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By : schwaerze
  • From ANON - eriksigal on February 17, 2016
    hemlock2016@yandex.ru
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on June 23, 2009
    Oh my I am surprised he could move after that. DP.... No one can leave that gorgeous body alone!
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  • From ANON - Hakucho on May 21, 2009
    Hahahahaha. Good job schwarze. It was very good story with great twists. It seems like we are several liking Loz and thinks he deserves better. Hahahaha. Well, he is handsome and sexy isn't he and of course Kadaj and Yazoo need a lesson they wont forget. Well, Loz ure did give them a little something there to remember, too bad it was a mere fantasy. He is a fiiiiine guy with awesome curves. I personally think he reminds me quite a lot about Wolverine in X-men (with hair cut and strength) but a silver version. Hence he appeares as a wolverine in Marlene's dream. Although Loz is a shy and emotinal person, I think he can be ever so deadly and his beauty is just as seductive as that of Yazoo and Kadaj but more in a masculine way. He is awesome and so is this little short-story. :) Take care
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  • From Rina76 on May 19, 2009
    So much for no new fics...Got a little inspired, did we? Hmm? Wonder what caused that? ;)

    Ah, but this is great! Just as good, if not better than the first chapter. You definitely seem to have a better grasp of Loz's internal thoughts and language; the way he would speak and think. *nods in approval* Here are all my fav bits, in order:

    >Honestly, if I didn´t know that he´s just too ignorant about such things I´d think he´s doing this on purpose to frustrate the hell outta me...

    Haha, you KNOW it! Like I said, Yazoo is a little man-whore. He knows too well what effect he has on people, even on his own brother.

    >“No, master Loz, it wasn´t.”

    ROFL! The thought of Kadaj saying that had me in stitches! I seriously burst out laughing at that. I personally don't see him as ever being that meek and submissive but Gods, how hilarious would that be if he was? Loz's fantasies are soooo funny. XD Yet they still manage to be hot as hell!

    >I´m the leader, I can make them do whatever I want.

    Hey! That sounds suspiciously like something I would make Loz say. *narrows eyes* Are you reading my mind? I need lines like those for our rpg!

    >Yazoo´s hair might fall over them, shielding their faces from my view, but before I could make a disapproving noise my considerate youngest brother would already have lifted a gloved hand, carefully pushing the long tresses away and tucking them behind Yazoo´s delicate ear, their lips still locked.

    Uhhhh...*melts into my own chair* what a pretty, pretty picture you just described. Gorgeous.

    >It´d be hard now, the nipple I mean – though there certainly are other things that become solid pretty quickly, I must say.

    Another ROFL moment! Loz has a terrific sense of humour. Dirty, crass humour, mind you...lol

    >He’d throw me a pleading, slightly frightened look, but I’d be unbending to his puppy eyes. He’d look adorable though, with his small hands still clinging to Yazoo´s hair and neck for support, his cheeks flushed, his eyes glassy, the trembling body and the shy looks.

    OMG. You make Kadaj seem so innocent and young here. I want to pet him. I don't usually think of him this way (I tend to go for the sexy, older seducer who knows exactly what he's doing) but imagining him as this timid little boy who's never been touched is just so...*squeaks* I love it!

    >I´m amazed that he knows what to do. That certainly fuels my suspicion that he isn´t as half as innocent as he always pretends to be.

    lol MAN-WHORE!

    >Kadaj’d growl at the harsh treatment and I’d frown.

    Little Daj getting all jealous and possessive. Too cute. ^__^

    Very sexy work and wonderfully depicted with all those yummy details I enjoy reading. You know, you do Loz almost better than I do him! Getting his character right, I mean. Fabulously snappy ending as well. Go angry Loz! Glare back at those haughty princesses. XD

    Another lovely work of fiction from you, my dear girl. I enjoyed that very much! It was funny and sensual, even tender and loving, while still remaining rather pornalicious and naughty. I could see something like this happening in their earlier years, while Kadaj was still young enough to boss around. Thanks for posting it!

    PS. I'm looking forward to our joint-smut effort too. *is excited*
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  • From ANON - ozyaoi on May 17, 2009
    Brilliant fic Loz is my fave character out of the boys.I cannot wait for the actual sex to happen for real.I don't think it would be as Loz thought or he might even meet a certain redhead while out on a ride to rid his frustrations and do to him what he planned to do to Yazoo.Hope to see more .....ozyaoi
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  • From EnideDear on April 25, 2009
    Oh this is an absolutley wonderful fic, so hot and steamy! *grin* Gotta love Loz, hope he gets to make his fantasies become real soon! Beacuse i don't think yazoo would mind at all ;o)
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  • From ANON - Ainaloth on March 26, 2009
    Oh YES please DO these things to him Loz! 8D
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  • From Rina76 on March 22, 2009
    Holy....hotness...whew...

    That was only the second piece of smut you ever wrote?? I don't believe you. *shakes head* I'm sure you wrote heaps of smut before that. No? Truly? Well, that's really, really REALLY damn good considering. And I inspired it? Wow. Totally flattered! Thank you. You've mentioned being worried about writing sex scenes...Uh, why? You're awesome at them! Okay, that was pretty much plotless porn but hey...I can appreciate porn too, you know. And I definitely appreciated every bit of that. It was hot, funny and very visually descriptive, seeing everything, every reaction through Loz's eyes. I love that you wrote it in first person and you did a brilliant job of keeping Loz in character. You made him seem much more dominant and domineering than I have and it was fan-fucking-tastic to see him giving orders and making Yazoo say what he wanted to hear. Loved Yazoo's mock-fighting and how he was so slutty yet pretending he wasn't like that in the slightest which we all know is a big fat LIE. He's such a little man-whore. lol

    I think my favourite line is this: "My head’s spinning like mad but I don’t care because right now I´m a fucking force of nature, a supernova, a dying star…!" Yeah, that's Loz, all right. All over! He'd feel so powerful and God-like making Yazoo submit so completely to his will. It was yummy and delicious and made my mouth water when he was doing those dirty things to his beautiful brother. Most of the girls who read slash such as this would never actually do those things if they got the chance but fuck, I would! Can I be Loz now? Just for half an hour? Pleeeeease?

    And the ending was a kicker! Really terrific twist. Yazoo was such a bitch! Haha. Loved it, my friend. LOVED. IT.

    (Good thing we give each other such great reviews, huh? Makes up for all the ones we don't get...lol)
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on March 22, 2009
    Oh my,I think I need to turn my fan on again, I think I've melted.... You never disappoint me, and smut is good!
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