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Reviews for Electric Haven

By : LadyVorlana
  • From ANON - Chephren on August 06, 2010
    Okies, please forgive me if this went through the first time! Haha!!! XDDDDD I just had to tell you how much I loved this first chappy of Electric Haven! I read it ages ago and didn't comment because I was a lurker but it doesn't change the fact that this is one of my favorite Vinzoo ficcies ever!!!! You have changed Vinzoo and that song Closer forever!! I didn't even really like the song before but I guess it just hadn't been presented to me in the right way!! THIS was most certainly the right way! You can totally hear both of them in the elements of the song too! Vincent and his fanged smirk playing with Yazzy the sex kitten! *melts...puddle!* Fantastic work!!! I had to come back and tell you!!
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  • From on July 23, 2009
    mmm... I got a good idea, me thinks!

    Pairing: Cid/Vincent
    Song: Nickleback - something in your mouth {maybe... i dont really care}

    Situation: Vincent goes home and tells Cid of his time at the Club. Cid gets a bit jealous and teasingly asks for a private dance since vinny got one. Vincent actually agrees, and dances while Cid is bound to... iunno... a chair or something...
    Then the smut (with some bondage, and Vincent bottoming but Cid bound) hmm... maybe with some piercings on Cid... Nipple rings or something on Vin maybe... Ill leave the smut to you, since i suck at it...
    After they come, Cid has the brilliant idea to open a chain of the strip club...

    (OR- if you want the club to have a more active part...)
    Cid comes to visit Vince and THEN you can continue from sentence 2. and Cid's idea is the strip club in their home town of... whatever it is..

    if you wanna do this, go right ahead... if not, then i understand too!

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  • From AnimeFreakandGeek on October 11, 2008
    Here we go!

    Pairing Idea: Reno X Rufus (my all time fave FFVII pairing *fan girl squeal)
    Basic idea: you know what they say, all work and no play makes a president a horny boy- and Rufus has been working way too hard! Rufus has seen the games Reno plays and is tired of missing out on the action. Theme I leave open to you just no bondage or rape. And maybe we can finally answer the question of just who is seme and who is uke in that relationship? LOL
    Song: Addicted by Saving Abel
    ^_^ thanks! Cant wait to see what you come up with next!

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  • From AnimeFreakandGeek on October 11, 2008
    WOW words escape me at the moment for how well you put all of this together! I loved it. When I first heard the pairing i was like- no way- but this is awesome! I will have to think of a pairing and plot bunny for you ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From vivarose on September 24, 2008
    ahha! You my darling are a genius! I'd been trying to find a way to appropriately write song fics that incorporate the actions of the characters with those of the lyrics! Absolutely genius! You are now my reference for LIFE!
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  • From xxinsomnia on September 18, 2008
    :D I love the Idea, and the first Chapter~
    Hmmnn... Mind if I pop in a request?
    Well...

    My current addiction is Valenwind.
    So maybe, just maybe you could write one with that paring?

    Well, here's the Idea:

    We have Sir-Spooks-Alot 'n Captian Highwind enjoying a nice, semi-quiet drink together and they're having a "civil" conversation. Meaning, Cid's pestering our loveable gunman about something. That something being his sex life.

    As we know, Yazzie 'n Vince had some fun last chapter, and Vince'll be all, "Yeah, whatever, shut up and enjoy your drink" (Well, I'm guessing he'll be like that...). Cid will pester him for a few more minutes and then concentrate on his drink.

    Well, the both men enjoy their alcoholic beverages and each of them get a pleasent buzz. The topic suddenly shifts to Cid's, yes CID'S, life in bed. Well our poor little blondie hasn't had anything for a while, so he flat out says "Vince, I haven't had any for such a long time, the damn tables look fuckable." and remember, they're buzzed/drunk/whatever you want. So let's say Vinny is a flirty drunk 'kay?

    Well, a random song comes on (It has to be sexiful, it HAS to be. Feel free to choose one though, Sapphire already used my first option and I can’t seem to think of one) and Reno 'n Yazzie do their thing 'n... yeah. Songs over and poor little deprived Cid looks like he wants to eat our dancers alive. Vincent gets the sudden idea to rub the captain’s back and tell him that’ll be all right; a flirty/seductive/sexy/HOMAIGODTHAT’SHAWT tone to his voice.

    In short, our gunman gets dragged to the nearest change room ( or whatever, I’m not picky ;D) by Cid and pinned up against the wall. Vincent seems surprised (D< its like he was expecting it... that silly, silly man) and asks Cid what he was doing. Captain Highwind shrugs and attacks Vincent’s throat with kiss ‘n small bites. Cid pauses ‘n tells Vincent that he was right, it was going to be all right, and both of them would be leaving the room very satisfied men. –insert smut, any type of kink that you think either of the two men should have here, please?-

    In the end, Ciddy was right, they had their fun, and both of them were very satisfied. As they leave, they notice Reno walking down the hall, an amused look on his face. He nods to Vincent and calls Cid over. He tells them that the next time they borrow a room; they should try to be a little quieter ‘cause him, Yazzie ‘n Zack heard the WHOLE thing.

    ... It might be cheesy, but I don’t care. I’ve read Sapphire’s VCR complex so many times I could probably recite it to people. I need more or my current drug... D
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  • From vivarose on September 02, 2008
    fucking awesome! I LOVE this pairing so much! LOVE LOVE LOVE!
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  • From Ficfan3484 on August 22, 2008
    Yay! Vincent/Yazoo I love it!! You're are a creative writer .....Could you write one about a drunk Yuffie and Cid bothering and annoying the hell out Vincent..... Pretty Please with chocolate fudge and whipped cream on top
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2008
    Hum, I really enjoyed this pairing, and it was done very well. Great job, and keep going.
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  • From ANON - sano on August 16, 2008
    Request!

    Sephiroth/Vincent

    Arch Rival relationship. Always competing and challenging each other.

    Sephiroth is from another well-known club that is similar to Electric Haven.
    A challenge from Sephiroth. Or maybe a proposal from Rufus for Vincent to make Sephiroth happy. (To clinch a business deal or collaboration)

    SMUT ENSUES!

    You can throw in bondage or anything you want XDD It's all up to you how the whole thing goes.

    Really hope to see this!!
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  • From ANON - Ainaloth on August 13, 2008
    Good one!! Really good, I hope you choose to do my request too! XD

    Love/ Ai
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  • From BlackRaincloud on August 08, 2008
    maybe I'm just boring, but Reno/Yaz seems to be the gold medal of the FFVII pairing universe. (weeeellll... throw a punk-rock Cloud in that mix, and I just might die from orgasms)


    It doesn't get any better that.


    If I had to make a request, it would be Yazoo making a bet with our redhead that he can't keep his paws off of his beautiful silver ass for any length of time. Of course Reno accepts and blah blah blah seduction, la la la naughtiness, and eventually Yazoo wins, and Reno has to beg him, PLEAD with him, (on his knees and preferably shirtless) for some sweet, sweet lovins. So yeah. Just a thought.

    /love
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  • From fyrbyrd074 on August 08, 2008
    I've got a grin on my face for this one. Kept up the fantastic work, I love it!
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  • From spooksies on August 03, 2008
    WOW......O_o Uh....majorly HOT & BOTHERED here!!!


    just one request:


    FINISH THIS ONE!!! please??!!!?!?!



    love you forever!



    laters! ~_^
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  • From OneAndOnlyDeceiver on August 02, 2008
    I can not get enough of your writing style!!!!! You make me ..... >.> ..... picture great things O.O Thank you for writing it and I hope next time I review I can have an idea for you. Right now .... my mind is occupied.
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