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Reviews for FF12 Revenant Wings - Jewels of the Skysea

By : Streti
  • From FIDO1618 on February 14, 2010

    Thanks for the update.

    But no Fran...? Damn.

    Oh well, looking forward to that. Back to waiting and watching.


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  • From ANON - Anonymous on December 04, 2009

    Very good. Please continue this.
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  • From ANON - Fuffuster on June 25, 2009
    Edit: Now that I think about it, there actually is ONE thing I wish you would add more of in this story. When they get down to the actual sex part, I kind of imagine it being euphoric (because it is) - but I hardly ever see the characters having dramatic reactions, i.e. "Oh my God!", moaning, screaming, arching their backs, scratching skin with nails, etc.; basically, anything that shows the intensity of penetrative sex. You know what I mean? That's pretty much the only thing lacking, and I'd really like to see more of it. In my opinion, apart from that and the couple of grammar/spelling mistakes, it would almost be the perfect fanfiction. Also, haha, this is completely irrelevant, but a while ago I actually started writing a Balthier x Fran sex fic called 'Jewel of the Wood'. x3 Weird, huh?
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  • From ANON - Fuffuster on June 25, 2009
    Not gonna lie, I have NO fucking idea why this story has so few reviews. I find it to be ridiculously well-written, well thought-out, descriptive, alluring - everything you could hope for in a lemony fanfic and more. Basically, it's hot as fuck, and I love it. I'm so glad to see such a good, heterosexual FFXII fanfiction, because I haven't read one in quite a while. I hope you continue to write it/write more, because I'd love to read it, and I really like how in-character they all are. I thought the dialogue was really cute and cleverly-written, too. All in all, I love it. THANK YOU.
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  • From ANON - Dick Dickman on June 02, 2009
    Excellent chapter! Especially enjoyed Basch and E;za's back and forth there.
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  • From Streti on May 24, 2009
    In this fic, she is meant to be in her late teens, close to Penelo's age.
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  • From Streti on May 21, 2009
    Well, joe, I won't deny you your own interpretation. A new chapter is up, hope you enjoy though there's no Penelo.
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  • From joeparas1988 on May 09, 2009
    The purpose of your stories, for me, is your complete sluttifying of well known/ liked female fictional characters. There's something so deliciously wrong about how you turn the most pure and innocent of characters into sex-craved pros that one can't help but enjoy it.

    This, coincidently, is also why I still eagerly await the Vaan/Penelo/Larsa/Random Bangaa gangband scene. Penelo is a character that would never in a million years act in such a way, which is why its such a taboo pleasure to see her doing so.

    Eagerly awaiting an update. Don't take too long now!
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  • From ANON - Dick Dickman on April 13, 2009
    I must say, I'm intriuged by the new story layout. While it sort of breaks up the flow of the story, it makes referencing favorite parts much easier.
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  • From ANON - Dick Dickman on April 11, 2009
    Comments? Hmmm....

    Well, I like lots of description when it comes to the bodies of both the men and the women. Even though I know what the characters look like, a good description about how Fran's body looks when being fucked, or how Basch reacts to a good bj can make the experience that much more real.
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  • From Streti on April 09, 2009
    Thanks, Dick and Joe. Also, I prefer comments over praise. What would that purpose be, Joe?
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  • From joeparas1988 on April 09, 2009
    Update this please, you cut off right at the good part - the Penelo gangbang.

    If its a review you want, I enjoy the gangbang scenes in your stories - they do well at achieving their purpose. I'm eagerly waiting an update to Jewels of the Skysea.
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  • From ANON - Dick Dickman on April 08, 2009
    Streti, I'm so glad you kept this story going, it's one of my favorites. You're a great author, and your work is some of the best on the site.
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  • From Streti on February 06, 2009
    Oh sod off. They've recently changed their terms and now disclaimers that were fine before aren't anymore. And when this story is obviously not too liked, why should I bother? Maybe it's better gone, I'm sick of these leechers.
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  • From Streti on February 05, 2009
    Oh phooey. Maybe I'll just delete the whole fucking thing.
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