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Reviews for Tiny Dancer

By : Lynsey
  • From sephcounttheways on September 11, 2008
    Aww, just aww. Smex next? XD Or will Tifa be there to cock block? Hrmmmm, you need to write smores.
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  • From sephcounttheways on September 06, 2008
    I'll say this : illiteracy is terrifying to me. It's obvious we all here love to read and get off on words. Maybe that sort of gets projected onto the characters until they're downright fucking scholarly, which in most cases, isn't very likely. i.e. Sephiroth is beautiful and smart and owns a library AND manages to fuck like a porn star. The Cloud you're writing may be illiterate, but he is NOT stupid, but rather street smart and talented in more physical arenas. That strikes me as very realistic and balanced. I just wanted to throw up my gang sign at you, because its totally pimp that you're going outside of some norms.

    Oh yeah, almost forgot : LOVES IT! WAAAAAH WRITE MOOOOOOORE!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD
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  • From RTAbram on August 30, 2008
    I'm really enjoying this story. You've written it very well, not wordy but covering everything and building up the characters nicely.

    I look forward to more.
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  • From sephcounttheways on August 30, 2008
    MOTHER FUCK.

    MOOOOOORE PLZZ.
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  • From 0whiteivyrose0 on August 30, 2008
    Oh no! Poor Cloud! Poor Sephiroth! Umm...who was seducing who again? I thought that it was Cloud trying to seduce Sephiroth, but it looked like Sephiroth was also trying to seduce Cloud...Oh, well. Anyway it was fine. I wish that they hadn't been interupted though. I bet that they wish that, too. I really love this story so far. It's so funny!
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  • From LadyVorlana on August 29, 2008
    Oh goodness...lemme guess...Tifa? Dammit, why does she hafta ruin the pretty moment
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  • From RTAbram on August 27, 2008
    Heh, you're just taking all the glamour out of being a professional dancer: work, pain, poverty, more work (lots of pain). Doesn't sound like much fun. At least Sephiroth makes a decent Prince Charming. So it's a good story and, better yet, it's well written. Keep it up. =)
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  • From RJaneyP on August 26, 2008
    I am really enjoying your story so far, can't wait for more!

    I alway thought FF7 would make a great Broadway musical with dance, with multy-media stage. With a mixture Metal,Rock, and classic music. Sword and popular and modern Dance work, sort of jive.

    And I can picture a line of dark suited Turks, doing tap/ shuffling dance, to something like "Dirty Deeds done dirt Cheap"! LOL Ballet is cool too, and I can picture all those nasty monsters in "tutus and ruffles", but certainly not Sephiroth or Cloud! Hurry write more I love it, G

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  • From sephcounttheways on August 25, 2008
    WAAA so tragic! Poor Cloud.. We need some tender lovin to heal the past up in this biotch.
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  • From RTAbram on August 22, 2008
    "Remember to look at her eyes, man. Her *eyes*." Yeah, definately helps *not* to look at her breasts when you want to impress a girl =p

    This was another good chapter. You've transposed the characters into your AU very well. I can tell your having fun with Genesis =)
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  • From havokgrl on August 21, 2008
    I really like this story, I love Zacks personality! I cant wait to read more!
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  • From sephcounttheways on August 21, 2008
    I don't appprove of all this, 'treat the star like dirt' nonsense. Poor Cloud. He needs a sugar daddy who loves him and treats him like the delicate snowflake that he is!!!!! SEPPPPPHHYYYY!!
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  • From sephcounttheways on August 19, 2008
    OHH Sephiroth is so sweet! odsidjas I can't wait for them to fall in loooove! Classy, sister, CLASSY!
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  • From LadyVorlana on August 18, 2008
    Eeeek! Good to see there is more! And yes, I totally understand about drying out after having so much ideas...I hit several of those little roadbumps with my own story but I have finally got it to the beginning of the finale (only took it 52 freakin chapters). Of course, as luck would have it, I have hit another of those roadblocks. *grumbles about fickle muses*
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  • From sephcounttheways on August 18, 2008
    Wow, this is really different. I love it! Hope to see more, soon! XD XD
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