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From ANON - Daniel on December 29, 2015
This.....was....exhilarating!! One of the best stories I've read furry-wise. And after reading a fanfic involving Irvine and Bahamut a while back, i was hoping you were still writing so i could see some Squall/Bahamut action. the cerberus chapter didnt hit me like the others. Nonetheless, it was great!! For the most part, this tops half of the fanfics i wrote on fanfiction.net So keep at it!! :)
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From WonderMint on July 14, 2015
First order of business: as to how I found this fic. I was going through the category archive and it was the next in line. However, I did immediately refer it to a furry friend that I surmised, correctly, would be over the moon for it. That's not something I ordinarily do. Most fanfics have one of a few ways they can go, and even the kinky sex is often fairly predictable (not that this is a terrible thing). One thing I've noticed in a lot of visual art I've seen in the furry space though, is that each piece feels very personal. Sometimes one gets the feeling that they've been presented with a map of an individual's entire sexual and romantic preference, a humbling experience for me. This is the first fanfic I've read that really recaptures the feeling of experiencing someone's trembling steps into their own confusing sexuality, and that's why I personally find it compelling. I imagine it's been passed around in certain specialty communities for a similar reason. It hits a lot of unique notes with an unusual amount of care and detail, so it's difficult for an open-minded reader not to respond to it, even if they don't share all of the author's or character's turn-ons and preferences. If the reader does happen to share any of those kinks, then it's pure crack.

In other words, you've written something unique and done a good job besides. Well done.

I feel the need to write this review because it's touched a personal note within me. Typically what I look for in a story is an emotional resonance between characters. It's this that makes the sex satisfying, and why fanfic in particular can be so potent. Even if the story isn't set up around it, there's a lot of existing characterization and emotional baggage ready to hand in the background, so even a quick one-shot can be very satisfying. �But wait,� you might say. �Squall is not romancing Cerberus with candlelit dinners. This is just down and dirty and very slimy sex.� And you are correct. But you're leaving out an important relationship dynamic: that of Squall's relationship with himself.

What really grabbed me at first, besides the excellent sensory details, staging, and pacing, was Squall's attitude. His initial �huh, I guess this is normal now� is both hilarious and touching. If I had written it it would have gone another way entirely, but his disoriented acceptance is both convenient and very... real. Having experience in my life with someone who has struggled to accept their own highly unusual paraphilia, the idea of �this turns me on, that fact disturbs me, but it's very important that I don't think very hard about it� is something I think a lot of people go through. As his encounters get less and less conventional and he takes more and more ownership of his actions, culminating in his persistent arousal after the Cerberus encounter, I appreciate that you spent more time allowing Squall to wonder what his actions say about his sexuality. It's a very small part of what you wrote, but I find it touching and genuine and very sexy.

It also makes me wonder about what makes him tick. For me, the unifying factor in each chapter is Squall's enjoyment of his partner's enjoyment. I am also gratified to see that sex is not being treated as only �valid� if certain parts are put together in certain ways. Sex is partners enjoying each other to the fullest, and every one of these encounters highlights that fact. It is interesting to see Squall's tastes evolve as time goes on, however, and I look forward to seeing if he begins to develop preferences. Things I wonder (but which will likely fall outside the scope of the project YOU have planned, so don't take this as a request necessarily): would he find Shiva so conventional (and female) as to be completely boring, or would her enthusiasm be enough? Are Leviathan and Quetzecoatl too animal or amorphous for him? Is a train not biological enough? If he has an encounter in which he is not coated completely in fluids does he get disappointed? And so on. I should also be interested to know if, once he begins to find his footing and accept whatever it is that compels him to do what he does, whether it's battle lust or an attraction to Guardian Forces in general or a furry fetish or a desperate desire for bukakke, he is then willing to summon his GF in order to pursue those desires directly, rather than leaving his encounters to fate. So many questions, I know, but these are the things that keep me up at night.

Regarding your craft. I think I knew everything I needed to know by reading Squall's journey through the Fire Cavern. The time you took to set up the sweat and grime and the gradual removal of his clothing really put me in his skin, and sensations like that are the best way to put me into the character's shoes so that I can feel their pleasure. The sexual encounters themselves are not rushed, they take exactly as much time as they should and linger in delicious ways on the awkwardness and confusion and filth. Again, it feels very genuine and that makes it that much sexier.

If I were to have a complaint about your writing style, it would be the excessive repetition of words and phrases. However, the fact that it's the most natural way for YOU to describe the action means I can easily look past it. I get annoyed sometimes when I feel an author is sitting with their nose in a thesaurus. It may be good practice for you to try to come up with another way to say something, but if it isn't in your own words, then you'll do best sticking with your current method and ignoring me. Your formula is successful and getting across your intentions and rousing people's blood, so I wouldn't worry about it very much. I thought I would mention it though as a bit of constructive criticism, but you shouldn't feel the need to change if it doesn't come naturally.

Thank you for taking the time to write this piece. I suspect it cuts a lot closer to your individual tastes than I myself am willing to reveal publicly. When one's preferences are unusual it can be much harder to put oneself out there for everyone to see. I think you can tell from the volume of the response you've gotten, however, that many of your readers appreciate it. So keep at it, and be true to your heart.

If you would like to correspond with me, feel free to send me an email (I think it shows you?), as I'm unlikely to find your responses anywhere else. Cheers.
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From PersonaGroup on November 24, 2014
The best of bests!!! Love it!!!
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From ANON - obsessivereader on January 15, 2013
In answer to why this has so many more hits than other stories in this section-- I feel the need to posit that no matter whether the reader is interested in GF porn, this is some of the best written porn in this section. Props to the writer! Keep having fun!
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From ANON - Kachii on December 21, 2012
best.story.ever. You're amazing, really. Regardless of all the smut- you write wonderfully. Now to the smut, you write it wonderfully! xD I cant wait to see more from you. But sadly the only two things I know are the FF8 and FF7 ones. I'd make a request, perhaps, if its not too much trouble. Write more? XD please. FF8, Ff7, ff12 would be glorious, too. I'd love to rant to you endlessly about the things I'd like to read from you, but- I feel like I'd take up too much of your time and be a pain in the butt. lol
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From ANON - Joshua Graham on April 05, 2012
Will there be any further updates to this one?
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From ANON - dragon on August 17, 2011
ok love this story. i hope u will continue it soon. maybe have all the Guardian Forces he has all take turns on him in one chapter or having two Guardian Forces take turns on him. hope u update soon.
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From ANON - Rain_Kira on May 16, 2011
Well I think this story has sufficiently fulfilled most of my FFVIII fantasies, I say most since there's still quite a few GFs left XD, but seriously who doesn't love seeing Squall get fucked by ginormous GFs. Though now whenever I play any FF game and I see a summon all I can think about is Squall being gang banged which I'm sure was not what the creator had in mind. Well I hope you continue writing more GF and Squall sex since you're so awesome.......(yes I am shamelessly kissing up to you in hopes of getting more chapters xD).Btw Squall being fucked into the ground by Bahamut would be the really great or you know a BahamutxSquallxIfrit sandwich would be really really great too hehe
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From ANON - Appreciative reader on March 12, 2011
You write some pretty beautiful smut there, buddy. I like your BOF stories as well.
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From nivell on February 03, 2011
Squall is such a GF slut, isn't he! Love the scene where the first GF was rimming his ass. Nice job and hope to see more!
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From sesshyfreak on January 24, 2011
oh fucking hot. i've gotten into anthro quite a bit in the last few years, and honestly, i've never really been a huge fan of Squall's character overall, but GOD that was so damn amazing. i'll be looking out for updates and new stories from you!
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From ANON - muny on December 31, 2010
DAMN!!! that was hot. though im alittle disappointed that squall couldnt take the big doggy dick. maybe next time? Keep up the good work
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From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2010
Oh my God. Continue this. Now.
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From ANON - Lightning on October 14, 2010
Yes you're right GF porn is in great demand..or not
It is fasnating and I love your way of writing it
also very very hot I don't blame Squall a bit who wouldn't get hot and bothered by all the muscles?

I'll check back but tell me do you intend to do anymore?
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From Shadowknight12 on September 26, 2010
This story is just amazing in levels that cannot be described with words. Everything, absolutely everything about this story is magnificent. The extremely detailed sex is just perfect, sentence after sentence, and Ifrit's chapter remains my favorite to this day. Squall is just right in this story. Not an emo wimp, not a cold douchebag. The prose is simply fantastic, hooking you right from the start. There's absolutely nothing to criticise from this story (except, perhaps, the slow update speed. But it's actually extremely minor when you weigh it with the sheer excellence you deliver with every chapter).

I am eagerly awaiting the next instalment!
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