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From SapphireEyes on August 03, 2008
1) NO I DON'T HAVE ANY LUCK WITH THE REVIEW SECTION
2) I don't know...IS there a bad crazy????? o.O

Mehhh, My luff for you has grown. Poor Yazzie D: I wanted to cry D: Reno you fool...Almost completely getting his ass handed to him.

Hummmmm My curiousity is growning. What is gun-up-his-ass-literally-Sephy have to do with our boy's (other then the obvious of course) hmmm hmmm hmm hm hm.

Oh and BTW I almost spoke Sinanese there... The force was strong with that one but I resisted!!! Barely :D

.....*snicker*....Zack the Hedgehog....*snicker*.....
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From Ringwen on July 13, 2008
Hmmm� Well I�d like to make a somewhat odd request (but you�ve maybe already figured that I AM odd? XP)�

This would be about a pairing I�ve never read about, seme Zack and uke Yazoo. XD
I can vision this as that Zack keeps on �bothering� Yazoo with little jibes and some �innocent� groping. Yazoo gets more and more irritated and then decides to put Zack in his place. Because Zack is so laid back and goofy Yazoo kind of �forgets� that he is one of the best ex SOLDIERs and a disciplined swordsman. Also he is a lot older and far more experienced then Yazoo in most things� So when Yazoo lures him up on the stage to put him in his place he�ll find it hard to do so because Zack really is such a laid back guy that with every sharp thing Yazoo throws in his way it just makes him shrug his shoulders and play along.

In the end Yazoo gets so frustrated that he, in the middle of some intimate dancing with Zack, says something really nasty and evil about Zack and his relationship with Sephiroth.
Suddenly the cheerful ex SOLDIER turns to ice and after the show has ended he literally drags Yazoo along with him backstage. Reno sees this and carefully interferes but Zack makes it clear to him that this has nothing to do with him and that he won�t hurt Yazoo, just show him �what happens to little girls with foul mouths�.

And then he shows him. He kind of dominates Yazoo with utmost ease and shows him that it is not only pain that can make a person whimper and beg for mercy. Although Yazoo is sex on two legs I figured Zack to be more experienced and that he could make Yazoo feel chasten and young. I think it would be more of a shock for Yazoo if someone took him by force using pleasure and kindness instead of pain and evilness.

The part with Zack and Yazoo dancing on stage I thought I could see Yazoo trying to be sexy/evil with Marilyn Manson�s version of �Personal Jesus�. The reason for this is that I did an AMV with Sephiroth and Yazoo using this song, if you can find the time I�d really want for you to check it out. If you watch it I think you can almost see how well this song fits Yazoo.

The address is, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yva_ya4JpE

So, please tell me what you think. You�re a great fic writer, and I�d love it if you could write this for me.

Cheers / Ai

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From SapphireEyes on July 11, 2008
Now is that the good kind of crazy or the bad??????

C:
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From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2008
OH MY GOD!!! SAPPHIREDOG!!! YOU ARE CRAZY!!!
ASOTA
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From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2008
sorry for not reviewing chapter three... i feel as if i lost points with you as your rabid fangirl... *sadness*
ASOTA
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From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2008
hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh hum-a-nuh... *drool*

i can't BELIEVE zak thought MY yazoo was a girl!!!! great show though!! CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER LEMON!!

about the pairings for the new story. i already have a pairing and story so i'll let the other fans go, but if you need any ideas, i'll try to help.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
ASOTA
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From JazzieXGackt on July 10, 2008
*ahem*

::falls to knees to worship:: OMG&G YOU ARE AMAZING! - THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I've read "Taming the Fates Amidst Chaos" - AMAZING XS...i just haven't gotten around to reviewing all 46 chapters yet ::shifty eyes:: - AND THIS ONE - I'm SOOOOOOOO~~~ happy I found it though >< AMAZING! I'm like OoO!!!! and then ::nosebleeds and faints::

i am your faithful reader....the faithful reader that never reviews until now but ::shifty eyes::
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From Kerianya on July 08, 2008
*Ahem*

Apologies for the last review. I'm not feeling particularly well and it had been a very LONG morning at work. I appear to have gone a little crazy when I saw you'd reviewed. (they're wanting to gag me at work again.)

Well now, intelligent ideas for fan-directed ficcy...

I get down on bended knees and BEG you to use the song "Poison" in one chapter. In an ideal world I'd like the Alice Cooper version, but the dance remix will do. It's the single sexiest song ever written.

As for pairings, I'd like a Rude x Reno x Yazzie threesome! Or maybe Rude and Kadji...if our minds are truly alike I'm sure you have the little remnant down as a raging nymphomaniac! Maybe Yuffie and Loz...

*ignores worried stares from authoress*

I love wierd pairings, and as long as you DO NOT involve Tifa I'll be happy. Tifa-bashing is too much fun.

Before stupid syndrome kicks in again I'll close and go to bed.

Much love,

Kerianya XxX
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From fyrbyrd074 on July 08, 2008
oh yeah!!!! It was funny I heard Tainted Love on the radio today, none of my three co-workers had any idea why I was smiling or where my mind was, tee hee. I really felt like I was right there tonight, thank you, needed a night out for my birthday, and with those two for entertainment!!!! The song was running through my head all the time too. Do I have to go back to reality?
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From Kerianya on July 08, 2008
Before Dinner: feeling yucky, tired and slightly angry at all the unopened post.
After reading new update: WHEEEEEE! Frizzie did an update! WHEEEEEEEEE! It's really good! Yummy, my nectarine was really juicy, however irrelevant that is!

An excellent effort as always. I've decided to abandon my Yazzie and Reno in a club fic now, because I need to write a fic where I can put Kadji, Yazzie and Vincent in kinky corset ballgowns before the image drives me crazy!

Kerianya will write a more intelligent review once she remembers where she put her brain!

Ah well, back to work.

Kerianya
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From SapphireEyes on July 07, 2008
Omg.... That last sentence made no sense D:

Imma glomp KADAJ if I can ever CATCH the little jerk XD

There.
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From SapphireEyes on July 07, 2008
Hey! It cut off D:

NOOO!! Well poo. It was a good review too.

Yazoo is hot in a skirt XD Reno got his ass kick...again XD And Imma glomp catch if I can catch the little jerk XD hehe
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From SapphireEyes on July 07, 2008
Omg XD I forgot to comment on the chapter XD Sorry love
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From SapphireEyes on July 07, 2008
Hehehe, Well, as long as I'm loveable XD

Oh oHoh MY REQUEST!!!!

*Clears throat*
Song: Closer- n.i.n (That song is my drug, I swear)

Setting: VIP(wahahahaha and if there is no VIP or rufus is an ass and doesn't want anyone using it, then a change room is good enough ;))

What I want to happen: I want dear Yazoo to get alittle jealous (only a little!) when he sees reno flirting with someone (don't care who) and takes a quick break to catch his breath. So he heads to the bathroom but as he's going in, He bumps into Vincent whose coming out and catches his eyes. Watching him walk away, yazoo becomes curious about the dark man (who wouldn't). Not wanting to go back to dance floor since he was on break, Yazoo head to the reserved section. But surprise surprise, Mister Valentine is there with a beer, staring at the dance floor quietly.

Yazoo apologizes and goes to leave, Vince stops him and tells him its alright and he can join him if he wishes. Theres a moment of silence before Vincent comments on Yazoo's skills. They have a small talk, one thing leads to another, Song comes on, yazoo gets playful and well....*insert smut, PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!*

After, Yazoo realizes he has to get back to work, and Vince nodds, steals one last kiss before leaving with a smirk and yaz with a blush. Unknown to him, Reno saw the kiss, walks up behind yaz and nibbs on his ear with a chuckle, asking if he had fun. Yaz stumbles over words before Reno just laughs and tells him it alright, that now both of them had screwed a regular ghost, telling him that Vincent comes in once in a while for a break but they hardly ever see. And also, maybe next time both of them could have some fun with the stoic man.

And thats it. Need anymore detailS, you can just ask. Down to the details of the VIP even XD
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From Kuragari75 on July 07, 2008
*laughs evily* oh yes... another story! hehe... so excited to see where it's going!!! always love your stories... Yazoo's fun to mess with. lol, can't wait to see more! later babe!
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