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By : schwaerze
  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on July 14, 2009
    About that cherub Reno, in my mind he wouldn't have anything around his hips! And as for Yaz, I do love his dreams.
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  • From Rina76 on July 08, 2009
    Whee! I feel like it's my birthday - you keep dedicating things to me! lol Well, thank you for the wonderful present of this chapter. *gasp* Shower smut! (kind of...) Oh, and very well written, btw. I could feel the water raining down on me. Beautiful descriptions of Yazoo's body awkening and again with the first orgasm. It didn't take much to make him go, did it? Mmm. Delicious. Gorgeous! Glorious. A bunch of other words that end in 'ous'. I love an innocent Yazoo. ^__^ I think I'm also going to love him losing that innocence too.

    Rufus had to be watching that! I know /I/ would have. *smirks*
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  • From ANON - Seifer19 on July 07, 2009
    YES! More Rufus talk paired with an awesomely awkward situation by the oblivious Yazoo! Truly did make me laugh when Yazoo assumed Rufus had children. The whole "battle of inner conscious" scene made me think of Yazoo with a small Rufus on his shoulder saying "do it! do it!" lol.

    Oh and about Lucrecia, I totally forgot that she picked Hojo over Vincent! (what a bitch! lol)
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  • From MyValenwind on July 07, 2009
    OMFG. I've always dreamed of having these boys (especially Vincent) in some kind of religious setting, and this is amazingly well written! I love it, and I'm dying for more! Great work!
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on June 21, 2009
    Aww Reno's so cute trying to get them back together again. Gotta love him. I do not trust Rufus though.
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  • From Rina76 on June 17, 2009
    Somehow I don't think Yazoo is going to be too pleased to see Reno, who after all, held the damn camera and recorded every sinful thing in the first place. That ought to be interesting. It's nice of Reno to try and be the peacemaker, though whether he'll be successful is yet to be seen.

    Oh yeah, Vinny's wife is a huge bitch. No wonder he's gay. lol

    You know, I HAD wondered the same thing myself: why do you write so many bad/painful things happening to Yazoo? It's almost as though you /like/ seeing him suffer. I get the appeal of the whole hurt/comfort thing but you don't even do the comfort part. Or if anyone tries, Yazoo rejects it. He just deals with stuff on his own, like he doesn't really need or want anyone else's help. (I'll make an exception for Shadows because he clearly needs and loves Vincent in that and does accept comfort from him) Maybe you just find his pain beautiful in a tragic kind of way. Even when he's in the worst possible agony and suffering imaginable, there's something still stunningly beautiful and heartrending about him. Unlike my version of the character, your Yazoo is definitely the royal prince of angst. Or the prince of ice. You write him so cold sometimes I almost get frostbite of the eyes just reading it. If you ever wrote a fic where Yazoo was happy and had no major psychopathic issues, I think I'd keel over in shock. XD
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  • From ANON - Seifer19 on June 16, 2009
    LOL! This chapter was great. So many people just despise Reno and you can tell he loves it! Oh and yeah it's actually kind of funny that you made Lucrecia a bitch, no complaints here! All she ever did in FF was sit in suspended animation and make Vincent pine over her lol.

    I seriously want to read more of Rufus' talks with Yazoo. Of course (like you said) he is a typical hedonist, but I like how you make him have alot of insight into Yazoo's problems. Anyways, awesome chap, post again soon!
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  • From ANON - Seifer19 on June 11, 2009
    Totally awesome to read two chaps back to back since I haven't read any fanfics in awhile. This one is truly getting deeper and more interesting each chap. I loved how you made Rufus a previous member of the Order (it all comes together now! lol) plus it's more of Rufus' philosophical side rather than just his horny side lol.
    I didn't find the Satanistic thing all that terrible, I actually thought it worked well in the story just to let you know.

    Anyways, update soon please and keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - crayonbox on April 20, 2009
    OMG, I can't believe I totally forgot about this fic. Please don't punnish me. *on her knees in front of you*
    This story is getting better, better and better. I never pictured a Rufus/Yazoo pairing, so I had my brain working overtime to create a picture. I read the smex scene three times to get a good image... just because I'm a perv and showersmex is hot. ;P
    Rufus being once part of the Jenovaclan kind of surprised me, but seems obvious with all the 'thou art evil' the clan is spitting towards him.
    I cheered with Angael and Genesis entering the story. I'm wondering; will Genesis try to kick Seph off his throne?
    I don't really have a religion myself, which probably pushes me in the category atheist, but “The god you are serving is you.” line from Rufus... is that really satanism? Maybe to people who solely follow God it sounds like Satanism, but to me it sounds... rather normal "live the way you want to" kind of way.
    Anyways, please, please, please continue this story. It's fantastic.


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  • From Ringwen on April 15, 2009
    WOOOHOO! Another great chapter! XD

    "hehe, what you pointed out put some ideas into my head" >> Well I'm glad I can encourage you to walk down the dirty and perverted and sadistic road that I'm walking right now. ~.^
    Ah and yes, I'll wait patiently for this fic. For now... *mwahaha* XD


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  • From ANON - Zexion.6 on April 12, 2009
    Wow, you're a great writer. The characters are so in character. :)
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  • From fyrbyrd074 on April 10, 2009
    oh my Vincent is such a liar... Can't wait to see where this is going. Oh and enjoy mine. I saw the movie two days ago and wow out this came!
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  • From ANON - Rina on April 10, 2009
    Wow, terrific couple of chapters! Okay, so don't wear yourself out trying to do a Yazoo shower scene because the one you did - even though only a fantasy - was still hot enough for me! (not that I will ever say no to reading a Yazoo shower scene but if you don't have the time to do it, it's perfectly fine!) Rufus has a great imagination, yes? I love the erotic details you put in and the way you describe what the more dominant male sees from his point of view. It was a shock going from Rufus mentally calling Yazoo a needy little bitch and coming all over his own clothes, to seeing how things /really/ were in that bathroom, and the final image of a tortured Yazoo crouched on the floor in despair nearly broke my heart. You always write Yazoo's pain so perfectly; I can really feel it. :(

    Amazing twist in the second update! Didn't see that coming and it surprised the hell out of me. I bet Yaz is surprised too but this is a good thing. Finally, someone he can relate to, someone who knows what he's going through. Also found it amusing how Rufus just waltzes into the room without knocking as if he owns it. Oh, right. He DOES. lol Arrogant though he is, I can see him becoming a very good friend of Yazoo's and heaven knows, that's what Yaz needs right now!

    Still feel bad for Vincent too. Man, all those yummy guys in the priesthood? I'd almost join up Mother's stupid religion just to look at them everyday. ^__^

    Nice job as always, honey.
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  • From IntHellsing on April 08, 2009
    lol. well it's dyed red now. xDD

    Ohh. What a twist. I never would've thought that Rufus would've come from a background like that.
    But it actually makes a lot of sense for your Rufus and your story. And explains why Rufus is so extreme and such a bastard. xDD
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  • From ANON - Ainaloth on March 31, 2009
    Naugthy Rufus INDEED! O.O Oh ho ho how I wish he'll actually do all those things to Yazoo! Or that someone'll do it at least! XD

    Hmm.. We'll in my mind (dirty and perverted as it is) Sephiroth is probably the only one who could put some fear and respect in Yazoo..
    Usually Yazoo is just kind of arrogant, cold, somewhat bitchy (don't get me wrong, you know I love him) and always looking bored.

    I wonder what Sephiroth would think if Yazoo actually tried to use those moods with him. I see Sephiroth someone who doesn't demand obedience, he expects it. Does Yazoo know this? ^.~ Eeeh, just playing with some thoughts. Think it's something you can use?
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