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Reviews for Golden Lotus (Chapter 4 up!)

By : schwaerze
  • From ANON - anonanon on April 18, 2011
    Mmm that was absolutely fantastic! Thank you for posting this story and sharing it here, please update once more when you have the inspiration and opportunity.
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  • From RJaneyP on January 10, 2011
    A very good example of sexy writing.... and most worthy mastabatory litature. It makes one want to be alone by theirselves to just to read and appreciate the full experience of this lovely "tail" LOL G
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  • From fyrbyrd074 on September 05, 2009
    Oh yeah that was good. And we updated on the same day! Want to read more. Oh and I have two Toshiba laptops, one is older and red, the other is silver, can you guess their names? I still use both.
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  • From ANON - Rose on August 14, 2009
    *purrrrrrrrs* damn this is hot.. love Seph/Yaz you two do them perfectly.
    *secretly hoping for some Tseng/Yaz too*
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  • From ANON - miau. on August 03, 2009
    DAMN IT, WHEN DOES IT GET TO BUSINESS???? NO MORE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on August 03, 2009
    Oh my and I've let this gem get passed me too. Sorry, you know I'd love anything with Yaz in it. And you know that I definitely need...want more.
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  • From Infek on July 30, 2009
    Very titillating chapter. ^_^ But I have to admit I don't quite understand Yazoo's eagerness when it comes to Sephiroth, since in the previous two chapters there had been a certain... reluctance about Yazoo when he remembered his brother. Or maybe I'm just reading it wrong.

    So you are in fact a writer's duo? So who does what? I'm curious now.
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  • From Infek on July 26, 2009
    I really pity Yazoo in your story. You don't describe his emotional turmoils directly but by describing his living-situation and his meetings with others which is a really nice idea.

    Thank you for the update!
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  • From Rina76 on July 24, 2009
    Wow, you guys work /very/ well together, I must say! I can see you bouncing off each other's ideas and suggestions here, clearly having much fun with it too! And that makes it immensely fun to read. ^__^ I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would. Yazoo working in a whore house could have been very depressing (the whole, 'let's torture/rape Yazoo and make him suffer painfully for his beauty' routine) but I am glad you are not doing that here. He lives in a beautiful place (not filthy squalor), he is respected and well looked after, it seems, and has supportive friends in the business (and one very supportive bodyguard as well! XD) Despite the setting and subject matter, this story is quite playful and upbeat and I must say, I am just /loving/ the entire interaction between Tseng and Yazoo; what they are each thinking, their involuntary reponses to each other's presence and touch. That's utterly delightful to me! Poor Tseng. He is completely lost. Though, to resist such temptation...what a gentleman. *sigh* Schwaerze, you write him impeccably! You've captured Rufus' (obnoxiously smug) personality perfectly too. Prick. lol

    Chephren, I enjoy your version of Yazoo. It's always interesting to get another writer's perspective on him and you have made him in IC without being too cold, cruel and distant as he could have been in such a situation. You haven't made him defeated or dead inside, being used for his body every day. It's like he's accepted his deal in life and is trying to make the best of it and find enjoyment and simple pleasures where he can. I also like that he's friendly to the other workers, even though they are jealous of/in love with him (understandably, too!).

    Hehe, love reading about the other 'girls' who are there too, though I thought Reno would have been one of them. C'mon, he's /born/ to be a whore! XD

    Enjoyed reading about Genesis' room too. I hope we get to see him use some of his toys... ;)

    Great job, you guys, and I look forward to more!

    (And at least now Yazoo has a valid reason for screwing every man in sight lol)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2009
    Please update ASAP! It's a lovely story!
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  • From ANON - GeeSpot on July 24, 2009
    Hot Stuff, write moooooooore please! G
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  • From LoreaKrisaga on July 22, 2009
    I ended up getting goosebumps at this. I can't wait to read more from you.
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  • From Infek on July 21, 2009
    I'm interested in reading much, much more! The tone of your story is really appealing to me, and your writing-style seems to improve with each story you write... (This is not meant insulting in any way, BTW.)

    You have attention to detail without it becoming too much and a sense of drama that I love.

    Looking forward to reading more from you!
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