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Reviews for Shadows within darkness

By : schwaerze
  • From ANON - Blazing Malice on November 17, 2008
    That was very good! I loooove Yazu and Vincent! My two faves! Write more please and i promise i will read and review xxxxxxxxxxxx
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  • From Rina76 on November 16, 2008
    Two chapters for me to catch up on! You've been busy. :) The first one was oh so painful with poor Yazoo's injuries. For some reason the most beautiful ones always seem to suffer the most and you did a great job of portraying the pain he was feeling. Ouch. *winces*

    The latest one was developed nicely and I'm glad to see that despite everything Yazoo is still being the fiery, fiesty little street urchin that he is, bad language and all lol It's a real delight to see him act this way instead of the calm, cool, refined character he's usually written as. I assume that given enough time he will eventually end up like that but for now I really enjoy his spunky personality and can't wait to see how the story continues. I feel bad though, that Vincent will lie to him about his brothers being dead. Boy, is Yaz gonna be pissed when he finds out the truth! I look forward to the next part.

    (And I appreciate the thanks regarding my review. I've given loads of comments and I always thank people for reviewing my fic but I do believe you're the first person who's returned the favour and thanked me back!)
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  • From LamicaLee on November 15, 2008
    Oooh an update, how lovely! ;D Hope to read more soon as I would love to see how this story develops. ♥
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  • From Kerianya on November 15, 2008
    Hehe...ooh Vincy you shouldn't lie like that. I may well have to make him pay for that in my own fic.

    Poor Yazoo to be told his brothers are dead. And yes, his language is abysmal. Perhaps Vincent has some elocution lessons in mind?

    Looking forward to the next chapter immensely,

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From on November 12, 2008
    I'm glad Yazoo is getting help.
    Good job so far and hope you can update again soon.
    :)
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  • From Kerianya on November 10, 2008
    Awww...I always liked Aerith. If ever I feature her in my fics she's always in a favourable light. CloudxAerith is the only het pairing I like from that game.

    Another excellent read, by the way. I don't think that Yazoo could aske to be in a better person's care.

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From on November 08, 2008
    poor Yazoo ;-;

    Hope you update soon.
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  • From Ringwen on November 08, 2008
    WONDERFUL!!! XD I can't wait for next chapter!! Hehe, finally Vincent got his hands on Yazoo! XD Please write more soon! ^.^
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  • From Kerianya on November 07, 2008
    Oh my god! Poor Yazoo...my Yazoo. I was actually crying at the end of this chapter. Vincent's ultimatum was so tragic and cruel. I beg of you, let Yazoo be reunited with his brothers. I don't think Loz and Kadaj would survive without him.

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From Rina76 on November 07, 2008
    Oh, this is something really novel and unique! Love the world you've put the boys into, ugly though it is, with all the language and sensory descriptions of the disgusting surrounds. Also love how you've shown their bond and the way they care about each other so much, even if they are not keen on showing it all the time, like boys from any era.

    Gods, that last chapter tore out my heart completely. You do good pain, let me tell ya! Amazing job. I'll definitely be reading this fascinatingly unusual series. :)
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  • From Kerianya on November 05, 2008
    I'm enjoying this immensley! Please continue - it's an absorbing world you've put the characters into.

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From LadyVorlana on November 01, 2008
    *goes down on hands and knees* Oh you must continue this. It is so intriguing and well written. I like that you have Vincent as accepting of what he is but still using it to do something to change the life of those like Yazoo. Hehehe. Clever Vinny. Anywho, cant wait to see more of it!
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  • From Kerianya on November 01, 2008
    Oh! This is excellent! I adore this time period and Yazoo as a vampire queen always struck me as an excellent idea! Pray continue...*licks lips*

    Kerianya XxX
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  • From ANON - d0rky on November 01, 2008
    Love it so far!!! please continue!
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