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Reviews for Snapshot

By : crystalwind
  • From wolfkin59 on June 22, 2010
    Lol. Some characters are really easy to hate.
    Poor Rude....
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  • From spooksies on June 12, 2010
    wow.....just wow......

    when will u have the next chappie out?


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  • From ANON - Rika on June 11, 2010
    I believe this is the first time I've written a review for you, but it doesn't mean I haven't enjoyed your work before this. I fell in love with your Reaper arc months ago. But with this latest entry I couldn't help but make an assumption of a certain blond Turk. He wouldn't have that sort of info unless Tseng allowed him to know, or he had close connections with Tanner, correct? I've got a feeling that he's had more appearances in this arc then I first imagined. Definitely keep it up, you've got me more interested then I thought possible in the jack ass.
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  • From ANON - NiereG on May 30, 2010
    Love this story, and the whole Reaper arc. However, have a question. You mentioned in a author note that Vincent Valentine has been in the coffin for 30 years. Yet, in 479 he meets Rude who goes to become a Turk in 481. Year of training and seven years as a Turk, makes 489. Means Vincent was last seen ten years ago. Wha' happened?
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  • From wolfkin59 on August 20, 2009
    Ok, I really like it so far, but...a couple things from this paragraph:

    Verdot’s speech didn’t last much longer. He told them about the three-month Deadline, after which they could not voluntarily quit. Implied in that was the caveat that they also couldn’t be allowed to leave the program alive. They would be given a three day grace period to come to their senses and return; after that, they would be disposed of. Verdot was not a man to mince words, and there was no doubt in anyone’s mind what he meant when he said “disposed of”.

    When you put that paragraph in during the second chapter here, keep in mind that the period should go BEFORE the end quotation marks. It should read "disposed of." Also, right before that, there should be a comma after 'said.' That's all I can think of for now, and I'll let you know if I catch any more mistakes when reading any of your other fics. I am looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Brijearin on May 16, 2009
    Once again it looks like you a well on your way to an epic tale. I love yuor writing style, and can not wait to read more about Rude. I loved the reaper and am sure this wll be just as great.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2009
    is vincent going to be rude's partner when he joins? because i think i remember something in 'the reaper' about him losing his partner... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
    ASOTA
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