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By : lielielie
  • From manda1028 on October 07, 2011
    OMG!!!!!!!!!! please continue this story it is amazing so far :)
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  • From taysmiles on March 04, 2010
    Wow! This is an increasingly amazing story, I must say.
    I truly hope you continue with this, as I'll be waiting for an update.
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  • From nekogirl1 on November 11, 2009
    Wow, I love this story. Sucha different plot and its amazing how you took and wrote the characters in your own way. Can't wait to see more,lookign forward to Sephiroth's next move!
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  • From angeldove21 on September 21, 2009
    It's okay with the time skips sometimes it's vital to the story to use them. Don't doubt yourself so much. I write randomly as well. The story is flowing so beautifully. I hope you update soon. Until next time.

    Dove
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on September 21, 2009
    OOOOOOH! This is getting SO good! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Divanora on September 21, 2009
    Ahh, is it really Cloud's father or was it Seph? Totally seems like it would be more Seph. But his father would be a neat plot twist...can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Slayne on September 17, 2009
    Ah wow, read all of this and i'm completely hooked!
    Poor Seifer, even though he was a potential rapist, I still love him! D:
    I wonder what happened? Suicide maybe? Cause I know Zack isn't a murderer.
    And what about Sephiroth? owo;;;

    Poor Cloud, everyone is after his ass.

    Anyway!
    Please Make more! x]
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  • From rocquell on September 15, 2009
    Awesome so far, I really like your story :D
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on September 13, 2009
    omg please please please don't let Seifer be dead, please let it be yuffie over dramatising it.
    love the stalker Sephiroth idea
    poor Cloud... his sick ma and being the hottest peice of virgin ass in town
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  • From angeldove21 on September 12, 2009
    I didn't think it had too much dialogue. It's the right about for what you're doing with the chapter. Great chapter great story. I loved Zack and how you have them friends but it's obvious that they both want to be more. Great job with that.
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  • From infiniteDirge on September 11, 2009
    Wicked boss fic! Can't wait for more!
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on September 07, 2009
    I love it! Keep going!
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  • From angeldove21 on September 05, 2009
    I love this story. Zack is soooooo cooooool. Nice descriptions. Please update soon. I'm so addicted
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