Click Here!

Reviews for Tiny Dancer

By : Lynsey
  • From sephcounttheways on December 07, 2008
    The plot thickens! I was wondering when Seph was gonna take some action to get Cloud help with his eating disorder.
    Report Review

  • From ShibaAyame on December 07, 2008
    I started reading this on recommendation from a friend of mine... and all I have so say is that I love your story so far! ^_^ You've got a hilarious writing style, and I never would've thought to place Cloud as a ballet star. (I've been writing a more KH-centric fic with the cast in a theatre, but it's the closest I could get.)

    Five out of five stars, keep writing! Hope you update again soon!

    Kitty >^..^
    Report Review

  • From madhatterkay on December 06, 2008
    Holy...wow! Okay, I loved this story! Only a couple stories have had me so enraptured that I was literally jumping in my chair, unable to breathe with anticipation, and giggling madly all at the same time! Wow that was a long sentence! I would be eternally grateful if you could add me to your update list! My email: indigo_ophelia3@yahoo.com Thank you so much for posting such a wonderful story!
    Report Review

  • From Dreamfool on November 24, 2008
    The only reason I started to read this story is it's my day off and I'd already washed my dogs and nothing good was on TV. However once I started reading it I really started to like it and respect your mad writing skills. This is a good story and you either know what you're writing about or you've really done your homework. I hope to read another chapter soon.
    Report Review

  • From sephcounttheways on November 24, 2008
    I'm so glad Tifa didn't give Cloud a guilt trip or anything, I thought she might what with the way she was so shocked at finding them kissing and such. So... I'm guessing Cloud's a gogo dancer??
    Report Review

  • From MistressNyx on November 23, 2008
    I'm trying to go there and there's no link!!
    Lol it doesn't matter, I've seen the movie and I can imagine the whole thing.
    I've been reading this story since you published it but I never had the courage to review, but I have to say...Awesome!!
    And I love fag-tastic Genesis!
    Report Review

  • From sephcounttheways on November 09, 2008
    MOOOOOREEE 0_______________________0
    Report Review

  • From JastissJade on October 21, 2008
    Oh. My. God.

    I laughed so hard at the ending, I think my stomach might've just ripped wide open. Too funny! Oh man. I need to breathe.

    It was so sweet, Seph defending little Cloudy. And now Cloudy has a lot of money... but wait! No mention of the legal age of consent in Nibelheim! Dear godddd, you keep us on the edge of our seats, I'm sure. But, now that Seph did something like THAT, I'm sure Cloud will definitely want to put out, and seriously... would YOU turn that down, legal age or no?

    I love this damn fic, more than I can even express with silly words.
    Report Review

  • From 90McPhee on October 20, 2008
    "Hi! Wanna play hide the salami?"

    "JESUS CHRIST ALMIGHTY."

    .....AAAAAAH-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!! I loved that last part SO much. XD
    That was a great update! (Yay, Cloud is going to learn to
    read Horton!). Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great work! ^_^
    Report Review

  • From sephcounttheways on October 20, 2008
    Awww seems like maybe everyone had something to gain by keeping Cloud illiterate..? :c that's really very sad, but Sephy to the rescue! And I wonder what he found out about the age of consent?.. because if it was in his favor, this chapter should have been some hot man lovin'! Or maybe I need to learn some patience, har har XD

    Anyways, sooo glad to see more!
    Report Review

  • From JastissJade on October 14, 2008
    Haha! You show em, Seph! Stupid Shinra bastards.

    Love this fic and can't wait for the next chapter!
    Report Review

  • From sephcounttheways on October 02, 2008
    Oh, YAY! Sephy saved Cloud from all of his debt without him even having to ask! Awwww!

    And fucking hell! Being used as an epense account, NO BUENO! I'm glad Cloud will at least get to keep the money he earns! I'm so worked up over this injustice!

    The only cure is smut! C'monnn age of consent!
    Report Review

  • From JastissJade on September 16, 2008
    Ohhh noooo. C'mon, age con't get in the way or some super sexy smut! :O He can keep it all hidden, or something. lol

    I want to read more, right now.

    Haha, Seph's room isn't immaculate. Somehow I really like that. So perfect on the battlefield but omg look at that unorganized room with super ugly oomforters that smell like bread! XD Bloody perfect.
    Report Review

  • From sephcounttheways on September 16, 2008
    HAHAAAA! Poor Seph!! Cloud is such a little bitch, I love him to pieces in this.
    Report Review

  • From JastissJade on September 14, 2008
    Ack! 7 chapters down already? Hmph, that just means you need to write more, cuz I absolutely adore this fic.

    Sorry I didn't stop to review every chapter; I just had to keep reading and stopping was not an option. lol

    Great work, can't wait for more!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!