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By : SilverRain
  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2009
    That whole thing with him being the one to grab Cloud from the destruction? That is hardcore awesome.
    Cloud's simple happiness is so endearing! I also love the way Sephiroth's fantasies are adding some porn to the plot. xD
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  • From sephcounttheways on July 19, 2009
    Hoorrraaay another chapter! I loved how Sephiroth noticed every little thing about Cloud's reaction to his collar, and how grateful Cloud is for the name. I also like how he found himself a little lamp for downstairs, and how he keeps the door open a crack, dawwww! And Seph rubbing one out was hella hot.

    MAOR! As soon as you can birth it, post it. Love this so much.
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  • From satterb on July 17, 2009
    I'm confused as to what's on the name tag. From what I could tell, it was not the name Cloud. Correct me if I'm wrong. I'm loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Asphyxiate.Me.Baby. on July 17, 2009
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    That was the cutest thing I've ever read.
    EVAR.

    There are just no words.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2009
    So if Cloud's eyes are the color of the sky on earth, what color is the sky on the planet they're on now?
    Cloud being scared of the dark is so cute, I love it.
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  • From TypeZero on July 16, 2009
    I like this story, it's well written and the plot is good. Keep writing please! (sorry, I suck at reviews)
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  • From sephcounttheways on July 16, 2009
    YAY MORE! That's so cute that he got Cloud a collar! I can't wait to see Cloud's reaction to it, and to his new name. :D Goddamnit, I love this story!
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  • From ANON - blueesky200 on July 16, 2009
    It's good. Enjoyable. Some of the grammar and sentences need to be checked over a couple of more times, but overall, I like it. Will you be showing more of when Cloud and Sephiroth are together?
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  • From sephcounttheways on July 14, 2009
    Another chapter! I enjoyed this one just as much as the others, but I know the feeling of putting out a supposedly sucky chapter - but this definitely did not suck for the reader!! So cute, and I can't wait to see what else happens in Seph's mansion-0-love!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2009
    Cloud is so damn cute, especially with such an innocently jaded outlook. I think that was a great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Havokgrl on July 13, 2009
    I like this story! Its very good, I like how you are writing it. I cant wait for more chapters.
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  • From satterb on July 13, 2009
    Uhhh! Don't say it sucked. This was my favorite so far. Thanks for updating, I will be looking forward to more of this story.
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  • From TemenNiGru on July 13, 2009
    This chapter (and the others too) did most definitely NOT suck! I love the concept, and I think the way you're writing Cloud and Seph is great :) It's nice to see how the 'events' :P in chapter 1 have developed, too, and I absolutely adored Cloud falling asleep and having Seph put him to bed!!!!
    I look forwards to reading more :)
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  • From sephcounttheways on July 11, 2009
    Ohhh I love how grossed out Sephiroth is at Cloud, and how LITTLE Cloud is compared to him! haha! What a cute visual. And I like how Zack is so caring of him... daww. Sad that he and Aerith can't have any little wierd babies, though.

    Moar is in order. It is in order RIGHT NAO!
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  • From Aini on July 10, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this fiction. It's well written, easy to understand, yet very descriptive on top of that. Excellent job so far. :) I look forward to your next update. ^_^
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