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By : Cynthia

From ANON - Wintersheart66 on October 03, 2013
WOW! You really had me scared there for a moment, I looked to reread this brilliant story on Fanfiction, but, even though I am SURE I had favorited and followed it, I could not find it and could not remember the title. I read any and all correspondences I had available and was finally rewarded when your story graced the top of a list of recommendations that I gave to another reader. Still I new the story was more than 26 chapters, and was freaking out because the lack of Seph asking Cloud if the special boots had the function of coming alive and kicking Cloud in the face, would have seriously ruined my day. BUT here it is and here you are and YAYYYYY! Are they doing this inappropriate witch hunt in alphabetical order by story or what? because a LOT of Blonde Ambition by Sephcounttheways seems more explicit than this story. And It is all still there so far. I better get to copying and pasting so I don't lose that story either! I will definitely be back to read some of your other stories on this site as well!
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From Dreamfool on September 19, 2011
You have no idea how happy I am to see this updated. When I noticed the update the smile on my face was so uncontrollable that I started to laugh with joy. That is a rare occurance for me. Of course I don't know what that says about me if a yaoi fanfic update can make me THAT happy.
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From Dreamfool on July 18, 2010
Just finished reading this story and it looks like it's been awhile since you updated but I'll review anyway. Though I love all of your works that I've read so far I was a little cautious with this one. I'm not a fan of doomsday stuff, scares me too much but I decided to give it a try. I was pleasantly surprised. Like all your stories it's well thought out and the characters a very well developed. No one couple is the main couple per say. They all have equal "screen time" so each of them is vital. I was so caught up in their lives (even the het couples) that when I got to the end it took me a little while to compute that there wasn't a next chapter. I'm sort of sad that it hasn't been updated in awhile. I really want to know what happens.

Zack is so Zack that I fell in love with him all over again. The eye patch and scar just makes him even hotter. Plus that whole part were Zack refuses to make love to Aerith and his reason is so funny I nearly wet myself. Especially how Genesis handles it. Speaking of "Genny" I love how you didn't change his past. It really made him who he is in this story and I love it. I�m not a big fan of Angeal because I believe that if he had been able to hold it together a little better he probably could have talked some since into Genesis. Then Genesis wouldn�t have gone and really screwed things up with Sephiroth. When I read your version and realized that it�s very possible it could have been even worse than what happened in CC so I actually like Angeal better now. It was a little strange to see them paired together as I see them as brothers but you did it so well it was actually cute.

I really like your version of Sephiroth. He�s as close to cannon as possible but a little more fun and sane. he�s still a little antisocial and still a really good leader. He and Cloud are really cute together. Cloud is also really close to cannon and to me that is a very big plus. I hate it when people make him a weak little �girly man�. Tifa and Reno are an unusual pairing but they are really cute and the way you right them they really fit. Tifa is the only woman that could keep that boy in line. Yuffie and Tseng are also cute, not my favorite, but I look forward to see how their relationship progresses.

Your back story for this is unusual. The fact that Niblehiem did not happen is not unique but that Cloud wasn�t even a part of it is, at least to me. It�s nice to see that Vincent was still the one who beat Deep Ground and Omega, but that is where I found the one flaw to your story. If I remember correctly Deep Ground only went after Omega because Hojo was controlling Wies so if Hojo is alive and well I don�t think they would try to call forth Omega. That�s just me though. It�s cute that Vincent and Reeve got together.

I really hope you update this story. I think it�s ridiculous that you don�t have more reviews.

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From Pookyilicous on January 20, 2010
This story is amazing :)

I am not a fan of gay relationships involving these characters but from the first paragraph I was hooked. Such an amazing writer with your talents should be rewarded.

THank you for such an amazing piece, Will there be more?

Pooky xxx
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From SilverRain on December 23, 2009
Very much loving this! ^_^ Hope you update soon!
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From hitsuni on December 13, 2009

I really don't know what else to say...

I LOVE YOU!!!

thank you for updating!!
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From Algaliarept on December 08, 2009

I know im not the only one who loves the idea of Sephy in jail...restrained...otherwise unable to resist haha

You have such a way with this story. You think it starts to level off and *BAM* new characters, new developments, and more citrus. I honestly don't know how you do it!

Love the developments with Vincent and I really liked the "merger" idea between him and Chaos. I like to think of them more as a team than clashing minds. The concept of them both bleeding into one another and having influence on the others character opens so many proverbial plot doors and plausible OOC moments.

Very interested to see what this net diver is going to dig up, I bet its going to be good *twinkle*. Can't wait for the next installment!
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From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2009
yay for more updates :D!! Loved em

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From SilverRain on November 20, 2009
Absolutely love this! I'm gonna keep readin now. It was sad to see that chopper go down though... Boohoo. Very well written! Much love!
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From Algaliarept on October 29, 2009
*swoon* This is FABULOUS! You have an amazing talent and I am SOOOOO happy you decided to share it with us!!

This plot line is super original and I love the feeling of desperation you have been able to lend to it. Its so believable, especially for the FFverse. I don't want to ramble on (because I so could) but I do want to say I adore Zack's eye patch and cannot WAIT for Cloud to bust out his wings *or wing to match Seph ;)*

Keep it up and Im off to read your other works while I hold back my anticipation!

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From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2009
*gasp* what will happen now =O....CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT!!!! LOVE THIS STORY
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From Dagreatonion on October 15, 2009
Oh my god! This story is so awesome I had to register an account just to review! I love how detailed the romantic elements are between the couples and how steamy the love scenarios are w/out becaming repetitive. Although, the girls seem to not be very experienced and never seem to give oral ora anal. If I was working with limited birthcontrol, I'd definitely explore my options. This setting is a really exciting one also. It really leaves me wondering how humanity is going to be able to win against the adapting Weapons. I also noticed that the artic base seems to encounter more Weapons than Cosmo Canyon. The canyon hasn't even seen an Alpha type yet. Btw, I was thrilled to see Yuffie back in the last chapter! I was afraid her and Tseng were gonna fade away. I would love to see more of her. She's a personal favorite. Part of her hesitance to do anything with her husband could be because she doesn't want to risk being put on the sideline for any reason.
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From sampough on October 11, 2009
4 reviews?!!! That's IT?!!?? -Please- tell me that this story is getting lots and lotsa love somewhere else... 4 reviews is an OUTRAGE.
When I started reading, I just COULD.NOT.STOP until I got through it all. I physically could not make myself go to sleep at a normal hour... I had to KEEEEP REEEEADING.
A stressful universe for sure, but there's nothin' like a 'we all could die tomorrow' setting to get people lovin' one another.
(Is poor Rude going to be left out?) ;)
I hope this is as fun to write as it is to read. 3 thumbs up. (?)
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From wynterstormcrow on October 01, 2009
HA! I can leave review now! YAY for Chaos porn! ROFLMFAO@ Zack's idea for getting the WEAPON out of there! *waits patiently for next chapter*
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From hitsuni on September 27, 2009
I'm so so so glad that Chaos and Vincent is awake!! I've waited for it for so long!
Hope you update really soon!!
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