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Reviews for Tiny Dancer

By : Lynsey
  • From ANON - Aijindaiku on May 20, 2016
    I am in love with your writing and I have to admit I've become a little vit of a stalker too lol I went to a few websites trying to find all your stories. Sad to see that it seems you haven't writen or rather posted anymore for a long time. I hope to see more of your work in the future. Thank you for sharing your amazing work with us! Hugs
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  • From Gwyllion on June 19, 2011
    Holy wow! What an awesome story! I absolutely enjoyed every chapter and would be looking forward to more. I adore Cloud as a dancer and I find it so cute that Seph was a fanboy of his. Hope Cloud will overcome his sickness and let Seph help him. Keep up the amazing work! :D
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  • From RikaBernkastel on March 17, 2010
    Bloody fucking hell! This is one of the best Yaoi storys I've EVER seen! (And I saw a lot, trust me.) Please update soon, I'm dieing to see the next chapter.
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  • From maegerakawaii on January 21, 2010
    Yay, Cloud's road to recovery is starting to look even better. Maybe seeing his beautiful performance will finally prove his own self worth. Come on, Cloud. You can do it! Live for yourself and for the gorgeous man who adores you. Thank you for the update. I'm excited to see if Cloud will start to realize how valuable he is in the next chapter.
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  • From shadowmaster on January 20, 2010
    lovely. cloud is now learning some self-worth. and i can imagine the problem he has with having to do something. i can't wait to see what come next.
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  • From Dreamfool on October 12, 2009
    Yes, baby steps, support, and a controlled diet are the best things for eating disorders. Sometimes they have to eat that first meal alone. My friend told me that. I love just how real this story is. And then, when I'm about to cry because it reminds too much of what my friend went though you throw in a line like "Your bitch is my command" or give us the image of a waddling Sephiroth. Love you, love the story, and so glad there was nothing on TV that day or I never would have bothered to read this story.
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  • From Divanora on August 09, 2009
    'gayer than a rainbow colored unicorn shitting bubblegum ice-cream'

    ROFLMFAO

    I think that has got to be the funniest line I have EVER read
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  • From darkaura204 on August 04, 2009
    great chapter.
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  • From AloraCorwyn on July 27, 2009
    Wow, loving this story, even though it's such an odd mix of canon and au/ooc. I really appreciate how well developed everything is (at least the parts you focus on) and the character depths you've created. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From darkaura204 on June 23, 2009
    This story is getting very interesting. update next chapter soon.
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  • From KageKitsune on May 18, 2009
    hope u update this. it is really good.
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  • From Dreamfool on February 17, 2009
    Yay, an update. Once again I bow to your mad writing skills and knowledge. Eating disorders do not go away with a kiss and a hug and especially not when people try to coerce you. I love the fact that Zack has a phych degree just so he could understand Seph. That is love right there. Hope to see another update soon.
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  • From sephcounttheways on February 11, 2009
    Aww poor Cloud! I can totally see why Seph would be beyond frustrated trying to get him to just eat. I can't wait to see where the story goes! Love it as always!
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  • From sephcounttheways on December 29, 2008
    Aww, I hope Cloud can put on some weight, poor little guy. Seph can't fix everything for him, he has to fix himself in this, I guess.

    The little convo at the end was really hilarious. "You're a slut?" HAHAHA I cracked up big time at that one.

    Good chapter, can't wait to see the next one :3
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  • From Dreamfool on December 13, 2008
    I promise not to kill you if you promise not to kill Cloud. Well I suppose I can even forgive you that as long as Roxas lives and has hot sex with Axel. I love Roxas and I have no clue why. Axel, Reno, and Riku are normally my favorite type of characters. Loud, fun, and egotistical or quiet, dark, and egotistical. I hated Roxas when I started to play but he grew on me and I was crying so hard when he disapeared.
    Anyway I love the updates. I was mortified along with poor Sephy in that Body Shot scene but it made me giggle anyway. I'm like Sephiroth in that I don't like to be in that sort of party scene. Mainly because I know I'd make an ass of myself trying to look cool which I totally am not. I'd give a longer review but it's late and I have to go to work in the morning so good night and I promise a better review next time.
    PS I mean it about hot Axel and Roxas sex. I would totally forgive you for killing cloud if you put that in there.
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