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By : schwaerze

From IntHellsing on March 31, 2009
Idk. I may dye it red.
I keep putting it off just because red is sort of a high-maintanence color...
But I recently found a red dye that doesn't fade to pink and actually lasts a decent amount of time... so I may do it. xDD So I can look like Reno.

I'm actually sort of relieved that it was just a fantasy. Hahah. I would've been so jealous for poor Vinny if Rufus had had his way with sweet little Yaz so easily. xDD
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From Rina76 on March 30, 2009
Great chapter. Wow, Yaz said some really mean things to Vincent. Poor Vince!

Heh, Rufus is such a little perv, I love it. And the secretary acting unconcerned, like this sort of thing happens all the time. lol

Great description of the shower 'room' with the glass screen. I want one of those! Of course, you know you're gonna have to write a Yazoo-alone-in-the-shower scene, right? *imagines his gorgeous body all wet and naked and soapy...*

Hell yeah! Yazoo would make a FANTASTIC model. I always thought that. And I'd buy anything he was advertising, even if it was like, milkshakes or lawnmowers or something. ;) You know what would be totally awesome? If he had his own brand of hair care products. I can just see his logo now - "Use Yazoo Shampoo. Keeps the shine in your silver!" Haha...

*gasp* Zack/Yazoo? Confessional box? Yes, please! *gives big baby seal eyes*

I love you. ^__^
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From ANON - fyrbyrd on March 30, 2009
Yeah, you did a little Rufus/Yazoo.I enjoyed that. Makes my aching body feel much better. Melbourne is famous for it's trams but it ain't fun being hit by one, I'm all bruised. Hope to read more soon,thank you
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From labetasdan on March 29, 2009
Wow ... poor Rufus...so wrapped my the beauty prude(?) Yazoo...
I love it. You really should do more smut cause you really have an elegant style for kinky, so sensual, hot and dirty at same time.
Awaiting anxiously for the next chapter.
hugs from brasil
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From ANON - seifer19 on March 27, 2009
lol!!! awww Rufus is a little schemer! Totally thought that bit where he downloaded the camvid was hilarious, I really hope you update soon!
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From ANON - Ainaloth on March 26, 2009
"And I just started a smutty Seph/Yaz oneshot, I hope to get it done within the next week and share it here then *has a weak spot as well*"

REALLY!?! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! *fan girl freakout* XD Oh my you've made me so happy! Can't wait to read it! Will you be posting it here or on your LJ-site, I'm keeping my eyes on you! O.O

Hehe, this fic just gets more and more interesting! I wonder what Rufus is up to..
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From IntHellsing on March 26, 2009
Reno... he's been my favorite character since the moment in the game where he walks into the patch of flowers in the church and turns around and says "and nobody step on the slowers" and they're like "But Reno, you just did"... xDD
Actually... I just re-did my hair to a black version of his. [He's so my idol.]

Poor Vincent! I can't believe Yaz would accuse him of such horrible things! And now he's all alone with Rufus and no one to protect him! ::sob:: I hope he comes around and forgives poor Vincent soon. T__T
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From Rina76 on March 22, 2009
Haha, yes. There is a definite link between smut and reviews. I should know. *snorts* Lucky for you I can appreciate a good story, with or without any smut. Sure, it's fun but sex is not everything. Sex with no plot, and repeated over and over again, can quickly becoming very boring. Other shit has to happen to keep my interest.

I love the direction this story is taking now, especially with the introduction of a clearly gay Rufus! I never really thought much of his character in the film (probably because he led Kadaj on and lied to him about Mother, making Kadaj get that cute, dismayed look of betrayal when he found out - poor lil Daj) but I really like him in this and can see some interesting things happening between him and Yazoo. Not that it HAS to happen, mind you. I quite like the flirtatious way Rufus treats Yaz and if that's all that happens I'm still happy because that's very enjoyable to read! Poor shell-shocked Yazoo. It's intriguing that he went straight to Rufus when Rufus stands for everything the Circle hates and depises.

Ohhh, Zack as a priest. Damn. Can I confess to him? Alone? *lusts sinfully*

And Loz is Tifa's husband! XD At least that makes more sense and is plausible whereas Yazoo with Aeris is totally not. So, no wedding, huh? Thank you THANK YOU, Reno! *rejoices and buys that cute fox a drink*

I can't wait to see Yazoo and Vincent try to explain why they've barged into Rufus' office. Oh boy. That ought to be interesting! Hehe. Nice work, doll. Keep it up. ;)
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From ANON - Zexion.6 on March 21, 2009
I love Rufus in this fic. I normally never like Rufus, but i love how you do his character.
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From Ringwen on March 20, 2009
Oh ho ho ho! I can feel the tension building up over here! XD Neh, I've always believed Rufus would fit as a little perv, or a sadist and control freak! Hmm, I wonder if our devious little Reno will tell Sephiroth the whole truth..? Interesting indeed..

Heh...yeah as you've maybe noticed I have a VERY weak spot for Seph/Yazoo...!
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From IntHellsing on March 19, 2009
:snicker: I love Reno.
I love what you had him do.

I can't wait to see what happens with Vincent and Yaz. Poor Yaz. He's really not taking things well.

Glad you're still updating. I was getting a bit worried there for a while. ;)
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From ANON - fyrbyrd on March 19, 2009
Ohhh, I'm liking this better and better... Damn devious little Reno. Sephy's gonna be pissed. I hope to write the next of mine this weekend. Keep up the great work on all your wonderful stories!!!
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From Rina76 on February 27, 2009
I feel so bad for (not so now!) innocent Yazzie. Seeing what he did in close-up...That's gotta be a shock! It's a good thing, though, for him to realise what a sham his life actually is. Vincent already knows it. So does Reno.

Aw, look at Reno trying to be nice (in his own way) and giving Vincent love advice. *heart lanky heathen readheads*

Vincent is a very different character in this story - gentler and softer - and I really like him this way. Shy and unsure but clearly deeply in love with his best friend, just too scared to do anything about it. I empathise with him, poor guy. Yazoo is very different too and it's refreshing to see him act more reserved and inhibited than he is in your other fic.

I'm looking forward to the next big dramatic chapter but am dreading any future meetings with Sephiroth, though. Gods, really not looking forward to that! I hope he doesn't hurt Yazoo. *chews nails*

Nice update. And I like the plot! Plot is good. You can only write so much porn without it starting to get boring and repetitive, right? Not that your porn is ever boring. Hell no, sister. You do mighty good porn. :)

Master of threesomes? Why, thank you, my dear! *gets bashful* Can't say I've ever had one myself but you never know...If I ever ran into those guys in a club - I'm so volunteering. lol

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From Ringwen on February 23, 2009
Oh my... Reno should be more careful with his camera... If I had a film with a hot sex scene on Yazoo and Vincent, I tell you I would NOT leaving it laying around! I'd probably lock myself in a panic room with the film and call it "my preeeeciiiioooous".. XD
Now...please don't force our darling Yazoo to marry that woman!! T.T Instead let Sephiroth get his hands on him...and then let him toss the remains to Vincent..
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From Rina76 on February 06, 2009
Okay, so NOW I've read a scene hotter than the undressing-Yazoo-against-a-wall one. I...have no words to explain how amazingly sexy and raunchy that chapter was. Just...speechless. It was like watching porn. Only way, way better. And prettier. Loved how Yaz was so turned on he couldn't stop, not even when someone else entered the room. Loved Vincent giving orders and Reno dirty-talking too. I could so see that happening. Mmm. Bad boys rule. I know what I'll be dreaming about tonight. ;) Spectacular stuff!

Hey, Reno? Can you make a copy of that tape? I'll pay you anything you want for it, dude. *gets on knees and begs* ANYthing!

And thanks so much for the links to the trailers! Haven't seen them before. Most seriously awesome. ^___^ I got a question, though. Why are they naked in the cave with Tseng?? Not that I'm complaining (Yowza Kadaj-chest!) but...wtf is going ON in there? And their suits can just magically...appear...on them now? Like magic? *blinks* Well, I guess it beats having to get dressed in the mornings and doing up all those fussy straps, buckles and zips, huh? Wait - they have wings embroidered on the backs? I gotta go watch the movie again because I totally did not see that.

Found it a little creepy when Yaz stops and smiles at the kid. And the weird laugh is just...weird. Doesn't sound like Yazoo. But still. More of them! Yayness!
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