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Reviews for Jail-What?

By : Lynsey
  • From HinekoAkahi on October 02, 2012
    UNF. I have absolutely no shame in admitting that I love this right down to hell and back again.
    For some reason I always like the guys topping that fandom declares are the ultimate bottoms - so this is really, really satisfying.

    So, uh... moreplzatsomepointmaybe? No pressure, but it would be nice ^^"

    Hineko
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  • From ANON - Ashérit on August 26, 2012
    Yes, Cloud is too young for my liking... But the story is so great, that finnally, it doesn't matter anymore ^^
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  • From Fizzyology on May 04, 2012
    Where have you BEEN all my life?! It's about damn time Cloud gets some dominating roles! This is the first time I've read a Sephiroth submissive fic that I actually like, let alone fell in love with~ I think I'm in love with you lol
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  • From tsuki0990 on August 31, 2011
    Holy crap... That was probably my fourth time reading this...and I -still- can't get enough of it! XD

    If you're planning on a sequel, I will squee my head off. :P
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  • From Blackwidina on December 02, 2010
    ;LSDFKGA;EWB;;OEOEOAQE[VBT!!!

    *takes a few moments to recover.

    This was...good god, I...can...can I keep you? I'll give you your own little dungeon, I mean closet, I mean office >_> where you can make me ficcage all day...I have cookies...
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  • From kordavamennemer on April 03, 2010
    I love you. Seriously, thanks so much for writing this amazing piece! I'm not too much into a submissive Sephiroth, but this was just too good to pass up. Plus, I enjoy me some bottoming Zack. Oh, and before I for get to mention! The ways Seph described Cloud were just hilarious. I mean, it was hot, but funny at the same time...as contradictory as that sounds, haha. Thanks again for this~
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  • From Sajirasama on November 08, 2009
    on the news tomorrow morning:

    " Girl dies of blood loss.
    After reading a story on the internet, parents found their daughter blleding through her nose. as fast as they went to the nearest hospital, she could not be saved. doctors say her heart rate was abnormally high, but she strangely died with a 'kinky grin on her face', says the main doctor."
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  • From sweetciel on July 21, 2009
    That has to be the sexiest Cloud that I've ever read!!! I bow before him. He should have his own harem of ravenous cock sluts.
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  • From Miasen on June 07, 2009
    Oh wow, this was frigging awesome! So, so hot.
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  • From ElfenDream on June 04, 2009
    holy batman in a fapping box. this was sooo effin hot.haha! so not what I expected. but so very satisfying. Lucky, lucky Cloud. I want his pets....

    *molests*
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  • From secretwishes527 on June 03, 2009
    This one is so awesome! It's rare to see Cloud in control, but it makes it perfect that he's in control yet faltering at times. Plus, it would seem unbelievable and weird if Sephiroth and Zack didn't have control outside of Seph's apartment. So I'm glad that Cloud knows his place, yet both Seph and Zack know theirs too 'wink' Totally loved it!
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  • From sephcounttheways on June 01, 2009
    OH MY GOD!!!!!! This was SOOOO not what I was expecting when I first started reading this one. Goddamn... ughgugh. Please know that this will be fapped over. And I'd basically do anything for a sequel.
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