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By : Rina76

From PsychoBabble on September 26, 2016
Noooo...this cannot be the end.

But still, great story, loved it and the ending, good job =D

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From ANON - jonnasezrar on February 24, 2014
Thanks for updating, and so glad you didn't forget about us readers! Very curious to see how things progress.
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From ANON - Rinni on August 01, 2012
Hi Rina! Thank you once again for updating this story. I have to admit that I was a tad bit scared of the pregnancy smut warning you had at the beginning but I have to say that it wasn't bad at all and still extremely enjoyable. I loved the way that Kate explains more about what is happening to her during the pregnancy and also how she assures him that sex while being pregnant is possible and ok. It's too adorable how interested he is in her physical changes and I find it to be extremely realistic to his character. I do have a deep love for Yazoo and Kate's friendly relationship. The way they interact with each other is so refreshing and definitely needed. It's almost like Yazoo is Kate's voice of reason and reassurance when she has such craptastic but extremely hilarious encounters with Kadaj. Speaking of Kadaj, I love him! Even though he gives Kate such a hard time he makes the whole situation light and fun with his embarrassing comments. Also, combined with the way Kate reacts, it's just so priceless!
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From ANON - Rinni on April 15, 2012
Thank you so much for updating so quickly! I absolutely loved this chapter, mostly because it shows more silent interactions and more depth into Cate's inner-most thoughts about the boys. I laughed hard when Cate ogled Kadaj and realized what she was doing. Absolutely hilarious! I tend to never review twice on the same story or wait for updates on a fanfiction, but this story will be one that I continuously review on and religiously wait for updates. This, by far, is the best story I've read in a long time and I thank you so much for bringing it into existence.
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From ANON - Rinni on August 18, 2011
I just wanted to let you know that I read and fell in love with your story!! I have looked for fanfiction about Loz being in relationships and I have to say that yours is the best I've read so far. Please continue with this story! I love it way to much and would be heartbroken if it ends now.
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From Ficfan3484 on February 08, 2011
I really like the moments between Cate and Loz, and Cate and Yazoo. They're really sweet.
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From schwaerze on February 08, 2011
Again this was such a great chapter! You described Loz' room exactly how I would have imagined it to be - empty chips bags, magazines (no porn though? XD) and trash metal CDs, yay! He's totally a trash metal guy XD It is a good thing he changed his sheets for Cate, though I must say that I can 6 weeks without changing them too, becuase I forget....... don't tell anyone >___< Anyways, now I really wonder how the other two's rooms look! I could imagine that Kadaj is either really chaotic or very orderly (since he is a bit of a control freak) or maybe it is very ordinary? Since Yazoo seems to have such a sense for designing stuff and arranging it his room must look mind-blowing XD I loved that he did most of the designing btw, it seems fitting!

Now I have to admit that I squirmed a bit at the 'lovey-dovey-confessionmaking' bit... It's not because it wasn't well written, but I am not good with those kind of things XD It had to happen of course, they need to get closer as this is a romance story as well and I am glad that they talked so openly and that they have respect for each other and try to work something out! At times I find it a bit hard to believe that Loz had had only bad experiences, because even though he might not be as popular as Yazoo and Kadaj he is by no means ugly or unattractive. I guess the world he lives in is really harsh.

I am curious to read what Cate is saying in her sleep! It seems that she has a direct line to Jenova or Sephiroth, poor thing XDDD That will be one hell of a ride! Cate's talk with Yazoo was interesting too; I do not think she needs to fear him and I am glad he has that affectionate side as well but I cannot help but wonder if he cares for her as a person at all. Granted, he met her only two times and knows next to nothing about her character, so it seems that the only reason he tolerates her is because she was nice to Loz and now carries his brother's baby. I think that is a very realistic portrayal, actually. It would be strange to think that either of them (except for Loz of course because for him it kind of was love at first sight XD) would find her to be something 'special' or exceptional. She is just a girl and she will have to prove herself to them, I guess, and I am certain she will ;)

Thank you for this wonderful chapter and I cannot wait to see if Cate will find out who it is that fucked Kadaj XDDD *huggles and kisses*
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From butabara on February 07, 2011
Oh that was a BRILLIANT chapter!!! I love that this isn't all about how ungodly hot Loz is ans sex sex sex. I really like that Cate actually cares about getting to know him. And your Yazoo is amazing, also.I think you've kept them ALL in character perfectly. Can't wait for the next one!!
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From ANON - anaais on January 09, 2011
greaaat story! i love it and i can't wait for more!
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From Ficfan3484 on January 08, 2011
I just read your story and I'm so excited to read the rest. It's really well written. Mary Sues are acceptable as long as they are well written and your character is well written.
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From schwaerze on January 05, 2011
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! New chapter! And you were really fast with the update this time! But now things are progressing and the built up is over, so it might be easier to write? Anyways, I enjoyed it to the last letter :DThere were so many mixed emotions and you blend them perfectly into a vivid, touching mix! Yazoo, who doesn��t normally speak that much was so well down, with how he speaks quietly, and is so calm and collected despite the content of his story, which was really heart-wrenching! But I guess over time he became jaded? I think maybe all of them had to emotionally distance themselves from their past a bit, to not go crazy... I felt very much for Loz, poor thing! He is so sensitive and to think that he had to kill his own brothers is so sad. But they really were only kids just then, and given their background and all it was, from their POV, a merciful decision... I loved also that Yazoo and Loz do dirty jokes in their heads XDDDD Haha, I��d sooooo love to know what Yazoo was thinking!

I feel for Cate as well. It must be tough and dizzying to get all that information, but she handled it well, though sometimes she was almost painfully blunt in her summing things up XD Hilarious! And yeah, taking care of a super baby doesn��t sound so thrilling... Loz won��t be much of a big help, the softie. But maybe Kadaj and Yazoo can help out or so?

Besides, I also thought that the way you portrayed what had happened with Sephiroth and such was fairly accurate. You didn�t go much into detail but you didn��t have to anyways. I also think that it is believable that Cate didn��t notice much of the commotion; the world was in turmoil then and everyone just tried to save themselves and Shinra tried to keep information away from the public too.

Okay, I will stop here XD It was a wonderful addition as always and I can��t wait to see what will happen next! Must know if Kadaj is still sulking XDDD *kisses and huggles*
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From butabara on June 21, 2010
Bu-bu-bu-bu-but! Don't leave it there! PLEASE update?! I absolutely ADORE this. And in my opinion, you kept the characters...oddly...in character. I LOVE this, and I really REALLY hope to see more of this soon. I have been DYING for a good Loz story. No one writes them, so, BRAVO!!!!

Could you possibly email me when you update? Maybe? Please? *Puppy dog eyes*

guni_tatsuhiko@yahoo.com

P.S. That was some of the hottest smut I have EVER read. EVER. *Whispers dramatically* Ever...
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From ANON - SilentDoll on June 09, 2010
Omg.... I can't believe I only read this now!
Okay. I'm sorry for the late review, but hey, better late than never, right?
I like how the latest chapter went, oh hells yes.
The soft start, and then the tension and then kaa-BOOM. Full on violent fighting.
I guess that must have traumatised Cate, but I guess she would have to see it eventually.
Seeing and hearing about it is different.
How does she see Loz now?
Will she even want to go back to him after witnessing first hand what he and his brothers are perfectly capable of?
She has his number, but she didn't give loz hers, did she?
So I am guessing Cate will have to make the call back???
So many questions... You HAVE to update soon, please!
It's so enjoyable to read this and I want more! Soon!

SilentDoll
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From ANON - RemnantMolesticator on June 05, 2010
oh.my.gawd. Loz.... yummeh yummeh yummeh loz.... finally getting his much needed love. i snickered a little at the rhino comment but could totally see it. cate... she's... she could be you or me. she's not the picture of perfection that too many OFCs are. now. you best be updating soon or i'm kidnapping Loz and not letting you oggle him anymore O.o
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From ANON - Silent Doll on April 06, 2010
Wait.
What is this....
You FINALLY updated? =D
Yay!!!!!
-Goes off to read-
Pardon me if I can't review properly.
I'm kinda really busy >_
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