *cry* Poor Cloud, To tell the truth I'm not supprized that Seph did want any babies.
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  • From LamicaLee on September 02, 2008
    D8 Don't leave us hanging too long with this next update, it left me feeling with that sad feeling you get when you finish your favorite ice cream! ;~; Hell, like if someone ate the last slice of cheesecake for odin's sake! xD I love joooooo.... ♥ Now good luck writing the next chapter, cut off a whole rabbit leg if you need to! lol
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  • From ANON - Sussurous on September 02, 2008
    OMG!! I can't believe they broke up! Sephiroth needs to be smacked, seriously and Cloud needs to talk him down or something. I simply cannot wait for this to be updated. You must update soon! Great story, you are the best writer ever!
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